@redaladerā replied to your post:
i absolutely LOVED the show but i would love it if you could expand on your tags because I want to know more about what worked better in the books (the jaskier plot kinda makes me sad im ngl i wish he hadnt written the song now)
No problem, Iām happy to expand some! Under the cut, because it got really long. There should be no book spoilers past what Netflix has already covered, just missing scenes.
So with Jaskier, Iāve just checked and I wasnāt totally accurate in my tags. He does still write a ballad after that adventure, but:
ā[...] Do you know what? Iām going to tell you something.ā He stopped playing, hugged the lute like a child and grew sad. āI don't think Iāll mention the elves and the difficulties they've got to struggle with, in the ballad. There'd be no shortage of scum wanting to go into the mountainsā¦Why hasten theāā The troubadour grew silent.
āGo on, finish,ā said Torque bitterly. āYou wanted to say: hasten what can't be avoided. The inevitable.ā
Writing that ballad will destroy the safety of the elves living there, and for Jaskier itās just another song. Heās already a popular bard at this point, itās not like itās going to make a big difference to him. Geralt still has his ideas about how the elves should give up and fit in with society (which I have my issues with, but do think is primarily to do with his own desire for normality), but after theyāre freed they donāt want any harm to come to the elves. And then you look at Toss A Coin To Your WitcherĀ and the elves are aĀ āpestā and Geralt is aĀ āChampionā andĀ āfriend of humanityā for defeating them, which actually misses the point entirely. The elves are vilified, where in the short story theyāre pitied.
The first time that Geralt and Ciri interact is after Ciri, age ten, runs away from home because Calanthe is setting up an arranged marriage for her. This is the point at which she ends up in Brokilon forest and meets Geralt, and they bond during the few days they spend together. Thereās a lot of really delightful moments:
āOoow...ā the little girl yelped as she took a step.
āWhatās the matter?ā
āIāve done something... To my leg.ā
āWait, Braenn! Come here, scamp, Iāll carry you pick-a-back.ā
āThere was once... a cat,ā he began.Ā āAn ordinary tabby mouser. And one day that cat went off, all by itself, on a long journey to a terrible, dark forest. He walked... And he walked... And he walked...ā
āDonāt think,ā Ciri mumbled, cuddling up to him,Ā āthat Iāll fall asleep before he gets there.ā
āAre you mocking me?ā
āUh-huh.ā
āKnow what? I canāt stand you.ā
āThatās dreadful. Ciri, youāve stabbed me in the very heart.ā
āI know,ā she nodded gravely, sniffing, and then clung tightly to him.
Eventually, they escape and Geralt leaves Ciri with Mousesack. This is the point at which Mousesack attempts to encourage Geralt to follow his destiny, for Ciriās sake as well as his own.
āHow do you know Ciri would want to go with me? Because of some old prophecies?ā
āNo,ā Mousesack said gravely.Ā āBecause she only fell asleep after you cuddled her. Because she mutters your name and searches for your hand in her sleep.ā
Geralt still chooses to leave at this point, but this means that when they meet again outside Yurgaās hut itās a reunion, rather than the first time. Geralt has been searching for Ciri since he heard of the fall of Cintra, and Ciri, after being left all alone in the world, has found someone she knows she can rely on.
āYou found me! Oh, Geralt! I was waiting all the time! For so very long... Weāll be together now, wonāt we? Now weāll be together, wonāt we? Say it, Geralt! Forever! Say it!ā
āForever, Ciri.ā
āItās like they said! Geralt! Itās like they said! Am I your destiny? Say it! Am I your destiny?ā
[...]
āYouāre more than that, Ciri. Much more.ā
Now obviously in the series itās difficult to fit this in with the rest of Ciriās storyline as weāre starting with the Fall of Cintra, but I would have been a lot happier with Ciri being introduced a few episodes in and spreading her backstory out over a longer period. Iāve seen people saying they watched the end of Something MoreĀ and thought Geralt and Ciri were meant to marry each other (given Pavetta and Duny), and I think that says a lot about how little development was given to their relationship.
I donāt think I mentioned this in the tags, but Geralt and Yenneferās first meeting in the books is when sheās incredibly hung over, craving apple juice, and in the bed of her current boyfriend.Ā
The stairs led to a bedroom, the floor of which was covered in an enormous, shaggy animal skin. A white shirt with lace cuffs, and umpteen white roses, lay on the skin. And a black stocking.
