#pidw draft

𝙀𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙞𝙣 𝙗𝙤𝙡𝙙 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙖𝙠𝙚𝙣 𝙙𝙞𝙧𝙚𝙘𝙩𝙡𝙮 𝙛𝙧𝙤𝙢 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙣𝙚𝙬 𝙚𝙭𝙩𝙧𝙖 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙥𝙩𝙚𝙧 𝙣𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙡.

In the extra, it says the system gave Shen a “gift.” 𝙎𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙌𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙦𝙞𝙪 𝙖𝙨𝙠𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙞𝙢𝙞𝙙𝙡𝙮: — 𝙄𝙛 𝙄 𝙝𝙚𝙡𝙥 𝙮𝙤𝙪, 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙜𝙞𝙫𝙚 𝙢𝙚 𝙞𝙣 𝙧𝙚𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙣? 𝙎𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙢: “𝙄𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙖𝙧𝙚 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙤 𝙝𝙚𝙡𝙥, 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙢 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙜𝙧𝙖𝙣𝙩 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙖 ‘𝘿𝙚𝙨𝙘𝙧𝙞𝙥𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙂𝙞𝙛𝙩 𝙋𝙖𝙘𝙠’ 𝙩𝙤 𝙚𝙭𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙮 𝙗𝙚𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙢’𝙨 𝙤𝙧𝙞𝙜𝙞𝙣!”

That was when it became clear where everything came from. If the original PIDW (Bingzu) had merely been one of Shang’s drafts, the system would not have needed to give a “gift,” nor would Shen have needed to spend points to summarize all of that information, because he could have simply asked Shang directly.

It says:

𝘼 𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮, 𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮 𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙞𝙢𝙚 𝙖𝙜𝙤, 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙚𝙭𝙞𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙙 𝙖 𝙛𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙩𝙝 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙.

𝙏𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙛𝙞𝙧𝙨𝙩 𝙇𝙪𝙤 𝘽𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙝𝙚 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙗𝙤𝙧𝙣.

𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙖 𝙛𝙡𝙖𝙢𝙚 𝙗𝙪𝙧𝙣𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙞𝙩𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛 𝙤𝙪𝙩, 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙 𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙘𝙝𝙚𝙙 𝙞𝙩𝙨 𝙚𝙣𝙙 𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙜𝙤.

If it were only one of Shang’s “drafts,” the world would not have come to an end. That means the original PIDW world was written by someone else.

Every story is written by someone. On top of that, everyone there possesses powers; there is no way a world could simply appear out of nowhere and sustain someone as powerful as Bingzun. A world cannot generate that kind of “energy” on its own, so the original PIDW story must have been another novel written by somebody else.

𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙤𝙧𝙞𝙜𝙞𝙣𝙖𝙡 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙 𝙤𝙛 “𝙇𝙪𝙤 𝘽𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙝𝙚” (𝘽𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙯𝙪𝙣), 𝙖 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙 𝙤𝙛 𝙚𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙣𝙖𝙡 𝙨𝙤𝙡𝙞𝙩𝙪𝙙𝙚 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙥𝙚𝙧𝙥𝙚𝙩𝙪𝙖𝙡 𝙤𝙗𝙡𝙞𝙫𝙞𝙤𝙣. 𝙃𝙚 𝙝𝙞𝙢𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛 𝙙𝙧𝙤𝙬𝙣𝙚𝙙 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙛𝙖𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙚𝙖 𝙤𝙛 𝙡𝙖𝙫𝙖, 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙪𝙣𝙩𝙞𝙡 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙙𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙝, 𝙣𝙤 𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙚𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙙 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙝𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙩.

It says “the original world,” not “the draft world” or anything similar, so this confirms that the story behind PIDW (Bingzu) truly existed and was not one of Shang’s drafts.

𝙇𝙪𝙤 𝘽𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙝𝙚 𝙡𝙞𝙫𝙚𝙙 𝙖𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙩𝙚𝙣𝙨 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙨𝙖𝙣𝙙𝙨 𝙤𝙛 𝙮𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙨. 𝙃𝙚 𝙡𝙞𝙫𝙚𝙙 𝙨𝙤 𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙝𝙚 𝙡𝙤𝙨𝙩 𝙖𝙡𝙡 𝙙𝙚𝙨𝙞𝙧𝙚 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙬 𝙬𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙮 𝙤𝙛 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙤𝙬𝙣 𝙚𝙭𝙞𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙚.

