“Very in depth analysis and description of the photograph.”
“Good structure when talking about the photo and interesting points made.”
“Text is organised and seems to flow paragraph to paragraph.”
“Description and analysis of text needed.”
“Needs an argument or question being answered.”
“Referred to text but needs more analysis and relevance to the image.”
“Referencing needs to be in alphabetical order.”
My assessor said I gave an in depth description & analysis of my chosen photograph but this lacked when I talked about the text, which looking back I completely agree with. I should have expanded on the relationship between the photograph and text because that was the main objective.
I followed the referencing guidelines from the Harvard booklet but I missed that it had to be in alphabetical order *whoops* so I’ll remember to do that in future.