#script edit

In Part 1 we have the Master telling Graham about his shelf of Doctor stuff and asking if he wants a look. Graham looks like he’s thinking about it.

Doctor breaks this up.

Later Yaz appears in the box, in the Master’s TARDIS (still waiting on an explanation as to why she was spat out there in particular but never mind).

Replace the time taken for scene with Ryan’s comforting because while I certainly like a bit of Ryan/Yaz cuteness I need the time, and it makes her look disproportionately traumatised vs. how she will act for Part 2.

In this version, give Graham the chance to comfort Yaz, nursing some not-iced tea, while the Doctor goes off to get Ryan and will ‘just be five minutes - unless we stop for donuts, would anyone like donuts?’, and the concept of the shelf is brought up by Graham to Yaz. The camera pans up ‘behind’ the shelf, the two characters gaze on it, with the Master behind them. With some Australian snake imagery around for when you rewatch this scene.

Then at the end of Part 2, when the Doctor does her bit of opening the floor for questions, have Ryan be the only one who’s asking questions, curious by nature as he is, and the other two, subtly not quite looking at her, until she does her Tenth Doctor Script, in surprise that she’s said anything at all.

For Gay Awakening, I modified the scripts for the credit endings and for the family quotes that occur after you let Chrom defeat Grima to include gay/lesbian relationships. Just paste the files into the /m/E folder (I believe the /E changes depending on region, but it should be the only folder in /m.) Should go hand in hand with UnassumingVenusaur‘s Gay Awakening hack. Don’t use these files for Fates: it’ll never work.

I have only written the Robin x character endings. No idea how to go about the other ones, but I'm welcome to suggestions.

NOTE: The game seems to rely on male units to build the endings?? So FxF endings don't appear, and I don't know how to fix that at this point in time. MxM endings, on the other hand, have two: one that is blank, and and that has the ending. This is, again, because the game relies on male units to build the endings.