#*feedback

i’m glad y’all are still comfortable enough using these❤️‍🩹 a lot of writers have made them since then too, so if you see a feedback box and feel compelled to tell them something about their work, use them! you never know what stories or writing spirits you’ll keep alive just by dropping something in these forms.

anyways.. onto your commentary YEAH💀 idk what the hell i was on bc when i finally reread it like a year after posting I was like🚶‍♀️‍➡️girl wh a t ??? this yoongi is a menace and a half and their chemistry was already📈📈📈 literally surprised me and i wrote the damn thing lol

Feedback: There are a good few places with missing words, incomplete or run-on sentences though.

I also think a Past, Present subtitle or some sort of indicator that we're in a flashback/memory or in a change of scenery would be helpful as well. I got confused for a second because we were in town talking to 'her' and then all of a sudden playing a game with our best friend as kids. (unless I just somehow overlooked the transition and simply misread)

Thank you! I do answer to them , you are just the first ask I've gotten 👻

If you'd be willing to send me examples, I'd appreciate it 🙏! (If not, it's totally ok, too ! 😊 I appreciate the feedback to get me started)

I do want there to be confusion, but I don't want it to impede the reader experience, so I'll look and see if I can make it clearer 🤔!

Hi!

So first, thank you for sharing all your thoughts and concerns. I’m glad you’re enjoying the bro’s development and do like seeing his interactions with reader (since hell yeah, we’ve been needing some!) If he seems more complex now then I’ve done my job bc I don’t want any of my characters to be flat. It makes for more intriguing stories if they’re more than one-sided.

Now onto the reader concern: I can see your side. Because GIRLLL like. Yoongi cares so much about you! But you gotta remember. We see both sides as a reader. She doesn’t get to see what’s going on in his mind unless he tells her or shows her, so everything we know about Yoongi is double the amount she does.

A crap ton of stuff is holding her back, too. Past relationship drama/sting, her brother, the fact that Tae said that Yoongi swore off relationships since his last one, the way she thought at the whole party (them being from two different worlds.) If you want her to be less redundant, how would you write it? Where would your version of Three Tangerines go? I genuinely wanna know in this case because if I was dealing with all of that I feel like I would be second guessing myself every which way😭 Like of course I would wanna be with him. But how tf would that work? I’d wanna talk it out or it would need to get hammered into me lol.

All the talks with friends here also come from different perspectives, but all arrive at a similar conclusion. Which should say something. If they felt like everything’s going in circles, I’d challenge you to look at it like roads all arriving at the same destination instead! If it still feels like circles, then I’ll take an alternative suggestion on how to format this chapter.

She’s continuing it because it’s Yoongi sjdkskd but real talk, it’s what she said towards the end of 3tan8. If he’s offering, and she’s staring to care less and less about what could happen.. Then yeah, she’s gonna go for it. I mean. I would LOL because wtf this guy truly cares. He did all that for her and didn’t even need thanks or acknowledgement. On top of that, this was a growth chapter: She’s finally starting to accept what she feels and is allowing herself to make some moves. Even through all of the worries she’s got on her mind. At least, that’s how I planned on it going.

Awhhhh thank you, love! And this means I’m doing my job bc WE ARE BODY INCLUSIVE IN THIS HOUSE😤 i’m pretty damn sure yoongi doesn’t gaf about body types anyways, but that’s legit one of the top things that i watch out for when i write fics in general.

the thought process is basically like,, when scenes happen that involve two or more people, i picture different sizes in my mind to see if they can all apply. and i’m also now keeping height in mind, as well, ever since someone sent in an ask about being super tall. if i miss a mark, lemme know and i can adjust!

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AHH hello, FL3 anon! i went ahead and screenshot this so that i can communicate with you here. hopefully you end up seeing this🥰

so i have a playlist for first love, last love here :D all of the classical pieces there were ones i imagined yoongi playing at points in the story, and the others are yoongi/bts songs that fit the overall vibes. actually @yoon2k​ just convinced me to add moonlight by agust d, so that’s also on there now<33 

i’m so glad you loved FL3! your message lit up my day and i’m so happy you were able to read it, too. have a great rest of your weekend and thank you for sending in a heartfelt message🥺