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Finding out this was in Tucson by going to the rink on a whim felt like seeing a celebrity.

Something neuroscience-y that helps with prose: attention is selective. A character will not notice everything in a room. They will notice what matters to their goal, fear, desire, training, wound, or obsession. A jealous character notices hands. a hungry character notices food. A soldier notices exits. A lonely character notices pairs. Description becomes character when attention has a bias.

it’s amazing how women are able to navigate crowded rooms without ever touching a palm to a man’s lower back

It’s amazing how MEN are able to navigate crowded rooms without ever touching a palm to a man’s lower back