Praise Me Eddie - Part One
Eddie Munson x fem!reader
Warnings: 18+, rough oral sex, smut, swearing, graphic sex
Summary: You have a praise kink and Eddie is more than happy to exploit it.
Word Count: 3706
You walked out of the grocery story after your shift had finally finished. It was late probably around ten and the sun had set a few hours ago leaving the car park dark and desolate. It had been an absolute shit show of a day. Not only had the customers mostly been rude for the majority of the day, but your line manager had also been acting like a dick since he found out that you have a boyfriend. The same line manager that got exceptionally creepy before he knew that you and Eddie were dating.
You had gotten shouted at by a lady at the tills about how her tinned spaghetti-oâs needed to be discounted because they were dented after she had stood there mostly in front of you to throw them on the ground. After about ten minutes of that you decided that it wasnât worth it and gave her a five cents discount for each can. Then your creepy line manager had stood inappropriately close to you, breathing on your neck while telling you how it was against the store rules to do that. He then made you stack shelves for the rest of the evening as punishment. Not that it sounds particularly bad, but it wasnât exactly easy to stack the very top shelf for anyone, even with the ladder. So now, your back and legs hurt too and your manager was still being creepy. Occasionally walking up behind you to stare as you stood on the ladder reaching up to fill the top shelves. Ugh. What a day.
You walked over to your car which was parked near the back of the lot opened the door and slumped down into the seat. All you wanted was to see Eddie, but it was pretty late, heâd probably be stoned and on his way to passing out, you decided to make the drive back to your place. The drive was quiet and the roads were empty, your parents were probably already sleeping. Maybe you should go to Eddieâs, at least nobody would realise you were gone. Your parents usually wouldnât wake you in the mornings after a late shift so everyone would be none the wiser. Itâs not that Eddie wasnât allowed to stay the night but it was that we had to sleep in separate rooms if he did. Your parents thought that this would stop you from having sex. Oh how wrong they were.
You weighed up your options and decided that you much preferred the idea of getting into bed with Eddie after the day that youâd had. You changed course a little and headed towards the trailer park. You couldnât see any light from Eddieâs room, but it looked like the living room one might be on but the curtains were drawn. You hoped that it wasnât Wayne who was awake at this hour. You pulled your car over parking next to Eddieâs van before turning the engine off and getting out. You tried to be quiet as you walked up to door, knocking lightly. There were sounds coming from the other side and a few seconds later the door swung open.
Eddie stood there at the door in his boxers Hellfire Club shirt. You looked up at him, clearly tired. A slow smile spread across his face and his dimples appeared on his cheeks.
âHey beautiful,â his voice was low, âI wasnât expecting company this evening.â
âIt was a shitty day,â your voice was bleak and Eddieâs response was to step back a little leaving space for you to come in.
You moved forwards and into the living room looking around. Eddie had clearly been sat in here, the tv was playing quietly and the lamp near the sofa was on. He had some snacks on the empty sofa seat next to where he must have been sitting. Eddie closed the door behind you and walked quickly past you to clear the couch off. He plopped himself down and patted the now clear set next to him. You collapsed onto the sofa next to him kicking your shoes off and snuggled into his side.
âWhat happened beautiful?â Eddie asked wrapping his arm around me tightly, his hand stroked idle circles on my shoulder.
âJust more idiots and assholes at work and to top it off, Creepy Petey was definitely staring at my ass while he made me stack shelves.â
Eddie looked down at you, his face was serious, âDo I need to come down there and sort this guy out?â
You looked up into his eyes, âNo, itâs okay, youâll just get into unnecessary trouble. If he ever touches me though, Iâll be sure to let you know!â
âYou better. Iâll beat the living shit out of him if he ever lays so much as a finger on your pretty little head,â Eddie sounded dangerous when he replied.
You nudged into him, âYouâre so sexy when youâre overprotective Eddie.â
You looked up at him through your thick lashes, it always turned you on when he got possessive. Eddieâs gaze was locked on yours.
âOh yeah? You like that baby?â His voice was deeper and quieter now.
Hearing him call you baby always made you melt at the core and he knew it.
âYeah,â came your small reply, your voice sounded thick.
Eddie brought his face closer to yours, you could feel your breath mingling with his.
