#*3tanfeedback

i’m glad y’all are still comfortable enough using these❤️‍🩹 a lot of writers have made them since then too, so if you see a feedback box and feel compelled to tell them something about their work, use them! you never know what stories or writing spirits you’ll keep alive just by dropping something in these forms.

anyways.. onto your commentary YEAH💀 idk what the hell i was on bc when i finally reread it like a year after posting I was like🚶‍♀️‍➡️girl wh a t ??? this yoongi is a menace and a half and their chemistry was already📈📈📈 literally surprised me and i wrote the damn thing lol

Hi!

So first, thank you for sharing all your thoughts and concerns. I’m glad you’re enjoying the bro’s development and do like seeing his interactions with reader (since hell yeah, we’ve been needing some!) If he seems more complex now then I’ve done my job bc I don’t want any of my characters to be flat. It makes for more intriguing stories if they’re more than one-sided.

Now onto the reader concern: I can see your side. Because GIRLLL like. Yoongi cares so much about you! But you gotta remember. We see both sides as a reader. She doesn’t get to see what’s going on in his mind unless he tells her or shows her, so everything we know about Yoongi is double the amount she does.

A crap ton of stuff is holding her back, too. Past relationship drama/sting, her brother, the fact that Tae said that Yoongi swore off relationships since his last one, the way she thought at the whole party (them being from two different worlds.) If you want her to be less redundant, how would you write it? Where would your version of Three Tangerines go? I genuinely wanna know in this case because if I was dealing with all of that I feel like I would be second guessing myself every which way😭 Like of course I would wanna be with him. But how tf would that work? I’d wanna talk it out or it would need to get hammered into me lol.

All the talks with friends here also come from different perspectives, but all arrive at a similar conclusion. Which should say something. If they felt like everything’s going in circles, I’d challenge you to look at it like roads all arriving at the same destination instead! If it still feels like circles, then I’ll take an alternative suggestion on how to format this chapter.

She’s continuing it because it’s Yoongi sjdkskd but real talk, it’s what she said towards the end of 3tan8. If he’s offering, and she’s staring to care less and less about what could happen.. Then yeah, she’s gonna go for it. I mean. I would LOL because wtf this guy truly cares. He did all that for her and didn’t even need thanks or acknowledgement. On top of that, this was a growth chapter: She’s finally starting to accept what she feels and is allowing herself to make some moves. Even through all of the worries she’s got on her mind. At least, that’s how I planned on it going.

Thank you so incredibly much and I am looking forward to the other chapter feedback that you have omfg I’m happy😭🍊

march 21st, 2022, 11:30pm cst

march 21, 2022, 10:43pm cst

LOLOL well hello love i’m glad you enjoyed this part even though it did come as a surprise HAHA. I wanted to see how y’all would react and literally no one disappointed😂

I was smiling while writing it, too! Had to take breaks from time to time bc I was just feeling too many feelings😭

HELP THE JOJI CONNECTION.. we are in for a ride no matter what now sjdkskd but OOOH you think he’s the other one, huh?? Interesting I will put you down for that theory!

YES. YOONGI CALLED READER MANY THINGS IN THIS ONE but still not enough imo i mean what?? And he isssss he’s opening up and starting to be himself and it’s just so AHHHHH😩🦋 don’t even get me started on the key bc I will sob into my fists

AWHH thank you!! When I say feedback, it can also be good feedback ajdkskd not just constructive :D i guess i could reword these to “comment boxes”.. but thank you regardless !