will it blend? feedback (LO4)
Illustration: I was told that it wasn't necessary to use a textual explanation in my illustration as it is quite self-explanatory. I agree with this comment and believe that without it it would be more intricate and open to discussion.
Colour: My group said that my idea was well communicated and they picked it up from the first sight.
Photography: one of my group members mentioned that it isn't clear that I'm showing the mankind by placing a male hand. I was also told that from far it doesn't look like tree bark.
Animation: I agree with the feedback I received about my animation. I think I could've pushed it further and developed more pages for the flip book to make all transitions smooth and clear.
Type: I'm quite satisfied with the way it turned out. Although, I agree that detecting wing shapes might be challenging. But I think this should be left to a discussion, as wings were not a part of the words I was blending. In my opinion, the chosen shapes can be seen as pathways of earwigs, where the chaotic lines depict uncontrolled movements of insects.
Sound: I haven't received any feedback for my sound experiment on Padlet but I was told in person that it was a well combined outcome and the message was communicated in a clear way.