âMy sweet, sweet angel. Do you want me to make it all go away?â he asked brushing his lips against yours.
You couldnât find the words to say and so you just nodded, your lips bumping his lightly as you did. Eddie didnât need any more convincing his lips pressed against yours and he leaned backwards on the sofa pulling you across his lap to straddle him. You could feel the bulge through his boxer briefs growing beneath you. Your jeans added an extra layer of inconvenience in this situation, but you knew that Eddie would deal with that later. As you sat atop him, your mouths joined together, you felt his tongue glide across your bottom lip, it was a silent demand. Your lips parted and Eddieâs tongue slipped into your mouth. The man was good with his tongue, he tilted his head back and slid his fingers up your back and into your hair, guiding your head to follow his. His tongue grazed the roof of your mouth sending a shiver up your spine and coaxing a moan out of you. He did it again and you ground your hips down against him. He slid his tongue back between his lips and gently bit down on your bottom lip.
âSomeoneâs getting ahead of themselves,â Eddie mumbled as he pulled away from you.
âI want you Eddie,â you groaned out.
âYeah?â he teased, âWhat do you want from me Princess?â
âI want to feel you inside of me.â his cock twitched at your breathless words.
âYouâre impatient tonight Y/N,â he grinned.
The sound of your name on his lips was music to your ears. It sounded better when he moaned it though and you were determined to get what you wanted.
âEddie, please,â you whined batting your eyelashes at him and sliding your hands down his torso, towards his waistband.
Eddie grabbed your wrists with one hand, trapping them, âIs this what you want sweetie?â he asked pressing your hands against his hardness and grinding against them, âHmm?â.
Your answering moan was enough of a reply for him, and he chuckled. He pulled your arms up so that they were against his chest instead.
âYouâre being so naughty tonight princess,â he spoke somewhat sternly, âI thought that you liked being a good girl for me?â
You pouted at him; he knew your weakness. He leaned in close to you again, trapping your arms between you. You could feel his lips move against yours as he formed his next choice words.
âAre you gonna be a good girl for me?â he held your lustful gaze with a matching one of his own, âYou know I only reward good girls, donât you?â
âUh-huh,â it was barely a response.
âI want to hear you say it,â he demanded.
You paused and gulped before replying, âIâll be a good girl for you Eddie.â
âGood, now come here.â
He put a finger under your chin and pulled it downwards, but this time his mouth connected with your throat. He kissed you softly moving his mouth downward across your collarbone your t-shirt was in the way, but he continued knowing that the lack of contact would only make you more frustrated.
Eddie released your hands so that he could touch you, his right hand slid under your shirt and around your waist, keeping you gripped against him. The other slid slowly up from your navel to your ribcage over the fabric of your t-shirt, he teased you, lazily drawing small circles in between your breasts. You made sure to sit there and let him have his fun, knowing full well that you would receive the reward of a lifetime for letting him take his time with you. Thatâs just how Eddie liked it, he liked to be in charge of you and hell, you loved it too.
You felt his lips find the sweet spot on your neck and he started to suck on it, gently at first. His left hand brushed against the bottom of your breast at the same time, he trailed the back of his ringed fingers upwards and over your peaked nipple. The feeling ignited a fire in your core. You moaned loudly at the contact, and it was all you could do not to grind yourself against him. Eddie only sucked harder on your neck then you felt his fingertips against your breast, he circled around your nipple softly, avoiding the centre.
âEddie,â you moaned his name.
He grunted his approval, continuing his teasing. His finger and thumb clamped together on your nipple pinching it gently as you felt his teeth graze against your neck softly. The hand around your waist came upwards and pressed your body even closer to his. His mouth and hand kept working together in perfect time, his biting and sucking only intensified as he pinched and pulled at you through your shirt. You could feel your arousal soaking your panties. There were too many layers between the two of you and you moaned in frustration.
He pulled his mouth away from yours but continued to play with your nipple, you felt the palm of his thumb brushing over the sensitive spot slowly, too slow. Eddie leaned back and looked up at you, his eyes looked like molten chocolate and you were drowning.
âWhatâs wrong sweetheart?â he drawled, already knowing the answer.
You swallowed, your mouth was dry from the panting and moaning, âItâs too hot,â you whined needily.
