#vespihive

Leaves and twigs crinkled and cracked under the Gallade’s feet as he strolled through the forest, a hand between his eyes and the sun, as if trying to ward it away. Yet another day had gone by, and his search for people to join the team he wished to create yielded no results, once more. An almost irritated growl escaped him at the thought. Why was finding members such a difficult task?

With a grunt, his fist lashed out, slamming into the side of a tree, leaves cascading down after being shook free from their rest. His breathing was heavy, the rage that threatened to boil over being restrained once more.

“Hold it together, Galahad....You’re fine....Just don’t give up, and remember your training....Who knows, maybe today will be the day you manage to make some progress!”

With that, the Gallade adjusted the scarf around his neck, wrapping it tightly around his neck and continuing on his walk. Hopefully he hadn’t disturbed anyone during his little...tantrum.

Her long nap coming to an end, Natsume’s eyes slowly began to open as the psychic examined her surroundings... however, those surroundings weren’t her home at all. Not even close.

W-what... where am I? Instead, the psychic found herself inside an enormous beehive, with honeycomb walls towering dozens of feet high as Combee buzzed all around. Meanwhile, her attempts to move around proved to be futile; she’d been trapped inside a vat of honey that even seemed to nullify her powers.

“Y E E S H! Now T H A T doesn’t look pretty, huh!? G o s h, that’s just gonna leave such a big, fat--”

Pretty soon, a Combee come along and nestles into the champion’s hair. The two Pokemon are buzzing at each other. Buzz, buzz. It seems like more Combee are on the way

[LITTLE GREMLIN MAN]

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The small fairy flitted up to the Gallade, arms crossed and seemingly disappointed.

“Why would you serve that bee queen!? She’s cold, mean, awful, and she’d put you on the death sentence if you even have a trace of pollen on you! She has no morals and no concern for anything that lives other than herself; not even her own kind!

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The Character in General: When I first saw Kart’chok, I thought she was underdeveloped and not realyl fleshed out. However? The more I’ve followed your blog, the more that opinion is starting to change! I noticed not too long ago you added more to her muse’s story, and recently the character has developed a voice all her own! It makes her stand out-- ESPECIALLY since you’ve given her a world to work with, with that world being her hive. This has made Kart’chok a character I WANT to see more, and one I am going to love writing with further! You are doing well with her, and I implore you to keep taking her further because she’s on such a nice track now!

How They’re Played: With the way you’ve been developing the character, I very much have come to appreciate her. She has a lot of arrogance and vanity, yet these traits are her empowerment. She doesn’t need anyone or anything to empower her, for she is her own empowerment. Such a trait in a queenly and regal character is something that draws them out in spades, so I absolutely have to point out that this makes her a great character to see. Your writing has also been improving as you’ve grown more comfortable with Kart’chok, so great job! 

The Mun: While I don’t know them all that well, I can say they seem very cool and nice! The way they write their character has also garnered my respect, and I cannot wait to further a friendship between us!

Do I want to RP?: Of course! Kart’chok is an interesting muse and I cannot wait to see how she develops further! It’s why I’m going to love throwing Casper at her(and I’m getting to our thread momentarily), since I personally want to see how she reacts to different things that challenge her empowerment!

Do we RP now?: Mmmmhmmm! We’ve got an ongoing thread, after all!