My problems with Chapter 5
- 1st half of the game was basically pointless filler. Nothing of true value happened for the first 1,5 hours
- Giblet and Chum are pointless and irrelevant. They don't add anything new to the plot, they don't deepen the narrative in any way. Do we know who they used to be? No. Do they do anything of value? No, except for that one moment at the end. Do they bring in anything new to the story? No. For a character that had so much hype and mystery built around him ā Chum was only in this game for around 2 minutes.
- On the topic of Giblet and Chum doing nothing of value ā it's getting really frustrating that we're literally the only ones who do anything around the factory while everyone else sits back and watches.
- Why are we called the Playtime Butcher? For 5 games we've only been defending ourselves from hostile toys.
- The black and white writing of the Prototype vs Poppy conflict. The Prototype is evil, Poppy is good. Why? Just cause. There's no complexity here at all
- The Prototype's whole entire character. He's a caricature of a villain. Why is he evil? Just cause. Why did he carry out the Hour of Joy? Just cause, there's no reason, he was just feeling particularly evil that day. Does he care about the toys and want to protect them? No, he's a tyrant with his own propaganda press, brutally oppressing everyone, continuing the experiments, and is basically an asshole to everyone. He doesn't care about anyone except Poppy
- Prototype's intelligence? Nonexistent. He's been severely dumbed down just to allow us to defeat him in chapter 6. He didn't destroy this super secret information Giblet tells us to retrieve on how to destroy him. He doesn't know how to carry out the experiments and didn't let Sawyer do the work for him instead for... some reason. He dumps us into the Poppy gel after he stabbed us, directly leading to our survival. And just the fact that he's a young child automatically dumbs him down further
- On the topic of the Prototype's intelligence, why did he carry out the Hour of Joy if he doesn't truly care about saving anyone? And why carry out the Hour of Joy before the scientists could achieve immortality? If his goal is not to be immortal alone ā wouldn't it be smarter for him to wait until the scientists do the hard work for him? And if he didn't know how to do the experiments, wouldn't it be easier to let Sawyer do the hard work for him? Sawyer even asks him to give him labs access in chapter 4! We know the Prototype doesn't care about the other toys given how he treats them. Why doesn't he just let the Doctor into the labs?
- The Prototype's motivation? He doesn't want to live forever alone. A very simple motivation that I don't find that interesting or compelling. It stings to find out that THIS was what Mob were leading up to when they were saying, "You think you know what he wants? You don't know anything yet" when the answer is just "He doesn't want to be lonely in immortality"
- Preston and the rebel faction of scientists that the vhs tapes set up? Nonexistent. We don't know where they are. We don't know what happened to them
- Stella, who was part of the rebel plot? Nonexistent. Why did the arg hint that she was part of the rebel plot if she wasn't featured in this chapter at all?
- Seeing Reason, the girl from the arg? Nonexistent
- Lily? A cool character with a cool plot that is ultimately irrelevant narrative wise. Gone too quickly.
- Kissy? Still somehow friends with Poppy after Poppy bailed on her.
- Poppy? Again, no complexity to her character. Just a scared child in circumstances she's not equipped for. Which, by the way, why does Mob try to hint that she's as bad as the Prototype (through SeeingReason's statements) when she's not? Not even close.
- The Prototype being a child literally undermines everything he's done up until this moment. The alarm clock that he turned into a laser pointer? How did he do that? Him manipulating scientists and counselors into helping him? How did a child do that? Orchestrating the Hour of Joy? Speaking to Sawyer on equal grounds? How? Why would a character like *Sawyer* ever show the Prototype any respect if the Prototype is a child?
- Eddie and Leith? They were only in this game to explain what happened to Rich and then hint at potential spin-off games
- Why did the Prototype convert *Grace* into a toy but not Jessica? He killed Jessica for being an evil scientist who didn't really care or feel sorry for experimenting on children (which btw he doesn't even care about) but he converted Grace despite her literally brainwashing and abusing children psychologically by trying to convince them they're really toys? And I know the logic is ā death is a mercy and being forced to be a toy is punishment but:
1) Why did Jessica not deserve to be punished like Grace then despite being equally evil
2) Why did Prototype convert *Preston* if Preston felt bad and helped him carry out the Hour of Joy. By that logic Preston deserved death as a mercy, not to be transformed into a toy, you can't have it both ways
- Inconsistent writing of Jessica Newman. In the vhs when Preston questions her if the work bothers her she says no. In the note found in Lily's dollhouse, however, she notes that it *does* bother her and questions if there's even a point to it.
- We were shown automated machines in the labs that experimented on Outimals without the Prototype being present at all. This is just another blow to the Prototype's intelligence. He doesn't even need to do anything when the machines do most of the work for him. And he wasted his own time trying to figure out how to control the Growth Medium with the Negation formula when he could've just let Harley do it under his supervision. But he didn't for... some reason
- The Prototype's maturity levels and his child identity are not congruent at all. The switch from the Elliot Ollie tape to the interrogation tape gave me whiplash. It doesn't make sense in my head that the Prototype in both these tapes is the same character
- The way the Ollie reveal ruins Elliot as a character. Elliot became the single most evil person in the series. He took in an abused, innocent child and experimented on him to revive his dead daughter. And then had the nerve to tell him they could be a family if he wanted. Disgusting beyond words. He then proceeded to leave both Ollie and Poppy to the evil company he created that didn't hesitate a moment to start experimenting on children for profit.
- Leith didn't know of Prototype's or Poppy's existence. He stumbled upon them (and presumably Elliot's body) by complete accident. So all the experiments and underground facilities were made in the span of only 5-6 years.
- Harley's return felt like cheap emotional manipulation and fanservice. I wasn't even happy to have him back because of it. And now Isaac has confirmed he was meant to die in chapter 4
- I'm going to guess that Poppy hates the Prototype because he killed Elliot. Why is she still defending her father after all these years? After what he did to her and how he left her in this mess?
- If Harley ends up helping us in chapter 6 and does not betray us at any point ā it will be inconsistent with his character. He better not have a tragic death as it will make absolutely no sense for a selfish person like him
- I predict Ollie will have a tragic death, because I can already see the setup. So, again, cheap emotional manipulation, because Ollie has not been a positive character this entire game at all
Were there aspects I liked? Absolutely. I enjoyed the Conditioning section and Huggy's memories. I also appreciated that they explained how there's so many small critters running around with brain mapping and duplication. I liked the Prototype's design (aside from the lack of a tail, because I liked the idea of him having a scorpion tail). Huggy and Kissy's deaths were sad. But my problems with this chapter unfortunately outweigh the positives