Feedback from rich and dot
Need to use a more up to date tmblr that uses no glare.
Change craeft in body text to craft to make it looke less confusing.
Refine logo:
Letterform needs to be bolder ad it currently looks fragile. Pop of colour or highlight could make it more contemporary. Try with just blackletter. Could I use graphics like hand holding paintfrush behind logo? Stamp- use mockup to create the effect.
Make slogan big on screen. Could I use graphics like hand holding paintbrush behind logo?
No blue behind text as this is illedgible. Use it for buttons.
Need to make buttons closer to text to make it easy to see that they are connected. This will make hierarchy clearer.
I need to use a more up to date mockup. Rich and dot showed me some mockups that showcase the scrolling section of the screen, making it clearer that the stills are not serparate pages.
Make sure text is consistant and be careful about grammatical and spelling errores,
Experiment with using Tape png for photographs to add handrafted elements to website.
Look at screen lane, page collective or mobin to look at how online shops are laid out to make mine easier to use.