𝙃𝙞𝙨 𝙛𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙣𝙤 𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙜𝙚𝙧 𝙗𝙚 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙜𝙚𝙙. 𝙀𝙫𝙚𝙣 𝙞𝙛 𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙧𝙚𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙣𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙖𝙨𝙩, 𝙞𝙩 𝙬𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙤𝙣𝙡𝙮 𝙘𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙖 𝙣𝙚𝙬 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙩 𝙖𝙡𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙨𝙚 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙩𝙞𝙢𝙚𝙡𝙞𝙣𝙚.

𝘽𝙪𝙩 𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙩𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙬𝙞𝙨𝙝𝙚𝙙 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙖 𝙙𝙞𝙛𝙛𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙣𝙩 𝙚𝙣𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜.

This is where the important part begins: “His fate could no longer be changed.” That means the possibility of Shang’s PIDW being a “final version” of Bingzun’s story does not exist.

“Even if someone returned to the past, it would only create A NEW world.” This proves that there are not only three worlds: the modern world, PIDW, and SVSSS.

There is another one: the fourth world, the world of “Luo Binghe,” which we will now call Bingzun.

A draft could never create a fourth world. Not to mention that it makes no sense for one world to exist through a draft and then for another world to emerge later from the finalized version of that draft.

𝙏𝙝𝙪𝙨, 𝙝𝙚 𝙩𝙧𝙖𝙣𝙨𝙛𝙤𝙧𝙢𝙚𝙙 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙤𝙬𝙣 𝙗𝙤𝙙𝙮 𝙞𝙣𝙩𝙤 𝙖 𝙛𝙪𝙧𝙣𝙖𝙘𝙚 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙤𝙬𝙣 𝙨𝙤𝙪𝙡 𝙞𝙣𝙩𝙤 𝙛𝙪𝙚𝙡. 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙛𝙡𝙖𝙢𝙚𝙨 𝙤𝙛 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙨𝙥𝙞𝙧𝙞𝙩, 𝙝𝙚 𝙛𝙤𝙧𝙜𝙚𝙙 𝙖 𝙜𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙥 𝙤𝙛 “𝙨𝙥𝙞𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙨.”

𝙏𝙝𝙚𝙨𝙚 𝙨𝙥𝙞𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙨 𝙘𝙖𝙧𝙧𝙞𝙚𝙙 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙛𝙞𝙣𝙖𝙡 𝙬𝙞𝙨𝙝𝙚𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙙𝙚𝙥𝙖𝙧𝙩𝙚𝙙 𝙞𝙣 𝙨𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙘𝙝 𝙤𝙛 𝙖 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙘𝙚 𝙩𝙤 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙜𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙞𝙧 𝙙𝙚𝙨𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙮.

This is where I wanted to scream and tell everyone that Bingzun is already dead and no longer exists, because I constantly see comments and edits claiming Bingzun is the system, when in reality the system is only a “fragment” of him. Not to mention there is not just one system, but many; these spirits are the “systems.”

𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙩 𝙇𝙪𝙤 𝘽𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙝𝙚 𝙗𝙪𝙧𝙣𝙚𝙙 𝙗𝙚𝙣𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙝 𝙖 𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙤𝙛 𝙢𝙚𝙩𝙚𝙤𝙧𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙨𝙪𝙢𝙚𝙙 𝙗𝙮 𝙛𝙡𝙖𝙢𝙚𝙨, 𝙫𝙖𝙣𝙞𝙨𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙛𝙤𝙧𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧.

This is where the fourth world was destroyed; it no longer exists. And if that world no longer exists, then Bingzun no longer exists either, because the “Luo Binghes” are the very source of their worlds. That is why it makes no sense for Bingzun to still be alive and acting as a system.

If you think about it, when PIDW’s Luo Bingge traveled into the BL version of his world, the PIDW world was not destroyed.

That means even if Bingzun had become a system and left his original world, his world still would not have been destroyed. So yes, Bingzun is dead.

Another thing is that in the Bingmei vs. Bingge extras, Shen Yuan says something that fits perfectly here. He says he does not know what kind of catastrophe might occur if Bingge were killed by Bingmei, because Bingge is the “original,” and if he dies, the world might be destroyed or Bingmei himself might disappear.

