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MOON 1: PART 1/2 - NEWLEAF

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Burnburst serves so much cunt but she is in fact an orange cat so is therefore a massive girl-failure. Here in Brackenclan we support women’s rights AND their wrongs.

First comic! I probably won’t colour and render every single background because I might actually die if I do that. I’ll keep the rendering to important scenes.

Aliases / Nicknames: creep

Gender: tom

Sexuality: heterosexual

Family: unnamed mother, unnamed father

Other Relations: unnamed mentor

Clan: Shadowclan

Rank: warrior

Characteristics: kills she-cats that aren’t interested in him

Number of Victims: 2 (1 attempted)

Number of Murders: 1

Murder Method: biting

Known Victims: Treepaw, Foxpaw

Victim Profile: she-cats he’s interested in, young she-cats

Cause of Death: crushed beneath a tree

Cautionary Tale: ??

Story:

Spoilers for 9-1-1 season 6

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The apprentices were initially scared when those strange plants made them woozy. The medicine cat informed them that although it was stupid to eat them, it wasn’t fatal.

It wasn’t long after learning that that they decided to sneak out and try the berries again.

They hit a problem when a younger apprentice, Treepaw, followed them and demanded to be allowed to try some as well, lest she tells on them. They didn’t want to get in trouble, so they gave in. Besides, it would look funny seeing someone try the berries for the first time. 

When Treepaw wanted to return to her nest though the night was still dark, Lowpaw offered to walk her home. Treepaw had begun to complain about still being treated like a kit. Lowpaw responded that she was already growing into a very pretty she-cat.

Treepaw got uncomfortable, focusing on their walk. Lowpaw pushed, saying she just felt weird because of the plants, and then she ran, and he chased her.

It had never been his intention to kill her, not until she ran and he realized that she would squeal. 

He buried her beneath the soil of a stream. Surely no one would find her then. And they didn’t.

Treepaw remained missing through Lowthorn’s warrior ceremony, through battles and gatherings. Her parents passed without knowing where their young daughter had gone, or if she was even still alive.

And Lowthorn was.... well, he was whatever the opposite of remorseful is. When he noticed another young she-cat, he didn’t hesitate to try his moves on her. But like Treepaw, she ran.

Unlike Treepaw, she had the fortune of not having had dizzying berries before running. Lowthorn had to take a breath, stopping beside the roots of a giant fallen tree. 

Then he heard creaking.

Additional Information:

--You can probably guess what the berries represent. 

--Character taken from Tanya in 9-1-1′s newest season, which I really enjoyed! Obviously some changes. I just wanted to put the warning above and not just after in case you wanted to watch it for yourself first. Specifically, it is The Devil You Know (on Prime Video).

The main four characters for my warriors oc story

from left to right; Pandapaw, Treepaw, Mosspaw, Squirrelpaw

They’re all apprentices, as you can tell, of Canopyclan, a clan that lives under a veritable blanket of trees and other foliage. Some details about these cats under the cut

Three apprentices walk into the forest, one the eldest of the three turned around too her two companions “come on you two! Im not going to explore the forest by myself am i?” she teased the other two. “I cant believe i let you talk me into this” sighed the masked brown tom “Newtpaw your going to be a warrior soon do we really have time for this?” he murmured before picking up the pace to keep up with the other two as they finally enter the forest.

Treepaw slowed down slightly to keep a healthy trot with Floodpaw “oh Floodpaw, It’s not going to do any harm, we’ll be back at Otterclan before we know it!” teased Treepaw slightly their orange fur glistening in the sunlight.

