Sorry for this critique. I enjoy the X Readers their fun,and entertaining and all but.
All the x readers i see so far are only venom symbiote. Not venom and eddie as a whole.
Where the fuck is eddie bear?!
Also fyi venom doeant eat brains all the time. Only like once every now and then and its only bad guys or those he deems bad guys. He eats chocolate to prevent that. So hes more likely to munch on a Hershey bar than some guys skull. Unless that guy is a lil bitch and hurting people. Then he gives no fucks really. But in the recent run of the comics he doesn't eat brains at all (the eddie brock one). Either straight up chocolate or pills to calm down. He's become more heroic. Still considered an antihero but more on the heroic side. Thats in the canon comics. I would like to have people show more of venoms soft side. Because we already know his badass scary side. Nobody ever explores his softer side. His sweet sides. And his intellectual side also. He's not stupid. Hes clever as fuck. Eddie used to be a journalist after all.
Please dont over use that eating brains thing Its annoying and boring. I know its canon and it is a thing but overusing it. Its bad writing. And also kinda puts a box on the character which eddie ,venom is more than about "eating brains" he has more depth than that. Waaaay more depth.
Sorry for being a bit critical. But i need really good venom x readers because nobody ever does them good.
Take my critique. I wanna help ya'll. Look into the depth of the character beyond what canon,fiction,and the surface of the character. Theres layers upon layers of a character. Especially eddie brock venom. Oh god there are layers. A whole fuck ton. So much to work with. And that what makes him interesting.
I might have to make a venom blog just so i can put out some good content because i ain't getting any.
Dont take this harshly. Yall doing good. I really do enjoy the content so far. Im so happy and proud of yall trying to be invested in this character. But im a huge venom nerd. And i want you to take care of my buddy well.
But you also have a lot of work to do.
I'm not a perfect person either. I procrastinate. And i struggle too. Sometimes i have to sit back and think. Would eddie do this? Or is this what some writers want eddie to do? I mean there is no one true way to write fan fiction. The only rules are have fun and keep writing.
But if i want it to be done good,the character justice and keep people interested. Im gonna need to think about these kinda things.
Because we only want the best for eddie,venom. :)
(Crap im talking third person. Lol) °~°