#analyzingdata

I am unsure if this section of my essay is worded and described well in order for my audience to better understand my hypothesis. In this particular section, I provide analyzation and deeper explanation of the graphs I chose to use in my data collection. I wanted to contrast the difference between each graph, but ultimately most of my information was gathered from the line graph. Is it necessary to even include the bar graph? Also, should I provide more information about the data I selected and analyzed from the specific social media account? Lastly, does this section make sense as an audience reading it? Or is my point lost? Thank you!

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As cities grow larger, the challenge of managing them also gets tougher everyday. In order to create better solutions to the demands of the multiplying population and to provide the right city services at theright time, the city governments have to listen carefully to what the citizenry has to say. And what better way to take the pulse of a city than to listen to the 311 calls. So we set on exploring the internet for 311 related sources, we happened upon the NYC 311 data generously opened for public use by New York City. NYC 311 started as a call center service in 2003 and continued its success with the addition of a mobile application in 2009. The data collected in this system since 2010 is now available to all @ http://nycopendata.socrata.com We are always excited about the chance to explore new data sets. It is no surprise that we quickly downloaded the data and started investigating what stories NYChas to tell us:

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