#royalrpg

URL, ICON, & TITLE

Your URL is short and sweet, and though it doesn’t give me any info about the rp, I like it. I love your icon as well, very bold and eye-catching. Your title is good, too, but i would say “ROYAL- where dreams come true” because otherwise it doesn’t make much sense to me at all.

GRAPHICS & THEME

I like your header - the “y” being cut off at the end bugs me, but it’s not a big deal. I like the amount of saturation, and it matches most of the other pictures/graphics (sidebar image, history page, “follow” graphic) on your blog pretty well. Your event graphics don’t match, which bothers me. but they do look very professional! 

I think the same thing about the theme: very professional, and clean. The aesthetics of this blog are nice. 

PLOT

I high-key hate celebrity roleplays, but this one has a very unique spin. Not enough to catch my full attention, but that’s a personal preference. Your plotline is written well and is a good size; I would add a very short summary at the end of it (something like Summary: A celebrity rp set in _____ about ______. Anything that can fit in one nice simple sentence). 

I really appreciate the amount of work you put into the districts, venues, and character status page. It looks really nice and gives a lot of in-depth info!

CHARACTERS

The “Taken Celebrities” page just going to a masterlist bugs me: it took me a while to stumble across the bios, which is what I most want to read before deciding what my character will be like when applying for an rp. I would just put the “bios” link you have above the taken celebrities, or call that a masterlist or something. The bios page does look clean; I like that they all have links to their respective pages, and that they have their status clearly stated. I assume that takes a lot of upkeep!  

RULES & APPLICATION

Your rules are suuper long. Some of them do need descriptions (consent is key), but not all of them do (age limits). When I see a big block of rules like that, I automatically skim them. If you just narrow it down to the necessities, people will be more likely to read your entire rules page.

Your app is very basic, which isn’t necessarily a bad thing! Something I love in applications is when mods put in something fun that lets applicants play with their character: like a few questions that they answer IC, a mini-playlist, or a quote that really describes them. I think that’d really take your app to the next level! 

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