Hiii❗️I absolutely LOVED your dottore fic Blasphemy Loves Misery😭😭 it was so so SO GOOD I haven’t read a fic that thought out in a while tbh🫣 I enjoyed it so much that I had to force myself to take breaks because I wanted to savor the story and not blast through it all in one sitting🤣 I loved the concept of angel!reader, it was perfect for the angst and her personality was so cute😓 and I think the way your wrote Zandik was AMAZING, like you really got his character down perfectly imo😩 the story was super well written although my only critique of it would be the timeline/flashbacks aspects of the story if that makes sense? Like sometimes I struggled figuring out what time setting a particular section of the story was in (ex. when pantalone dislocated reader’s shoulder, it took me a minute to figure out that it was a flashback lol) My only suggestion would be to make it more clear that what we are reading is a flashback and/or what time setting the section is in, or transition a lil more smoothly into it, I feel like that would help readers understand the timeline better (or maybe that was just a skill issue of my own🥲) But other than that I love your style of writing! It’s so detailed! And I saw that you were considering writing a continuation of sorts making angel!reader revive somehow👀 and to that I say YES PLEASEEEEE OMG! 😫🗣️🧎🏻♀️Listen, I enjoyed the angst but my love for happy endings will ALWAYS override everything else, so if you do decide to make a continuing side story where she revives somehow, you have my full support🫶🏻💕 I also saw that you have another dottore fic The Most Sentimental Unsentimental Man, and you better BELIEVE that I’m gonna read that one too YES SIRRRR🫡 I can’t WAIT to get started on it!! Hope you have a wonderful day and keep creating such beautiful pieces!🥰
Omg hi anon ilysm anon💕💗
For the flashbacks, I did think of the problem about them being too vague so I added a few details to signal they are flashbacks but ig they're still a bit vague so I'll try to think of more ways! I appreciate your feedback^^
As for the plot I honestly dont know how I managed to connect all of them??😭 My writing style is pretty chaotic. I first imagine my favorite scene then add details leading up to that scene. As I write, if I like a detail enough I'll loop them back to previous events which magically works somehow lmaoo
The sentimental man something is my first dottore fic so lower your expectations haha 🥲 although I recently added part 3 the first two parts were written way earlier so I'm still critical about them.
For the continuation of blasphemy loves misery Im planning a fic for it but the plot is GRIM like the plot just drank EVIL MILK. But im willing to make a short side fic for a happy ending if I had the time! I want them to be together too 😞 (yes i am sad and its all my fault)
All I want to say is it's such a blessing to have a passionate reader like you!! It's been a long while since I got to express my thoughts like this with a fellow fic (and dottore) lover 🥰
