Crows Nest

Busting out my choir knowledge so they can compliment eachother but also Grace is kinda in a hamster and idk what to do with him.

anywho, little section of ch2 of my fic. I dont think its any good tho so sorry

"I am sorry I didn’t get here sooner, and I am sorry for my mental state, that I am forcing you to put up with. I understand if…if you-”

Adrian cut Rocky off with a stomp, halting the ball Grace was in. They turned directly to Rocky now,

Bc of the part that’s like

Like a mad dog after a rabbit I keep run runnin running- like when he first starts running away from the doctor or when he runs after the explosion

And then the part that goes I don’t feel like it gets me anywhere- when he gets body slammed to the ground or when he is at the table and he takes off his glasses and hat

You know that kickback is automatic- Grace lwk crashing out when he is told he is the replacement as scientist

I’m really happy people seem to be enjoying it!!! I got really scared that I wasn’t gonna get any comments or that people would critique how I wrote, or worse, get accused of Ai. But I think I was just overthinking a little.

I don’t think I’ve actually linked it on here yet so,

Anyways on another note, chapter one of my fic is almost done, I’m considering posting before getting it properly beta read for now. I’m scared I might chicken out and it sits in my notes forever lol.

I’m not a writer by any means, so it’s not that good, but it would feel kinda crappy if I just posted my rough draft

1.) Eridians don’t really have genders, so should I refer to Grace with just his name, it, or they when talking in Rocky’s or Adrien’s perspective?

2.) Would Stratt refer to Grace with his last or first name, or switch between the two?

3.) is it spelled Adrien or Adrian???? I googled it and all I got was that it was a gendered thing :/

4.) Would Stratt have the crew get surgery to remove their non vital organs? Such as thyroid, gallbladder, spleen, reproductive organs, and/or appendix?? In the fic I’m writing I have it as just Grace is missing some of those, but not specified bc I can’t figure out which ones would’ve been most important to get outta there.

5.) how do yall think Grace and Rocky would settle an argument? Like if one insulted the other harshly??

6.) Not exactly related to phm, but do people care that much about chapter lengths?

My current title is ‘I want a dream lover (so I don’t have to dream alone)’ and I think I’ll post the first chapter on Ao3 after I get back from vacation lol!

Worse thing possible is just have my mom help be fix any grammar and stuff because she’s an English major :p