Spread 3
Jun 25 2026
Edited spread 3
I got rid of one illustration here and moved it to the fourth spread instead
I did that yesterday but made more tweaks today. Which was changing Bunny's pose on the right and adding a few elements
It feels a lot simpler to what I had original planned
Yesterday's version:
I thought about adding clouds to the left but I didn't like how it looked. I haven't changed how I rendered things, but it felt off.
So I then tried using a blue background. Wasn't pleased. Lowering the opacity helped it slightly.
Thought instead of a blue background, I'd used sparkles again to match the right.
I'm still leaning towards none at all
For the right side, I added some sparkles. But I'm not sure which one I want to use.
But I also like having none at all:
As for using color balance, I've done that for every spread. But I don't know how I feel about it now. It's one of those spreads where I like the original colors more
But I feel like if I kept it that way, it would clash with the others
Sidenote: Maybe I've been staring at it for too long, but now I wonder if Bunny look okay on the right side
I don't know. Something is off. Maybe it's the proportions?
I've shown this to others, and they've said my pages are cute, so maybe it's just me.
Definitely going to animate this later on. But I layered the two verison together.
It feels more like Bunny is nuzzling into Sun's hand instead of having Sun giving her a head pat
I'll be editing it so that it'll move left to right instead.












