now, since i claimed infinite critiques, i'll add what i actually have issues with in TME: the dismantling of any solidarity between dalish and city elves. this narrative of in-fighting among oppressed people (to the degree of murder in the book!), or overt rejection of diasporic people by people with some shared identity but different experiences, and vice versa? it's a real thing that can happen, of course. i have witnessed and experienced variations on this.
it's also a narrative that is intentionally perpetuated by systems of white supremacy, and i'm not particularly compelled by fiction that furthers it, unless it's writers of color thoughtfully grappling with the nuances and pain.
the dalish in TME are reasonable to distrust anyone who wants to protect a known genocidal monarch.
the keeper's "we don't give a shit what happens to city elves, they're not our people" thing is not unheard of, but also... get that out of here tbh.
same with briala hearing one dude's beliefs and deciding to fuck over an entire clan and swear off the dalish as allies, as a monolith. it's not unheard of, but it's also not the only story that could have been told, nor is it the best or most compelling story. if i'd been an editor for weekes for this book, i would have suggested other means of portraying briala's disillusionment and intense loneliness, or at the very least a brief moment where someone, anyone, among the dalish desperately cares about city elves, even if failing to singlehandedly fix immense state violence.
i'm just really ready for more narratives and visions of messy but earnest solidarity, community care, and nuance. and by solidarity, i don't mean DATV's "thanks for helping the mafia resume abusing child soldiers even though you don't even live in treviso, solidarity!!!" i mean, like, dalish raids on slave auctions in minrathous, rivaini seers and their spirit friends helping heal southern mages from tranquility, groups of antiauthoritarian qunari understanding and honoring the nature of the titans in their qun religion ("earthquakes must shatter the land") and helping dwarves, titans, and blight/darkspawn awaken and heal... and so on.