âOh really?â Eddie replied, raising his eyebrows.
His smile was almost predatory, it was as if you were his prey and he wanted to play with you before he devoured you. God, you hoped he would.
âMhmm,â you nodded.
âShould I open a window for you?â he asked, knowing that that wasnât what you meant, the smile never left his lips.
You felt a blush spread across your cheeks and looked down at his hand on your shirt, your arms were resting on his shoulders so that they werenât in the way and his fingers continued playing with your chest.
âOh, is this the problem?â he pinched the tip of the sensitive nub again, but this time pulled his hand away still holding the shirt.
You gulped, âYeah.â
âYou need me to take it off for you?â
You nodded at him slowly, his gaze fell from your and you felt both of his arms rest on each of your hips under the t-shirt. He didnât make any move to lift it off of you instead pressing his mouth between your breasts, leaving small kisses. His mouth moved towards your left one. Eddieâs nose brushed gently against the underside and then over the peak. His lips circled it, brushing over the fabric. The teasing was almost too much and then you felt his left hand roaming upwards, this time under my shirt, it left a tingling trail as it travelled upwards. The combination of his skin on yours and the occasional brush of cold metal made you arch your back pushing your chest towards where his mouth was.
He was waiting for that exact moment before he taking your nipple between his teeth, running his tongue over it. Your shirt had become a big problem now and your moans were laced with desperation as you want to feel his tongue against your bare skin. Just as you thought about breaking your promise his other hand connected with the soft tissue on the other side of your chest. He was rougher this time as he cupped your other breast, pinching at the sensitive centre. His cold rings against your flesh only intensified the feeling.
You leaned your head back and squeezed your eyes closed, your moan ripped through you, and you felt Eddieâs hard cock twitch beneath you. Your fingers came up and fisted his hair, you pressed his head closer to you, needing more contact. It was Eddieâs turn to moan and the vibrations caused you even more pleasure. You were panting and moaning as he continued to play with your chest. Then without warning he pulled away. The absence of him was too much and you let out a disappointed groan. Eddie just chuckled and grabbed your shirt, pulling it up and over your head, he tossed it aside.
He didnât hesitate before putting his mouth right back where it was, this time both of his hands cupped the soft mounds of flesh on your chest. His pushed them upwards so that he could get better access to you. The skin to skin contact was pushing you far over the edge now and you could barely contain yourself, especially when he started to suck at the soft flesh. You felt his tongue curl around the centre and your fingers curled into his hair again. You felt your own need building inside of you. You needed more. You needed to feel him.
âEddie,â your voice came out hoarse, âplease.â
His only response was to nip lightly and your tender skin, drawing another moan from your lips. His head moved upwards trailing kisses along your chest, his other thumb only replaced his mouth. The kisses turned into sucking on your skin, and you knew that he was marking you.
âYouâre not in a position to beg, sweetheart,â Eddieâs voice was deep and husky, he continued his journey, his mouth pressed against your throat.
âI could be,â came your suggestive reply.
Eddie pulled away from you and gazed up into your eyes, âOh yeah? Why donât you show me?â
You wriggled away from him, his arms dropped away from you begrudgingly, as you stood up. You unbuttoned your jeans and slipped them off leaving them on the ground. His eyes roamed your body eating in the sight of you completely naked aside from your soaked pink lace panties. You leaned down and grabbed them hem of his shirt and pulled it over his head. Then you knelt over him. You put your hands on his bare chest, delicately tracing the outline of the tattoo on his left peck with your fingers. You leaned in and pressed a kiss to his jaw and began your descent. You carefully slid off of the couch and onto your knees between Eddieâs legs. You traced your fingers along the waistband of his boxers your fingers hooking underneath it slightly before sliding them down, he lifted off of the seat so that you could remove them. You gave him your full attention then gazing up at him, his member stood fully erect, so close to you.
Eddie stretched his arm out cupping your cheek, his thumb traced your cheekbone, âYou look so beautiful right now, baby.â
You felt a tingle spread through your body at his words, you pressed your thighs together as you felt the wetness between them grow. His thumb brushed over your lips, you caught it between your teeth still keeping eye contact. You ran your tongue over the tip of it eliciting a groan from Eddie. His free hand trailed up his inner thigh and he took his cock in his hand and started stroking it gently. At the sight of this you sucked his thumb into your mouth, swirling your tongue around it. Giving him a taste of what was to come. Eddie pressed it deeper into your mouth. You bobbed your head slightly sucking up and down never losing his gaze.