That makes sense, but Bingmei would not disappear, nor would the SVSSS world cease to exist if Bingge died. Only Bingge himself would disappear, and the PIDW world would cease to exist.

Because Bingzun died. He is the original Luo Binghe, and even though these worlds (PIDW/SVSSS) were created after his death, the worlds remain intact because each one possesses its own Luo Binghe.

𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙥𝙞𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙨 𝙬𝙖𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙩𝙡𝙚𝙨𝙨 𝙩𝙞𝙢𝙚𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙨𝙥𝙖𝙘𝙚𝙨, 𝙨𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙘𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙘𝙖𝙥𝙖𝙗𝙡𝙚 𝙤𝙛 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙜𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙚𝙣𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜, 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙨𝙚𝙣𝙩 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙥𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙤𝙣 𝙩𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙤𝙞𝙣𝙩 𝙤𝙛 𝙇𝙪𝙤 𝘽𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙝𝙚’𝙨 𝙗𝙞𝙧𝙩𝙝.

Okay, this is where they infiltrate the modern world: the systems, not Bingzun, okay?

“They sent that person to the point of Luo Binghe’s birth.” Further below (almost at the end), I explain that Shen is basically a non-playable player, because he transmigrated after Luo Binghe had already been born and at a point where he already possessed impure thoughts.

𝙄𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙤𝙙𝙚𝙧𝙣 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙, 𝙨𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙞𝙧 𝙣𝙚𝙬 𝙝𝙤𝙨𝙩𝙨 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙢𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙦𝙪𝙞𝙘𝙠𝙡𝙮 𝙪𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙩𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙞𝙧 𝙣𝙖𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙚, 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙨𝙚 𝙨𝙥𝙞𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙨 𝙡𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙣𝙚𝙙 𝙖 𝙥𝙤𝙥𝙪𝙡𝙖𝙧 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙘𝙚𝙥𝙩 𝙛𝙧𝙤𝙢 𝙞𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙣𝙚𝙩 𝙣𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙡𝙨.

𝙏𝙝𝙪𝙨, 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙮 𝙜𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙚𝙙 𝙖 𝙣𝙚𝙬 𝙣𝙖𝙢𝙚: 𝙨𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙢.

𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙢 𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙚𝙘𝙩𝙚𝙙 𝙓𝙞𝙖𝙣𝙜 𝙁𝙚𝙞 𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙛𝙞𝙧𝙨𝙩 𝙘𝙖𝙣𝙙𝙞𝙙𝙖𝙩𝙚.

So this is where Shang appears. This proves that the original novel was not created by Shang, nor was it one of his drafts, and that the original PIDW story already existed. That is why the plot holes Shang left in his novel, PIDW, were filled by the original story itself.

𝙊𝙣𝙚 𝙙𝙖𝙮, 𝙝𝙚 (𝙎𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙜) 𝙪𝙣𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙨𝙘𝙞𝙤𝙪𝙨𝙡𝙮 “𝙨𝙖𝙬” 𝙛𝙧𝙖𝙜𝙢𝙚𝙣𝙩𝙨 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙤𝙧𝙞𝙜𝙞𝙣𝙖𝙡 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙙𝙚𝙘𝙞𝙙𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝙪𝙨𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙢 𝙖𝙨 𝙞𝙣𝙨𝙥𝙞𝙧𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙩𝙤 𝙙𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙡𝙤𝙥 𝙖 𝙣𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙡.

Okay, here is yet another piece of proof that Shang did not create the original PIDW story containing Bingzun.

𝙄𝙣 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙤𝙧𝙞𝙜𝙞𝙣𝙖𝙡 𝙤𝙪𝙩𝙡𝙞𝙣𝙚, 𝙖𝙡𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝 𝙇𝙪𝙤 𝘽𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙝𝙚 𝙪𝙡𝙩𝙞𝙢𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙡𝙮 𝙧𝙚𝙢𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙚𝙙 𝙖𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙚, 𝙝𝙚 𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙙 𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙮 𝙬𝙤𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙧𝙛𝙪𝙡 𝙥𝙚𝙤𝙥𝙡𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙩 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙟𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙣𝙚𝙮. 𝘼𝙡𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙡𝙞𝙛𝙚 𝙝𝙖𝙙 𝙞𝙩𝙨 𝙧𝙚𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙩𝙨, 𝙞𝙩 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙢𝙚𝙖𝙣𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙡𝙚𝙨𝙨.

