A Warm and Joyful Ballard

-Don't use the term 'tight' since it doesn't mean arousal, when you're doing the do- it tends to be relaxed until when you climax. You tighten then release.

-A 'bulge' isn't a 'bulge', most erections are not a bulge but more of a stick looking formation in the pants if you are wearing looser pants. Not all pants are made the same- tight pants tend to have a bulge, looser pants have a tube looking bulge.

-If your two or more characters are in a smut scenario, please research how bodily functions work even if it is gross. Smut isn't suppose to be neat, it's suppose to be messy.

-Don't make your characters force 'it' upon the other.

-Crack a joke or two, sex is/isn't suppose to be serious- let loose.