Thundamoo's Confused Foray Into Social Media

Do you see what I mean!? She is simultaneously successfully transitioned, repressing, passing, and also completely unable to transition. She is so transgender it's hard to quantify, and all this is still ignoring the evil man walking around in her old body like Luna never existed, which is a long standing metaphor for detransition for a reason. Thundamoo, please keep doing these sick flips and shit, I'll go put your beer in the fridge for later.

One of New Dallan's Laik Nymphs prepares a mass driver attack. Nymphs typically operate at close ranges where their nano impulse swarms can tear vessels open, but their small size and limited fuel capacity restricts them to use in skirmishes or against comoving targets. Mass drivers are ideal candidates for longer range simulacrum weapons due to the lack of moving parts, but for them to be effective it will require the Nymph to commit a significant portion of its operational mass to the kinetic payload.

sometimes you just gotta draw cute girl

exist

Would get murdered by this author and story again

Fanart of Anath from the excellent book "Magical Girl Mechanical Heart" by Thundamoo. I drew this about a month ago from the description in the book so I'm somewhat gratified that she's recogniseably the same character as the official artworks I found later.

currently reading magical girl mechanical heart, here is my summary so far

She cares so much about what is happening to the world but fumbles almost every attempt at trying to do anything about it, and lashes out with petty retaliation at everyone she doesn't like, regardless of how much they're actually trying to help.

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Continuing with the Magical Girl Mechanical Heart Chibis I did up all the earth guardians in their early story incarnate forms. No class change variants yet. We've got Aurora, Veritas, Minerva, Fulgora, Castalia, and Amaterasu here in that order.

I would say that, as the author, you need to make sure you have a very firm grasp on the internal world of the person in charge... but the main character does not necessarily have to have that grasp, nor by extension the readers. I think it's a common mistake when making a fic about a character getting enslaved to either make the slaver uncomplicatedly evil or (depending on your purpose for writing, and we all know what website we're on right now) uncomplicatedly sexy. Both are very understandable. In the latter case, you're probably writing smut and that's pretty much the whole point. In the former case, well, if a character is okay with slavery I think it's reasonable to say they're exceptionally, unbearably evil entirely by default. But something can be evil and still compelling. Conflict is key. There should be situations where the main character doesn't want to obey and is forced to, and situations where the main character's goals align with their orders perfectly and they must begrudgingly accept that. This goes for whatever kind of master you choose to write. There should be a part of the reader that doesn't want the main character to be free, because they don't want to stop reading about their monster of a sire. Sometimes, when the master gives a cruel order, you want your audience to be feeling for the main character and lamenting along with them. But sometimes? Sometimes, you want them to grin alongside the master. You want them to laugh when they say "oh, you sick fuck!" out loud to their phone screen. And knowing where to put each of those moments is how you keep ratcheting up tension until you finally get to the point where you want it all to break. Basically? Make a villain that gets your audience to argue in the comment section. Make a character no one wants to look away from and give them all the power. I do this by making Melpomene a car crash in the shape of a woman, but there's a ton of different ways you can make your monster compelling. Pick one, make sure you understand it, and then let them enjoy playing with the protagonist like the bastard they are.

Thank you so much!