#rewrite sun

You know what’s in the Christmas spirit, dead children! That’s a joke

Anyways the July 16 Victims all have a design, and from left to right they are Evelyn (7), Jammie (6), James (5), Howie (9), Huey (4 1/2), and Jacky (10).

A few notes about their designs as a collective

I don’t tend to draw human children characters, so I went with clothes that seemed like small children would wear, either of their own choice or if their parents dressed them

Animal masks! These don’t represent anything, yet, but it gives me a way to not draw faces

The red marks signify what wounds they died from, a lot of them dying from blood loss

Jacky, due to being the oldest, did his best to protect the younger kids.

Black tears because I happened to be a fan of FnaF, and used that as a rough reference for designing these spirits.

Evelyn does in fact have a Sun plushie because it’s feel a bit incomplete without it

Version without black tears v

(Tw for blood)

While it isn’t July, and far from the 16th, we’re getting close to when it would be brought up in the rewrite so may was well cover what happened right now, right?

Bloodmoon is still the main cause of it, but for different reasons. When Eclipse made Bloodmoon through bits of leftover kill code, some of Sun’s more darker thoughts, and some of Sun’s code to take the blunt of the pain from attempting to take control he had also noticed that Bloodmoon may have another use.

The idea that Bloodmoon could be used to torment Moon with the guilt for all the kids killed. I mean, sure he would have to implant Bloodmoon into Moon’s mind, but it’s better that after he served his purpose than being trapped with a psycho.

And so, on the fateful day of July 16th, just after Sun put all the kids to sleep, Bloodmoon took control.

6 died in total. Evelyn, Jammie, James, Huey, Howie, and Jacky. In the rewrite all of them will be more relevant, not just Evelyn.

Anyways, after the July 16th victims well, die, Sun wakes up, and is almost immediately consumed by guilt and panic for something he didn’t even do.

Sun cleaned up, hid the evidence, and buried the bodies. It left something in him shattered forever, and he didn’t dare tell Moon.

Sun still gets his cats in this rewrite! Cleo’s still a tux, while I made Muffin orange since that’s what he is. If not in color, in spirit.

Anyways I’m just gonna go over how Sun got his cats, since why not and I have no clue if that was ever covered in canon, but it will be here!

Sun got Cleo and Muffin while he and Moon were still stuck in the same body sharing a body, and it happened one day when a daycare kid brought in a cardboard box that was making a lot of suspicious noises.

Sun naturally confiscates the box, since he assumed it was a danger to the kids, and after closing he finally gets to opening it, and finds two kittens in there. Sun just panics the first few minutes, I mean he’s never actually seen a cat before, let alone two.

The next few days are spent secretly using Daycare funds to buy stuff for the cats, and doing research on how to care for them. The cats are kept secret from everyone else at the Pizzaplex, mainly under the assumption that if they were found out about, the cats would get taken away.

Sun’s reference sheet is done! Of course, as the rewrite continues and more arcs pass, his appearance will change.

A few notes about Sun

He is still very focused on the daycare, so he more often than not wears this outfit

He’s more loud and energetic than Moon, but behind that he’s extremely anxious

Despite being the more social twin, Sun didn’t head out of the daycare often after separating due to having Nyctophobia (the fear of the dark)

(doing for ask from red anon)

We all know that at one point in time Sun and Moon shared a body, but not how it was. It wasn’t the best experience for either.

Sun could only come out when it was bright out, and Moon when it was dark. They were both in charge of taking care of the daycare kids during playtime and naptime. Moon hated having to take care of the kids.

Sun would notice how… violent, Moon was getting towards the kids and panicked. The only thing he knew to do to protect the kids was to keep the lights on. Permanently.

Moon thought Sun did that because switching between the two was too painful for Sun. That he was doing this out of greed.

Fazbear stopped Sun from always keeping the lights on due to complaints from parents about their tired kids. When the kids were asleep Moon would tear up and damage their shared body, knowing that Sun felt the pain of it just as much as him, if not more.

After hours were always spent getting repaired.

Even after Sun learned the painful lesson that it’s just worse for him to try and keep the lights on, Moon still chose to torment him as a way to get his pent up rage out. Better Sun than a child. That was always Moon’s excuse.

Moon would tear up almost anything Sun showed care to, even some of the kids drawing. If Moon couldn’t be happy, should Sun be?

I mean it’s not even like Moon’s reasoning “better Sun than a child” didn’t result in a few kids dying here and there. Sun was always blamed for their deaths, and the guilt tore him up internally.

Sun’s cats actually can tell that there’s a difference between Sun and Eclipse, most likely because they give off different atmospheres, and Eclipse’s indifference to the cats compared to Sun spoiling them rotten whenever.

They do treat Eclipse differently, Cleo avoids him and refuses any pets from Eclipse, and Muffin just puffs up and hisses at him. (The first time this happened it scared Eclipse, since he didn’t know cats could do that)

drew him in a pretty dress since he doesn’t get the opportunity to wear them otherwise