This is where Shang receives the “fragments” of the original story, and I think this is where many people got confused, because they focus on “in his original outline” while forgetting that this outline consisted of the “fragments” he received and wrote down so he would not forget them and could finally change Bingzun’s fate by creating the “new” story he intended to write.

𝘽𝙚𝙘𝙖𝙪𝙨𝙚 𝙝𝙚 (𝙎𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙜) 𝙝𝙖𝙙 𝙣𝙤 𝙪𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙩𝙖𝙣𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙞𝙨𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙝𝙚 𝙝𝙖𝙙 𝙩𝙖𝙠𝙚𝙣 𝙤𝙣 𝙤𝙧 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙖𝙗𝙞𝙡𝙞𝙩𝙞𝙚𝙨 𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙤𝙨𝙨𝙚𝙨𝙨𝙚𝙙, 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙗𝙚𝙘𝙖𝙪𝙨𝙚 𝙝𝙚 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙪𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙧 𝙞𝙢𝙢𝙚𝙣𝙨𝙚 𝙚𝙢𝙤𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣𝙖𝙡 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙛𝙞𝙣𝙖𝙣𝙘𝙞𝙖𝙡 𝙥𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙨𝙪𝙧𝙚 𝙙𝙪𝙧𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙥𝙚𝙧𝙞𝙤𝙙, 𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙖𝙣𝙞𝙘𝙠𝙚𝙙 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙙𝙚𝙘𝙞𝙙𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝙧𝙞𝙨𝙠 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜, 𝙖𝙗𝙖𝙣𝙙𝙤𝙣𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙤𝙧𝙞𝙜𝙞𝙣𝙖𝙡 𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙣 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙘𝙝𝙤𝙤𝙨𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙞𝙣𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙖𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝙘𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙧 𝙩𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙖𝙧𝙠𝙚𝙩.

Shang abandoned his “original” idea, and this is where he creates PIDW.

It explicitly says he “abandoned everything and decided to take the risk” in order to “cater to the market.” That means that, at first, he was posting the original plotline (Bingzu), and then later changed everything. That was the moment our beloved Bingge was born.

So the beginning of PIDW would actually be Bingzun’s “new” life — the different destiny he always wanted. And this is precisely when Shen Yuan discovers Shang’s novel.

This also means that the essence of the original world (Bingzun) remains inside the world of PIDW, filling in all the gaps Shang left behind while trying to appeal to the market.

I mentioned earlier that when Shang received fragments of the original story, he wrote them down so he would not forget them. That means there really was a “draft created by him.” So if he wrote an entire outline corresponding to the original world, then it can be confirmed that when he later created PIDW from that outline, the “draft” — which is the original world itself — continued to exist as part of PIDW.

This part is a little difficult to explain.

But it’s basically like this: the “draft” Shang wrote already existed beforehand, because it is the original story itself (Bingzun). So this once again confirms that the original story was a complete and finished work, not a draft entirely created by Shang.

Second: a draft of a novel cannot create a world. Which means the “draft,” being the original world itself, continues to exist as part of PIDW and works as a patch for the final PIDW story.

So every plot hole that exists in PIDW is filled by the “draft.” And the draft is the original story without alterations. In other words, everything left unexplained in PIDW — and everything that happens there — is not simply because “the villain is evil” and “the protagonist is pitiful.” Everything has cause and effect, and that is where the “draft” enters the structure of PIDW, because it is what builds the entire logic of cause and effect within the story.

For example: in PIDW, Yingying is treated well by Shen Jiu because Shen Jiu is portrayed as a scumbag who likes women and frequents brothels. He hates everyone and mistreats Bingge purely out of jealousy toward his cultivation.

That is what is written in the novel. But it is full of holes, and that is where the draft fills everything in by adding cause and effect.

For example: Yingying is treated well by Shen Jiu because she resembles his childhood friend, and Shen Jiu wants to protect and spoil her (not romantically). Shen Jiu goes to brothels whenever he feels stressed because he is constantly surrounded by men; he feels more comfortable and SAFE around women. He does not hate everyone, but believes everyone hates him and sees him as a threat, so he acts cold and ignorant in order to avoid giving people any opening against him.

