#song draft

Draft of my song, Portrait.

Here’s a draft so far. Vocals, guitar, and bass is all me. The drum track is from Max Backing Track on YouTube (fun channel name) haha.

There are things I definitely wanna fix because it sounds just very very OK. It’s not horrible, but it’s not good either. I feel my voice is too quiet in some areas. The bass is too quiet and too clean, my guitar sounds a little low quality compared to the rest (I think I had the mic too close to my amp tbh…), and I think the solo is a smidge too loud. OH WELL. 😼

so i made this draft of of a song i wanna finish and its basicly a buncha parts smushed together. the final piece will not sound the same AT ALL but this is the basic concept

AGHHH THIS IS MY FIRST ORIGINAL PIECE!!!!!!

the genre will be demoscene

Lately I’ve been feeling blue, blue colors rule my emotions, you know that’s true but bitch, you’ve got me seeing RED RED RED with all the shitty things that you’ve said, said but you’re tryna paint it in a pink hue fuck no, fuck you

Tsundere acts aren’t cute!

We are the power couple, you and me

No one will ever replace you in my mind

This can always be our timeline

The new girl’s nice, but she’s a bad habit

She may be cute, but she’s always so vapid

I think that you’re my sense of normalcy

All I really want is you and me

A beautiful firecracker lighting up my sky An eternal star that I’ll follow into the night You’re fierce, but damn, you’re kind I just can’t get you off my mind

You’re wild, but you’re loyal And you’re crazy, but you’re cute Carry yourself with the beauty of a queen But fight with the strength of a brute

You’re made of glass, but you’re tough as nails A beautiful sculpture reformed in the fires of hell I have never seen one so gorgeous They’re all lying when they say you look horrid

And oh your voice, it drives me insane High pitched and strange, but it makes me feel ok Rough around the edges, but you’re still feminine You’re made of happiness and adrenaline

You kind of scare me, but in a good way I hope I’m not asking this too late Won’t you make me the happiest man alive today? I’m in love, so what do you say?

Today was an interesting day An old fandom’s anniversary And I think for the first time in a while I can actually say That I’m truly fucking happy.

Not just a burst of excitement Or moment of enlightenment Nor just fanatic sentiment True internal contentment.

Realized I needed to celebrate But plans had already been made And those actually turned out great I had a very good day.

Catching up with someone I once knew Suffering through shopping none of us wanted to do Infodumping and chatting over very good food We even got ice cream too.

Home feels like home again Surrounded by all my friends Today’s already ending way too soon Tell Neil to keep banging out those tunes!

Things feel like last year again Did we really go back in time Or did we just preform a scratch? Remix it and start it all over to make sure our efforts last!

And, for the first time in a very long while, Well over some months, I fear I can say that while I didn’t always smile, Today I didn’t shed one tear.

I can feel the dirt on my skin The sweat on my face Breathing quickly out and in I feel so young again today.

And it’s odd, because I’m still young And who knows when this song will actually be sung But my perception of time messes with my mind It feels like centuries have bared this life.

I should probably go spruce up Get relaxed and call the day done But tonight for once I don’t wanna go down with the sun.

Because inside me now, there is a fire And the smoke is rising higher I don’t wanna stop burning bright So I think I’ll live a little longer tonight.

Because who knows how long this feeling will last Happy times can go by in a flash Will this sustain or was a spell upon this day cast? I’ll savor every moment ‘cause I’m not risking that.

Even those who hate me tonight cannot get me down Tonight I’m just not caring, and I have no idea how Makes me wanna climb up on the roof and shout ”You can’t hurt me anymore, and you mean nothing to me now!”

And I know that’s careless, I know that’s crass I know it’s conceited, I know that it’s brash

But just let me stop caring for one night, I need to let loose Need to go draw and screw around Gonna go down Faygo like it’s booze