The other stocking hung from one of the four engraved posts which supported the domed canopy over the bed. [...]
Geralt cleared his throat loudly, looking at the abundant black locks visible from under the eiderdown. The eiderdown moved and moaned. Geralt cleared his throat even louder.
āBeau?ā the abundance of black locks asked indistinctly. āHave you brought the juice?ā
Itās a meet ugly in the extreme, and I donāt understand why it was replaced by the dub-con magical orgy scene. Maybe they wanted a bit more nudity or something, I donāt know.
After that, weāve got Geralt asking for help, the mind control, the trip to prison, and eventually we get to the wish. In the series, Yennefer doesnāt hear what Geralt wished, and itās portrayed as being some kind of love spell, which throws in the usual consent issues. In the books, we still donāt know the exact wording of Geraltās wish, but thereās a big clue thrown in.
āIt's not that simple,ā the priest pondered. āBut ifā¦If he expressed the right wishā¦If he somehow tied his fate to the fateā¦No, I don't think it would occur to him. And it's probably better that it doesn't.ā
Yennefer hears exactly what Geralt wishes, and isnāt bothered by it. Her biggest concern is that the wholeĀ ātying their fates togetherā thing will disadvantage him:
āYour wish,ā she whispered, her lips very near his ear. āI don't know whether such a wish can ever be fulfilled. I don't know whether there's such a Force in Nature that could fulfill such a wish. But if there is, then you've condemned yourself. Condemned yourself to me.ā
In both the books and the series we donāt see them interacting between fighting the djinn and the dragon hunt. However the relationship during that time is portrayed differently in both. In the series it seems like a number of one night stands over the years, whereas in the books we know Geralt and Yennefer lived in Vengerberg together for around a year (until Geralt freaked out and ran off in the middle of the night, which is where the antagonism comes in when they meet again).
When the breakup comes around, Yennefer is trying to choose between Istredd, who adores her, but who she feels nothing for, and Geralt, who she loves but who canāt convince her that he loves her back (because heās hiding behind his so-called lack of emotions). For most of the story she plans to leave Istredd and choose Geralt, until she confronts him about his feelings and her own insecurities. The short stories play with fairy tales a lot, and Sapkowski usesĀ The Snow QueenĀ as a metaphor here:
āIām travelling with you, Yen, because the harness of my sleigh got entangled, caught up in your runners. And a blizzard is all around me. And a frost. Itās cold.ā
āWarmth would melt the shard of ice in you, the shard I stabbed you with,ā she whispered.Ā āThen the spell would be broken and you would see me as I really am.ā
āThen lash your white horses, Yen. May they race north, where a thaw never sets in. I want to get to your ice castle as quickly as I can.ā
āThat castle doesnāt exist,ā Yennefer said, her mouth twitching. She grimaced.Ā āItās a symbol. And our sleigh ride is the pursuit of a dream which is unattainable. For I, the Elf Queen, desire warmth. That is my secret. Which is why, every year, my sleigh carries me amidst a blizzard through some little town and every year someone dazzled by my spell gets their harness caught in my runners. Every year. Every year someone new. Endlessly. Because the warmth I desire at the same time blights the spell, blights the magic and the charm. My sweetheart, stabbed with that little icy star, suddenly becomes an ordinary nobody. And I become, in his thawed out eyes, no better than all the other... mortal women...ā
Yennefer is afraid that heāll grow tired of her, or that sheāll grow tired of him. She wants more out of the relationship emotionally, but is afraid it will ruin what they already have. Geralt thinks theyāre happy as they are, so why do things need to change? But what he wants isnāt enough for her, and what she wants is too much for him, so in the end the relationship falls apart and she leaves town, refusing to choose either man.
Ā Despite my complaining about it here, I really do think the Netflix series did very well. I enjoy it a lot, but there are things that I find frustrating. On the other hand, there are things I think the Netflix series does better - thereās no depiction of Sodden Hill in the books and I think that was fantastically done, and they cut some uncomfortable scenes that donāt make a difference plot-wise which I really appreciate. Itās more that it gets frustrating when a showrunner regularly insists that theyāre being incredibly accurate to the books and they just... arenāt.