He mistreats only one disciple because he sees himself in that child. That boy’s past was exactly like his own. So why does this child deserve a good life when he himself was never allowed one? Why does this child get to have Yingying as a childhood friend when he could not stay with his own? Why is this child’s cultivation allowed to progress while his own was deliberately obstructed?

That is why he hates Bingge: envy, jealousy, and resentment.

This is the true “patch” of PIDW’s plot. And people need to remember that Shen Yuan is not a reliable narrator — but they forget that Bingge is not a reliable narrator either.

People say: “Bingmei suffered so much. Imagine what he must have gone through in the Abyss. He is not just a crybaby.”

And this is exactly where PIDW’s hidden “patchwork” enters the story, because Bingge’s past is the same as Bingmei’s. So we know his perspective is distorted by what he experienced and by everything he went through with Shen Jiu.

But that is not a plot hole, because this fact is actually stated in the novel. The only thing we need to pay attention to is the unreliable narration so we do not lose track of the truth.

PIDW, however, is different. Beyond the unreliable narration, the PIDW novel itself says almost nothing about the characters’ pasts or the reasons they behave the way they do. That is why the draft fills all the gaps in the novel without ever directly appearing on the surface.

I hope that made sense. This part is genuinely complicated to explain.

But seriously, a draft cannot create a world and then later have the finalized version of that same draft create another world. I think I’ve already repeated that a hundred times.

𝙃𝙚 (𝙎𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙜) 𝙖𝙗𝙖𝙣𝙙𝙤𝙣𝙚𝙙 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙥𝙧𝙞𝙣𝙘𝙞𝙥𝙡𝙚𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙬𝙧𝙤𝙩𝙚 𝙖 “𝙢𝙖𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙥𝙞𝙚𝙘𝙚”: 𝙖 𝙡𝙤𝙬-𝙌𝙄 𝙛𝙖𝙣𝙩𝙖𝙨𝙮 𝙧𝙤𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙘𝙚 𝙛𝙞𝙡𝙡𝙚𝙙 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙚𝙭𝙘𝙚𝙨𝙨𝙞𝙫𝙚 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙣𝙩 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙡𝙮 𝙥𝙤𝙬𝙚𝙧𝙛𝙪𝙡 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙧𝙖𝙘𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙨, 𝙩𝙞𝙩𝙡𝙚𝙙 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙋𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙙 𝙄𝙢𝙢𝙤𝙧𝙩𝙖𝙡 𝘿𝙚𝙢𝙤𝙣 𝙒𝙖𝙮.

𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙤𝙨𝙩 𝙞𝙣𝙘𝙧𝙚𝙙𝙞𝙗𝙡𝙚 𝙥𝙖𝙧𝙩 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩, 𝙞𝙣 𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙡𝙞𝙩𝙮, 𝙣𝙤 𝙢𝙖𝙩𝙩𝙚𝙧 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝘼𝙞𝙧𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙣𝙚 𝙝𝙖𝙙 𝙬𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙩𝙚𝙣, 𝙞𝙩 𝙨𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙝𝙖𝙫𝙚 𝙗𝙚𝙚𝙣 𝙖𝙗𝙡𝙚 𝙩𝙤 𝙖𝙛𝙛𝙚𝙘𝙩 𝘽𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙜𝙚, 𝙗𝙚𝙘𝙖𝙪𝙨𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙤𝙣𝙖𝙡 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙤𝙛 “𝙇𝙪𝙤 𝘽𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙝𝙚” 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙗𝙚 𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙞𝙥𝙪𝙡𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙙!

So, once again: the original PIDW is not a draft, but a fully completed work, because it makes no sense for a character that powerful to be merely a “draft” that can be freely altered.

𝘽𝙪𝙩 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙧𝙤𝙗𝙡𝙚𝙢 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙤𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝙥𝙚𝙤𝙥𝙡𝙚 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙗𝙚 𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙞𝙥𝙪𝙡𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙙!

This is where the whole “low IQ” aspect of the other characters comes in. Everyone around Luo Bingge loses IQ points, and this is mentioned multiple times in SVSSS because it is literally one of Shen Yuan’s genuine complaints.

That is why I say Shen Jiu is actually very intelligent. He is a well-written and highly clever villain. He only seems stupid when standing next to the protagonist.