âFuck, Y/N, you have such a sweet little mouth.â
His words stroked your ego, and a shiver went down your spine, you moaned. Still sucking his digit.
âWhy donât you come over here and show me what you can do with it?â his voice was firm, and he pulled his thumb out of your mouth with a pop, a trail of saliva stayed connecting you.
You leaned forwards on your knees and placed both hands on his thighs stroking up the inside towards your prize. Just as your hands were about to reach him you dug your nails in a little dragging them back down towards you.
âOh, fuck,â Eddie moaned sweetly thrusting upwards into his hand.
You trailed your nails back upwards, this time one hand slipped up to his shaft replacing his own. The other slid down to his balls. You ran your fingernails over the sensitive skin there earning yourself more moans. You played with them gently as you gripped him tighter in the other hand. Your hand pushed upwards and pulled it back down exposing the pink head of his cock and you were overtaken by your lust. You pressed kisses up his thigh and when you reached your target you flicked your tongue out licking his balls. You sucked one into your mouth as your other hand worked him up and down. He pressed his hips up into your hand with each stroke.
âThat feels so fucking good baby.â
Your eyes connected with his as you trailed your tongue from his balls and up his shaft to the sensitive tip. He moaned in delight and his fingers reached into your hair, he pulled it out of your face and gripped it in his hand at the nape of your neck. Your lips pulled away and hovered above the end of his cock breathing heavily pushing the skin of it down with your hand. You put your lips together forming a pool of spit in your mouth before parting them again letting it drip down. As soon as it met its target you lowered your head and licked the sensitive tip, spreading a layer of spit over it. Eddieâs hand gripped your hair tighter as he let out a deep moan that made electricity shoot through your centre. You licked at him for a minute pressing your tongue against the slit that was leaking precum. It always felt so good tasting him. You slipped your lips down and over him slowly, pressing them against him tightly and sucking him into your mouth lazily.
His hips came up slowly to meet your mouth and you couldnât help the moan that escaped you. âFuck,â Eddie whispered watching you intently. You brought your head back up then down and worked your hand on his length at the same time, building your rhythm. Your other hand still fondled his balls as you continued sucking him. Each time you lowered your head you took him deeper and deeper in your mouth, sucking and swirling your tongue around him as you did. Eddieâs moans came more freely now and the hand in your hair was pressing you down with each stroke.
âYouâre so good at sucking my cock, Y/N,â Eddie growled. You moaned around his member, and he thrust upwards making the most of the sensation. He started to increase the pace, barely letting you breathe with each bob of your head. You could hear his moans coming faster, it sounded like he was coming undone.
âShow me what that mouth can really do baby,â he groaned as he held your head in place moving his hips upwards to meet it. The wetness between your legs was intense now, with each compliment he gave you it only grew more, and you were determined to please him. You felt him hit your gag reflex but didnât stop as he moaned loudly at the sensation. You removed your hand from his shaft and braced it against his thigh as you let him take control. His thrusts went deeper and faster, the head of his cock hit the back of your throat each time and you struggled to breathe. You grunted a little and pulled back a little to draw in some air.
âCome on princess,â he encouraged, âI know you can take it for me.â Thatâs all you needed to hear as you let him fuck your throat, enjoying every second of it. Your centre was soaked now, and your helpless moans came quickly. Each one was cut off in the back of your throat. You dug your nails into his thigh. Eddie let himself go then, his thrusts became needy and quick.
âFuuuuuck,â he moaned helplessly, âyouâre so fucking good baby. Donât stop.â
With one final thrust he screamed your name as he reached his climax, filling your throat with his cum. You swallowed every drop like a good girl looking up at him as his grip on you relaxed. But your mouth didnât stop and neither did the hand fondling his balls. You continued to devour him, milking him for every last drop. You saw his eyes roll back in his head as a deep moan escaped his lips. Then it turned into small panting moans.
âYou can stop now princess,â he whined as you finally released him from your mouth with a pop and a deliciously wet sound.












