The Fool’s Step is Just my Average Monday
For a while now, I’ve been querying literary agents. So far, it’s been a streak of rejections and ghosting. I’m not discouraged, but I did want to understand why.
Before jumping into this, I tested my manuscript on a live audience. The test group was highly diversified in both language and reading preferences, and the data showed a massive approval rate. That’s exactly why I decided to take things to the next level.
Yet, the answers I keep getting say it "doesn't fit the agent's current portfolio"—even though I meticulously chose them based on their official wish lists (MSWL).
So, I took a step back. I looked at my text with fresh eyes, factoring in the current political climate, trends, and agendas. And that’s when it hit me.
Agents usually ask for the first 5 to 10 pages—which is half or the entirety of Chapter 1 (5k+ words). And what’s on those opening pages? The raw, ugly truth about emigration. Right in your face, no apologies, no filtering. I suspect that after reading it, they simply don't want to take the risk.
Which means I need an agent who isn't afraid.
To give you some context: I walked away from a massive, established audience to choose a completely new path for myself. I am not afraid of taking risks. The "Fool’s Step" is just my average Monday.
And now, it has become a matter of principle for me to break through with this exact, "uncomfortable" Labyrinth series, rather than with my fantasy projects (yes, I have those too).
Though, the traditional Chinese web novel fandom might end up throwing stones at me later anyway—right now, I’m working on a fantasy project in a Chinese setting, but written with my signature, fast-paced storytelling style.
I’m looking for an agent who can handle the heat.