𝙏𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙘𝙖𝙪𝙨𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚 “𝙇𝙪𝙤 𝘽𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙝𝙚” (𝘽𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙜𝙚) 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝙖𝙥𝙥𝙚𝙖𝙧 𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝 𝙝𝙚 𝙬𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙨𝙪𝙧𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙙 𝙗𝙮 𝙖 𝙜𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙥 𝙤𝙛 𝙞𝙣𝙚𝙭𝙥𝙡𝙞𝙘𝙖𝙗𝙡𝙚 𝙥𝙨𝙚𝙪𝙙𝙤-𝙝𝙪𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙙, 𝙪𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙧 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙪𝙗𝙩𝙡𝙚 𝙞𝙣𝙛𝙡𝙪𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙚 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙚𝙣𝙫𝙞𝙧𝙤𝙣𝙢𝙚𝙣𝙩, 𝙝𝙚 𝙝𝙞𝙢𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛 𝙖𝙡𝙨𝙤 𝙗𝙚𝙘𝙖𝙢𝙚 𝙖𝙗𝙣𝙤𝙧𝙢𝙖𝙡!

This is also where Bingge gets mentioned directly. I absolutely love this part because Bingge basically became warped due to the stupidity of the people around him, and I find that hilarious.

So yes, for the people who say “Luo Bingge would never change because of Shen Yuan,” that is simply false. If he stayed in the SVSSS world long enough, he would gradually become more normal.

𝙃𝙚 𝙬𝙖𝙨, 𝙞𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙚𝙙, 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙘𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙤𝙧 𝙜𝙤𝙙, 𝙗𝙪𝙩 𝙖𝙡𝙨𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙜𝙤𝙙 𝙬𝙝𝙤 𝙘𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙚𝙣𝙩𝙞𝙧𝙚 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙...

This is where the second world is created: PIDW.

(Remember: Bingzu’s world no longer exists. If it still existed, the order would be: Bingzu’s world → modern world → PIDW → SVSSS. But since it has already been destroyed, the order becomes: modern world → PIDW → SVSSS.)

So the second world is created because Shang successfully transformed one story into something completely different. It is like taking inspiration from something and changing so much that it ultimately becomes your own original work.

And that is what caused the world itself to be created, because PIDW became an original story rather than merely an imitation of Bingzu’s world. So if Shang had continued following the “draft,” which is the original story, and had changed only a few things, a new world would never have been born.

𝙀𝙖𝙘𝙝 𝙨𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙢 𝙢𝙤𝙣𝙞𝙩𝙤𝙧𝙚𝙙 𝙞𝙩𝙨 𝙝𝙤𝙨𝙩, 𝙩𝙚𝙨𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙝𝙤𝙬 𝙢𝙪𝙘𝙝 𝙥𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙨𝙪𝙧𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙮 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙚𝙣𝙙𝙪𝙧𝙚, 𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝 𝙖𝙙𝙟𝙪𝙨𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙙𝙞𝙛𝙛𝙞𝙘𝙪𝙡𝙩𝙮 𝙤𝙛 𝙖 𝙜𝙖𝙢𝙚. 𝙀𝙖𝙘𝙝 𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙖𝙞𝙡𝙤𝙧-𝙢𝙖𝙙𝙚 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙞𝙩𝙨 𝙪𝙨𝙚𝙧. 𝙄𝙣 𝙤𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙙𝙨: 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙤𝙣𝙖𝙡𝙞𝙩𝙮 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙢 𝙘𝙤𝙢𝙥𝙡𝙚𝙩𝙚𝙡𝙮 𝙧𝙚𝙛𝙡𝙚𝙘𝙩𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙤𝙣𝙖𝙡𝙞𝙩𝙮 𝙤𝙛 𝙞𝙩𝙨 𝙝𝙤𝙨𝙩.

This point is barely discussed, but we can see that there were more hosts besides Shen and Shang. And they had many more missions, activities, and protagonist favorability points to gain.

I only have one question: were these worlds with different hosts erased? Or did they always exist within the broader framework of the SVSSS world?

I imagine this and immediately think about what Bingmei must have gone through with multiple random people suddenly trying to “take care” of him. But I do not think it worked, because it is confirmed that in the end only Shen and Shang remained.

