Hi all! I'm opening up my inbox/asks for beta-reading. If you've got a fic sitting in your drafts that needs a second pair of eyes before you post, I'd love to help.
What I can help with:
Plot consistency & pacing
Characterization (staying true to canon voice, or making OCs feel real)
Grammar, spelling, and flow
Honest, kind feedback I'll tell you what's working and what could be stronger
General "does this make sense to a reader" gut checks
A few details:
Fandom(s): [fill in or "any fandom, I'm flexible!"]
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I am in the process of making a fan game for Jojo's Bizarre Adventure!
Long story short: How this all came about. A few friends and I were playing the Joestar Struck fanmade visual novel, and it was a lot of fun. It included characters up until Part 4, and it was a pretty investing experience trying to 100% each route, even with the game having a limited cast.
So it got me thinking...
What if we made another fangame, with more romanceable characters than just the main "Jojo" from each part?
More info under the cut!
To start out, here's the basic premise:
Visual novel style fangame, with storylines specific to each romanceable character
College setting, so that every romanceable character is aged up to an adult
Certain "side characters" and "villains" are also romanceable. Current cast of characters is set to a total of 34 character storylines, ranging from parts 1-6. (I wanted to fit in a lot more, but my initial list was closer to 50 characters and that was too much. As it is, 34 is A LOT.)
Other non-romance characters will make cameos throughout, as well, and several storylines get to play off of each other where they intersect
Planned Features: Customizing Your Experience!
For multi-part characters, pick their outfits/appearances. (Young Joseph or Old Man Joseph? Phantom Blood Dio or Stardust Crusaders DIO? ;P)
Choose whether you want just the fluff romance otome-esc experience of wooing your favorites, or if you want to enable more, ahem... explicit content.
It's still early stages right now, currently in the process of plotting everything out, but Inbox and Asks are OPEN!!
I will also be putting up additional posts this week with the full character roster.
Let me know if you'd be interested in a few storyline teasers! Feel free to drop an Ask to share your headcanons or any interesting thoughts you might have.
I'm opening up spots for beta reading and I'd love to work with you!
whether you're polishing your first draft or prepping something for querying I'm here for it. all genres welcome, no story is too weird or too niche for me.
what you get: thoughtful, in-depth feedback reader reactions as i go a full read with notes on plot, pacing, characters & more an honest but kind perspective i want your story to shine
this is a paid service, so if you're curious about rates or availability, slide into my DMs or drop a message below!
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I'm available for beta reading. If you need honest, constructive feedback on your story, novel, fanfic, or manuscript, feel free to DM me. I'd be happy to help with plot, pacing, characters, and overall reader experience.
i'm Manu Sage a beta reader who lives for stories that wreck me emotionally and make me forget to sleep.
i read across genres but my heart belongs to dark romantasy, psychological mystery, slow burn romance, fantasy, and anything with morally complex characters.
if you're an indie or self-publishing author looking for honest, thoughtful feedback I'm your person. I'm currently open to beta reading requests!
