So Iâm planning on writing some sort of comprehensive review of The Amazing Digital Circus now that itâs officially over and Iâve seen it since the beginning. Itâs going to take a minute, but I am planning to finish and post it (and if you want to see it for whatever reason, it would help if you occasionally ask or remind me of it so I can get it done).
But I wanted to mention/address a few things to sort of set up the review so it doesnât bog down the actual post and go on rather unnecessary tangents. Giving context for a few things Iâm planning on saying.
The first one I want to mention is one Iâve been thinking of since the end of Murder Drones, which Iâve also seen; though I joined that series after Episode 6. And itâs a concern/thought Iâve had about the independent animation since coming onto the scene. Iâm not sure if it applies only to Glitch Productions as those are the only ones Iâve seen to completion, or if it applies to anything indie.
Itâs the concern of the series not getting proper pre-production critique and editing.
Iâm no expert on how production of a film or television series works, but I do know some of the basics. When a studio has a new idea for a story, they spend time refining it to make it the best it can be. Storyboarding and meetings to make sure the story flows coherently and has a strong direction. I remember seeing a post about how whenever Guillermo del Toro makes a new film he has it viewed by a select group of other film friends to give critique and pointers. In the post it said with one of his films (I donât remember which one, sorry) they said a scene was beautiful but ultimately unnecessary for the integrity of the film and story. Ultimately similar to a âkill your darlingsâ idea.
While, especially more recently, some of the creativity and continuity of a story is compromised due to corporate interference, itâs still the general goal to make it work as well as it can. And while Iâm sure in the indie scene they have a similar goal, I do wonder how much of that is emphasized and expected. Depending on how and who is working on the production, the team for an indie production is small, and potentially biased. In specific to Glitch and their works, I know their goal was to give a chance for the creator to do whatever they want without corporate interference. And while thatâs great I wonder how much of that ideal is taken too far. So much so no one is saying, âhey, maybe we can do this so the story is a lot more consistent and there arenât any gapping plot holes?â
Like, with Murder Drones, there was a lot of potential. And I know one of the main points was to analyze the story and find lore elements to make it more intriguing. But some of the basic story functions and beats are just⌠straight up ignored or abandoned and not followed through. The entire pilot and what it established was pretty much retconned when Episode 2 dropped. I saw part of a live stream with some die-hard fans rewatching the series and even they were complaining or at least pointing out the inconsistencies. Saying things like, âRemember how the murder/disassembly drones have to drink worker drone oil so they donât overheat and die? Yeah we never see that again.â
I know with Murder Drones it was implied some things changed after the pilot and they had to make in universe changes to make it go in the new direction, but The Amazing Digital Circus, at least what was implied in an interview after episode 2, was thought out and planned to be consistent. But, after seeing the finale twice, Iâm wondering if something happened behind the scenes, or Gooseworx was given too much free reign without any gentle but necessary criticism to make the story go from good to great.
Especially with the finale it felt like they ignored some points and lore made earlier and never addressed again, and/or they had a lot of cool ideas they wanted to implement but it made the whole thing seem disjointed and a bit unsatisfactory.
Part of me does want to give some extra grace for this as both series mentioned are technically the creatorâs first official series they made start to finish. Before they mostly made a couple of shorts or pilots. This being the first full blown project to complete is a big undertaking and that shouldnât be ignored. But I do still wonder if a little additional help with the writing would have made it better. And maybe in the future, both of the creators and Glitch, there can be someone who can say in good faith, âthe scene is beautiful but it makes no sense in the grand scheme of the story.â