Still, I also think those worlds may have been erased, because it says Shang was Host Number One of the SVSSS world.

And remember what I said earlier about how a world ends when its Binghe dies? I think those multiple hosts ended up killing multiple Luo Binghes.

The new extra explicitly mentions that when Shen Yuan encountered problems during transmigration — because the timing was wrong and he ended up in the wrong body (Shen Jiu) — the systems did not want to erase/reset the world because it was too troublesome.

That implies that for a world to be erased, the Luo Binghe of that world must die. And that is not impossible, because the systems specifically send hosts into the world in order to save Luo Binghe.

Which means Luo Binghe needs to still be a child, at a stage where he has not yet developed malicious thoughts — or perhaps he has not even been born yet.

𝙏𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙖𝙘𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙩 (𝙎𝙝𝙚𝙣) 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙪𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙚𝙨𝙨 𝙛𝙧𝙤𝙢 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮 𝙗𝙚𝙜𝙞𝙣𝙣𝙞𝙣𝙜. 𝙃𝙤𝙬 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙖𝙣𝙮𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙣 𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙮 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙖 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙧𝙖𝙘𝙩𝙚𝙧 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨?! 𝙃𝙚 𝙬𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙝𝙖𝙫𝙚 𝙩𝙤 𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙮 𝙖𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙚!

This is where it explains that Shen arrived at the wrong point in time and also possessed the wrong body.

Another thing confirmed here is that the systems treat their hosts like players.

Since everyone believed Shen was an “unplayable account” doomed to fail no matter what, none of the systems wanted to stay with him. So that whole part about “each system being tailor-made for its user” and “testing how much pressure the player/host could endure” does not apply to Shen, because the systems simply abandoned him to fend for himself. They also gave up on Shang.

And this is extremely important, because the systems were actively increasing the difficulty for their hosts. That is probably the exact reason why they were never able to save Luo Binghe.

𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙮𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙢𝙨 𝙬𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙤𝙣𝙘𝙚 𝙖𝙜𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙖𝙧𝙜𝙪𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙙𝙪𝙧𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙚𝙚𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙜.

Once again, this confirms that Bingzu is dead and that each system was originally assigned to a specific host. Which means there were multiple hosts before Shang and Shen.

𝙐𝙣𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙎𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙜 𝙌𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙝𝙪𝙖, 𝙬𝙝𝙤 𝙝𝙖𝙙 𝙖𝙡𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙮 𝙜𝙞𝙫𝙚𝙣 𝙪𝙥, 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙄𝙌𝙨 𝙤𝙛 𝙉𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙔𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙮𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙤𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙨, 𝙪𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙧 𝙎𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙌𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙦𝙞𝙪’𝙨 𝙞𝙣𝙛𝙡𝙪𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙚, 𝙙𝙞𝙙 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙙𝙚𝙘𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙨𝙚 𝙗𝙪𝙩 𝙞𝙣𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙖𝙙 𝙞𝙣𝙘𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙨𝙚𝙙, 𝙗𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙠𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙥𝙖𝙨𝙩 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙖𝙥𝙥𝙧𝙤𝙫𝙖𝙡 𝙩𝙝𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙝𝙤𝙡𝙙 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙨𝙠𝙮𝙧𝙤𝙘𝙠𝙚𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙪𝙥𝙬𝙖𝙧𝙙!

This is where I talk about how the characters become stupid around the protagonist, and yes, Shen Yuan has enough influence to turn Luo Bingge into a normal person, which is honestly a very interesting concept.

𝙃𝙚 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙤𝙣𝙡𝙮 𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙘𝙖𝙢𝙚 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙞𝙣 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙥𝙖𝙩𝙝, 𝙗𝙪𝙩 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙣 𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙘𝙝𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙡𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙡 𝙤𝙛 𝙏𝙞𝙖𝙣𝙡𝙖𝙣𝙜-𝙅𝙪𝙣, 𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙣𝙤 𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙝𝙖𝙙 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙖𝙜𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝙨𝙪𝙧𝙥𝙖𝙨𝙨...

“No one had ever managed to surpass.” Yet another confirmation that there were previous hosts before them.

Hashahhajah I wanted to put all the information in one place because this single extra chapter basically reveals all of it, and I also followed the order of the writing itself, so you can read the extra while analyzing it with me. Just keep in mind that I used a translation of the extra in my own language, so some parts might be slightly different :33