However the further they went into the forest the darker it got, they could still see the sky but there were no stars nor no moon. Treepaw shivered slightly as a cold wind blew past them. “Newtpaw we had our adventure…but it’s getting late we should head back now” they murmured Floodpaw nodding behind him, Newtpaw looked nervously forward before nodding, “yeah…I think you’re right.” As they went back the wat they came the longer they went all three noticed that it seemed the forest begun to loop as no exit drew closer. Floodpaw looked concerned as he spoke up “we didn’t go that far did we? No I know we didn’t go that far i aced tracking Newtpaw what's happening” he squinted his eyes towards the apprentice “you know something>” Treepaw looked curiously towards Newtpaw “Well I doubt you intentionally got us lost, I have to wonder about you’re guilty look Newtpaw” Treepaw meowed curiously as the trio continued padding along. Newtpaw looked between the two before sighing. “Okay maybe I remembered some scary stories from when we were kits about the eternal forest….and maybe the forest we entered weren't always here” Floodpaw turned towards Newtpaw in shock and anger “so you took us to a possibly haunted forest HOW MOUSE BRAINED CAN YOU BE?!” Floodpaw hissed loudly at the the older she cat who backed up a bit “O-obviously I didn’t know?! A forest filled with that mush horror I thought it was a kits tale to scare wondering kits…It can’t be true starclan would protect us..” Suddenly the trio heard footsteps behind them..loud…thundering, yet graceful all the same they turned around to see a cat that was taller than a large dog, wings coming out of its back, many,many eyes that watch all around it-the being had a sharp toothy grin that was threatening yet they could tell it wasn't supposed to be.

O h WhAtS tHiS a TrIo Of LoSt MoThs InTrUdInG oN My FoReSt No MaTtEr ThEy BeLoNg To Me NoW, I sHaLl ShIfT tHeM to FiT The FoReSt’s NeEdS The voice was femine , motherly but when it reached towards them thewy screeched in pain the thing tilted its head Do NoT wOrRy LiTtLe OnEs YoU ShALl BeCoMe OnE wItH ThE tReEs It ShAlL OnLy HuRt FoR a FeW hUnDrEd YeArS The trio felt the threat and ran the thing behind them giggled and gave chase, they ran and ran until they found a grotto for some reason it felt safe….like home, it may of been foolish but they ran in, Newtpaw ran until they found a gap in the roof and looked up to see the stars, It was only when they saw them  that they realized there santa single star in the sky until now. The being that gave chase tried to enter however it was pushed back by a mysterious force, the creature looked curious and tapped the force curiously and let out a boisterous laugh at the act of thew strange new barrier

Oh HoW eVeR cUrIoUs NeVeRmInD TuRnInG YoU tO tReEs IlL KeEp YoU ThE WaY YoU aRe SuCh A mErCiFuL RuLeR I aM. It said loudly before its wings fluttered and it flew away, deciding to abandon this hunt. Treepaw panted heavily as they looked at the other two, Newtpaw looked at the stars and said “starclan has protected us…” Floodpaw scoffed “and we wouldn’t be in this mess because of you, we’re as good as dead!” he meowed staring Newtpaw in the eyes before approaching her staring in her eyes. “You doomed us Newtpaw..” he said and laughed in sorrow

(the trio has encountered the Monarch of the forest that goes by names queen,king,monarch

The Monarch is available for questions)

hey cool look an outsider

next moon

Creekstar (124) is still feeling a little bit testy.  She got in a fight with Cavecatcher (28) over a pretty feather and ended up incinerating it.  But Rubbleheart (66) still looks up to her.  He turns to her when he needs some help with practicing wind magic with another cat. Now that her grandkits aren’t apprentices, Hopedawn (59)  is getting along well with the remaining ones.  She heckles RaccoonClan at a gathering with Treepaw (10), and Stonepaw (9) thinks that’s she’s not so bad after all.  However, Downgaze (51) feels like Hollypaw (9) should be doing more to help his mother through her grief and gets in a heated argument with him, saying some hurtful things about how he’s not powerful enough, or how he would be more help if he were star-blessed like his brother.  Downgaze might not be dealing with Vaxxstreak’s death as well as he thought.  Hollypaw brings up the stuff that Downgaze mentioned to Stonepaw and the two work through it. Archdapple (45) also wonders how Hollypaw is doing.  She remembers how differently she was treated because she’s star-blessed and how her sisters dealt with it. She hopes that Hollypaw’s alright, even with Stonepaw getting a lot of attention. Stonepaw’s training continues and, while on patrol, Archdapple shows Stonepaw how to use a bright flash of light to scare prey into another cat’s paws. Whorlstorm (15) seems to be becoming friends with the fearsome foursome.  She hangs out with Brightmouse (45) and Bluestripe  (45) while Archdapple picks burrs out of Brightmouse’s fur.  When the topic of mates is brought up, Greenrapid (26) thinks instantly of Skipneedle.  Meanwhile, Skipneedle (45) feels only friendship towards her. 

Healer’s Den: Downgaze (mangled tail), Almondback (torn pelt), Creekstar (grief stricken), Hollypaw (running nose)