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hiya! i just wanted to let you know that i adored this is tailor-made so much!! the characterization is completely on point, and rory and jess don’t feel like they’re just being dumb for the slow burn, they’re actually avoiding their feelings for reasons so accurate to the characters. also, jess and emmy’s relationship is the purest thing. i’m super excited for part 3! <3

AND ANOTHER THING. (You know how my reviews go, haha) How much pain could have been avoided if they would just freaking communicate?!!! I don't blame Jess in this particular situation, but Rory!!! Why couldn't she just TELL Jess that Logan wanted some uninterrupted time with Emmy for a few months, but that didn't have to mean Rory herself had to cut him off completely! They could have been talking by phone this entire time, but nooooo, she had to make him feel totally rejected instead! Ugh!

And this isn't a criticism of your writing at all, by the way, because it's exactly the sort of stupidity one would expect from these utterly stupid idiots that I love so much... I'm just SO FRUSTRATED!!!