#+3.5

Let's rate Chapter 1

Also I'm using new numbers for this

I shall get an average of emotions showned by Marckus on each scene.

Opening scene shows Marckus annoyed a couple of times by his dad's antics, but also stays curious for what's to come about. Because of the slight annoyance I'll give this scene a 2.33.

Next the scene in forest. While Marckus stays mostly neutral, he's hanging next to a person he likes more than his dad. Still there's some negative feelings lingering from the previous scene, also his reaction towards Kitten's self depricating comment rests him some points (i'm also very unhappy when people I love hate on themselves). However, he was throwing jokes and showing fascination for his fiancé's tales, so I give this scene a 2.75.

Entering the cave there's not much going. He didn't even sounded mad when Door unreceived his comeback. It's a 3 for me.

Next the fight and there's a lot of emotions shown by Marckus here. Lots of physical pain, excitement from defeating some of vampires, anger when his stake jacket gets rejected by Door, distress for almost seeing his dad die in front of him, and also a lot of rage on the final scream. This one receives a 2.6.

For the last scene back on the bus, even thou he is in a lot of physical pain, he showed so much excitement for the amount of blanks they captured and the possibility of study them that I most give this scene a 4.5.

After reflecting this numbers I think I'll give this whole chapter a