If you actually draw the designs for the demon/DOOM au, I may just drop dead, resurrect and ask for your hand in marriage because holy crap, thatd be so cool
I made an attempt at the sprites but I only have highlighters and I am not an artist
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Iβll go more in depth for certain designs choices when Iβm done but yeah :)) I still have ghost and Gaz to do but my IPad died so ππ
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Sentenced to Be a Hero, The Prison Records of Penal Hero Unit 9004, Vol. 1 by Rocket Shokai, Mephisto, Matthew Rutsohn
adventure
conspiracies
demon war
fantasy
forced servitude
occult
prisoners
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
A hilariously, and at times grotesquely miserable clutch of prisoners forced into military service who just might save the land from demonic corruption? Lead by a man rumored to be "the most despicable hero of them all"? SENTENCED TO BE A HERO v1 is a simple fantasy story that grows and expands the deeper one goes.
At first glance, readers may believe the protagonist, Xylo Forbartz, is just another disgraced knights' captain forced into hazardous servitude as punishment. Readers might also suppose the whispered depravity and cheeky degeneracy of the religious elites are just another play at dispossessed social mores. And readers could also, perhaps, convince themselves the fighters of Penal Hero Unit 9004 are indestructible, given how far they've come.
Curiously enough, readers would be wrong on all counts. SENTENCED TO BE A HERO v1 may be written with the light-handed, flippant style native to most light novel projects, but the book's structure bears evidence of much more effective and engaging storytelling. For example, readers never gain important information right away (e.g., Forbartz's backstory, the inclinations of the religious authorities), and readers don't necessarily catch it the first time around (e.g., learning which characters to trust to tell the truth).
Forbartz and his colleagues are criminals condemned to eternal military service. The task of eliminating the Demon Blight is not an easy one. Indeed, most would say humanity is already done for. But a mission is a mission. And of these criminals, not all of them are guilty, and of those innocent, they are either violently insecure or are outright antisocial. Readers will find these folks irritating and repulsive until, in a battle against rampaging demon-kin, the group wields lightning staffs, magical swords, and massive battle-axes to clear the way. These are the worst people to rely on in a moment of critical need.
And if the Federated Kingdom can eke out soldiers-for-hire by manipulating the common man, then what else might be going on in the shadows?
Penal Hero Unit 9004 is a menagerie of miscreants: a disgraced knight captain (Xylo Forbartz); a thief with bad manners (Dotta Luzulas); a literal dead-man walking (Tatsuya); an overly chatty sniper (Tsav); a cowardly political criminal (Venetim Leopool); and a brilliant magecraft technician, who also happens to be wildly mentally unstable (Norgalle Senridge). The team dynamic is certifiably odd and slowly unfolds over the course of the novel. The author rightfully takes their time layering each characters' skills, quirks, and specialties into each (increasingly dangerous) military assignment.
Surviving various demon rampages in dark forests and underground caverns, as well as outlasting an assault on abandoned castle grounds, the unit's tough tasks made easier with the help of others. Forbartz earns the favor of Teoritta, the goddess of swords, as well as Patausche Kivia, Captain of the 13th Order of the Holy Knights. SENTENCED TO BE A HERO v1 spins these added authorities in Forbartz's favor, whereas other novels might typically leave them to other, smarter, more deserving characters.
The goddess character, for example, is an ebullient little girl with enormous power, whereas Captain Kivia, however tsundere, is a by-the-book military official with close family in the Temple's upper ranks.
SENTENCED TO BE A HERO v1 tells a compact story and risks leaving readers with more questions than answers, although likely by accident. For example, Forbartz slowly clues into the possibility of an interlocking conspiracy to eliminate him and his crew, despite the good they do for humanity. And yet, readers have so little vision into these institutions, beyond Forbartz's traumatic flashbacks, that it's impossible to piece together the actual puzzle itself.
The same can be said for the novel's approach to the history and application of magic. Much of the book's conceptualization and utility of magical effects is shallow and a bit ridiculous, except for when it counts (e.g., in battle). Since the origins of the goddesses, their powers, and their functions are largely hearsay (or lost), everything is made up on the spot. The tack is mighty convenient, and so glosses over a valley of active worldbuilding that might have given this novel some genuine heft.
Fortunately, where the novel's use of detail falls short, other narrative elements pick up the slack. The book's structure, again, is a high point. Readers learn more of this decaying continent as Forbartz learns more about it, and readers feel more invested in Teoritta's well-being the more Forbartz himself invests in the girl's safety and survival. Further, readers grow increasingly curious about the institutional dynamics ruling the continent. Is there conflict between the Temple and the military? To what extent? Who controls what? Is either wholly in the right? Neither organization is a monolith. Readers don't care about these things until the protagonist does, which is a timely and effective storytelling strategy.
SENTENCED TO BE A HERO v1 is an easy read. The fight scenes are entertaining, if written a bit amateurishly, and the character personalities are diverse, if leaning rather heavily into tropes. But the plight of a character who detests being a hero, and the conspiracies that bind him to his fate, beget a story readers will find more amusing than not.
Character concept ideas for a friendβs project β A Priest and His Demon. The priest I drew before but now his garment is more inspired by Russian orthodox lol and he has a beard. That weird abstract thing is a wooden talisman made to emulate the noose to which the Lord Jonus was hung from.
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