How to Edit a First Draft
Or, how my WIP evolved from the nightmare that was draft two to the almost novel-like draft three.
My method for editing first drafts usually takes about two steps.Â
Scrap it and rewrite the whole thing.Â
Well, itâs a bit more complicated than that. I know, I know. It sounds really, really harsh. But with a first draft, you arenât really editing it, youâre rewriting it. Because first drafts? They suck. Especially if youâre just starting out.Â
Finishing a first draft can feel so good. You just wrote a shit-ton of words, and now youâre done! Thatâs how I felt when I finished my first draft (or, rather, second draft in this case, but thatâs only because my first draft was a half-finished pile of trash that I wonât be counting for the purposes of this post).Â
I mean, itâs how I wanted to feel. I was proud of the 50,000-odd words that Iâd written, but I knew that it was full of structural problems, pacing issues, and even characterization. (Plus my main villain sucked. Like, really sucked.)Â
So, without further ado, here are the slightly less simplified steps to rewriting that first draft:Â
1. Get out a notebook, read over your manuscript, and take notes.Â
Take notes on every scene. Ask yourself, is this scene necessary? Is it well-written?
Take notes on any ideas you have for improving the story. Would it be better if the love interest was also secretly a spy? Great! Now you have an interesting subplot. Write it down.Â
Donât get caught up in the little things. Does it say a character has blue eyes on one page and claim theyâre green on the next? Are there a lot of grammar mistakes? Who cares. Is one of your characters consistently acting out-of-character? Thatâs a problem you should take note of.Â
2. Find whatâs wrong with it.Â
Thereâs probably something wrong with your first draft. Thereâs probably a lot of things wrong. Are the characters flat/inconsistent? Is it rushed? Is the plot nonexistent/all over the place? Recognizing the problems is the first step to fixing them.Â
Even if you donât outline, after reading over your first draft, you should probably make one. Even if the plot of your first draft was perfect, you should still write down the progression of events and how they fit together.
This will help during rewriting, and also to work out any issues you have in the plot.Â
For me, this included brainstorms, timelines, and character arcs.Â
4. Take the salvageable scenes from the first draft and put them in a document labeled âDraft 1 Highlights.âÂ
Youâll be very tempted to take the scenes you like and copy-paste them directly into the new draft. DO NOT DO THIS. Just donât. Chances are, by the time you get to them, the story will be shifted. Youâll also limit the freedom of taking the plot in a better direction if you feel obligated to include pre-written scenes.Â
Make sure to hold onto the first draft. Iâve used the first draft as reference several times during the re-writing process, especially toward the end, where the first and second drafts overlap a bit more. Even so, even if the scenes are similar, never copy-paste. Open the first draft in a second window and look at it as you rewrite. Your second draft will be better for it.Â
Youâre not going to get anywhere if you donât start writing. When it came to my manuscript, I wrote about three or four first chapters before I found one that worked (and ended up using one of the earlier beginnings as a flashback later on.) And if you want, you can go out of order! Itâs up to you, and everything depends on the level of revisions your WIP needs.Â