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The art in the first adventure was absolutely gorgeous, it was incredible, everything was so detailed and vibrant and beautiful and haunting.

All the characters are really fun.

I wish the comic got into their characterization, backstories, motivations, etc more. I feel like all the characters were in a permanent state of potential without ever really progressing. I wish they had more character development because that would have been fascinating, but instead they don't really change that much.

The art definitely lost quality in the second arc, which I try not to judge because I know webcomic artists often have all sorts of other stuff in their lives like other projects or burnout, but it was still disappointing.

The monsters all look really cool and are incredibly well-designed horror-wise.

The look of the world is haunting and stunning and just generally really good. So much of the worldbuilding is conveyed through the backgrounds, which is another reason I was sad the art lost quality in arc 2.

I wish the characters had stronger relationships with each other. The cast is very small and typically that means they each have interesting dynamics, and they sort of do, but only a few characters felt like they actually got close to each other during arc 1, and then in arc 2 they sort of lost that. Emil and Lalli especially had a lot of character potential together, and I thought the chapters were they had to survive together while separated from the group would lead to a closer bond, but they interacted less and less as the comic went on.

The conclusion felt sort of weird. I understand wanting it to be left open-ended, but it just ended up feeling very unresolved.

It's really rare to see a story like this that draws on culture of the Nordic countries, so that's neat.

I like the way language is utilized, especially how Lalli only speaks Finnish. It makes him feel very separate from the rest of the group, since they literally and figuratively can't understand each other, which makes it more interesting when Emil starts learning to communicate. I also wish it got more into why Lalli is so distant.

They sort of moved on from Tuuli sort of quickly, it felt a little like the author got tired of her, I think she deserved more from the story.

Mikkel was stated to have been fired constantly from all his past jobs, but he always acts very calmly, he's relatively wise, and is the most reasonable person in the group, so those sort of clash.

The fight scene between the bears and the other monster at the end sort of went on too long.

I really liked the part with Emil and Lalli being separated from the group, I felt like it was an interesting situation with high stakes that felt desperate but was still good for characterization. The monsters were also neat.

The exposition was for the most part delivered very well, it trusted you to understand concepts based on how the comic presented them first, and then after a bit it showed the informational pages that gave actual names to things and clarified them, so it didn't feel like they were unnecessary but they also didn't feel forced.

The prologue did feel a bit too disconnected from the actual story. It probably would have been fine if it didn't give each minor character so many character traits, it felt like setting up recurring characters instead of extras and would have worked better if it was kept vague.

The outfit designs are all fantastic.

There were too many dangling plot-threads left at the end, there's a lot of stuff that felt unresolved and would have been nice to see explored.

Heart felt themself getting pulled out of the hole they called “Apathy” by Soul. They knew it was Soul, they had memorized his and Mind’s footsteps long before… this. They had memorized a lot of things about Soul; their footsteps, their disappointed sighs that could be periodically heard in between the fights of logical and emotional, the way they hummed whenever they felt particularly happy…

Heart had missed those little quirks, in the week they were in Apathy. They missed the home cooked meals, their soft bed, their vintage tarot cards from the 90s, their mirror, their plushie, their walkman… They missed everything so, so much.

They were pulled from their nostalgic and melancholic trance was they felt one of Soul’s hands slip under their knee and the other wrap around their shoulder. They were being picked up bridal style. Weird… Soul usually only carried them in a piggyback, saying bridal carry was somehow harder.

He felt how oddly cold Soul’s hand was as it held his upper arm. It concerned them. Had Soul been taking care of themself during the week he was gone? He really hoped they were. He was sure Mind was doing just fine. He was certain the bastard was cheering the entire time.

But, back to the present. He needed to ask Soul about their hands, they were getting concerned.

“(Soul?)” They called out, their voice a little raspy from lack of use other than their cries of pain and regret. No answer, other than a hum of recognition. Right, Soul was probably nonverbal again. That made sense, this was probably the most stressful period of their life. If only Mind weren’t vain enough to steal a crown that wasn’t his… if only he had checked the gun wasn’t loaded beforehand…

“(Are you okay? Your hands are cold…)” They said. They received back a hum of confirmation. Now that they heard Soul’s voice more, they realized it sounded hoarse and damaged almost. Had they been crying too? Probably.

A small beat of silence followed, before Heart pressed his head closer to his third’s chest. “(… Well, either way, you should take care of yourself.)” They felt themself being pulled closer. It felt nice, both the pressure and the affection. “(This wasn’t your fault. Okay?)” They said. No response, not even a sound.

…

Mind felt his bottom lip tremble a little at the last part of Heart’s sentence. Those words would have been much more reassuring if they were actually directed at him and were true. This was his fault. Or at least a major part of it. And he was sure if Heart could actually see him, they’d say that exact thing.

He brought Heart closer, pressing a small kiss on their forehead. It left a small blue lipstick mark on the space where the two bangs split. He saw them nuzzle further into his chest.