Sun still gets his cats in this rewrite! Cleo’s still a tux, while I made Muffin orange since that’s what he is. If not in color, in spirit.

Anyways I’m just gonna go over how Sun got his cats, since why not and I have no clue if that was ever covered in canon, but it will be here!

Sun got Cleo and Muffin while he and Moon were still stuck in the same body sharing a body, and it happened one day when a daycare kid brought in a cardboard box that was making a lot of suspicious noises.

Sun naturally confiscates the box, since he assumed it was a danger to the kids, and after closing he finally gets to opening it, and finds two kittens in there. Sun just panics the first few minutes, I mean he’s never actually seen a cat before, let alone two.

The next few days are spent secretly using Daycare funds to buy stuff for the cats, and doing research on how to care for them. The cats are kept secret from everyone else at the Pizzaplex, mainly under the assumption that if they were found out about, the cats would get taken away.

Because that is honestly wild to me

I didn’t realize that Moon would’ve stooped so low to sell his brother over to a bunch of strangers who are assumed to hate Suns just to earn the chance to clear their name. And not even consult your brother on it or tell him???

No “Hey Sun, the Moon Haven wants me to give you to them for experiments, you cool with that?” or “Hey, you okay with being experimented on by people who may or may not hate your guts?”?

Meanwhile the Moon in my rewrite, I personally love him he’s such an awful person and fun to write, actually refused to use his Sun as a bargaining chip. I mean sure he attempted to kill his brother, abuses him horribly, blames stuff that is his fault on Sun, and made sure that man has no support system but he somehow didn’t do something that Moon in canon would stoop low enough to do

…

(doing for ask from red anon)

We all know that at one point in time Sun and Moon shared a body, but not how it was. It wasn’t the best experience for either.

Sun could only come out when it was bright out, and Moon when it was dark. They were both in charge of taking care of the daycare kids during playtime and naptime. Moon hated having to take care of the kids.

Sun would notice how… violent, Moon was getting towards the kids and panicked. The only thing he knew to do to protect the kids was to keep the lights on. Permanently.

Moon thought Sun did that because switching between the two was too painful for Sun. That he was doing this out of greed.

Fazbear stopped Sun from always keeping the lights on due to complaints from parents about their tired kids. When the kids were asleep Moon would tear up and damage their shared body, knowing that Sun felt the pain of it just as much as him, if not more.

After hours were always spent getting repaired.

Even after Sun learned the painful lesson that it’s just worse for him to try and keep the lights on, Moon still chose to torment him as a way to get his pent up rage out. Better Sun than a child. That was always Moon’s excuse.

Moon would tear up almost anything Sun showed care to, even some of the kids drawing. If Moon couldn’t be happy, should Sun be?

I mean it’s not even like Moon’s reasoning “better Sun than a child” didn’t result in a few kids dying here and there. Sun was always blamed for their deaths, and the guilt tore him up internally.

drew him in a pretty dress since he doesn’t get the opportunity to wear them otherwise

(The only reason this took so long was the doodle :’) )

Moon goes to visit the Daycare after a few days without Sun reaching out to him. They need to get some gaming videos made, so better to get it done sooner than later.

But Sun seems to be acting a bit… off. The Daycare wasn’t clean for one, but maybe the kids just left. But if that was the case, why was he just standing there? Studying a plushie of Moon with a look of… distain?

Moon called out to him, and Sun(?) turned towards his brother and beckoned him forward, immediately putting on a act. He was still suspicious, but maybe Sun was playing a prank, or maybe it wasn’t Sun at all. Only one way to tell.

“Your not Sun, are you?”

In response, whoever was pretending to be Sun just cackled. And Eclipse revealed himself, explaining to Moon that he plans to be his downfall. He will be the end of Moon.

Moon, however, greatly underestimates this new foe. I mean, if Sun could seemingly keep Eclipse under control then surely he’s just bluffing.

Now when it comes to how Eclipse first sort of revealed himself, I hit a roadblock. Mainly because I couldn’t write romance to save my life and when Eclipse was first majorly hinted at it involved Sun going on a date with Roxanne…

Anyways, what happens instead is still pretty similar. Sun and Moon play some Uno with a few of the others, namely Monty, Glamrock Freddy, and Roxanne.

Sun still gets his crush on Roxanne, it’s just a minor plot point. He gets a bit flustered during the start of the game, especially when Moon somehow manages (with the help of Monty) to get Sun on a date. Great for him.

But near the end, Sun starts to act a bit… off. He’s more aggressive, his eyes take on a more orange color, his voice seems a bit deeper too.

Moon points this out, and it just gets a violent reaction out of “Sun”, who ends up slamming Monty into a wall before leaving the game of Uno.

Sun afterwards had no recollection of what happened.

Almost immediately after Sun leaves Moon’s lab and heads back to the DayCare, and he looks through some of Moon’s files on the computers.

One of them should give a clear enough instruction for him to figure out how to enter his own mind. Simple enough, and something Moon did when they shared a body to….

Nevermind. Getting off topic.

Sun manages to, temporarily, get himself stuck in his mindscape with Eclipse. He doesn’t entirely know what to expect, but… maybe Eclipse is just scared?

He’s immediately proven wrong when Eclipse just laughs in his face. I mean why would Sun get himself trapped in here? Just to have a chat? Really? Eclipse cannot believe that he’s just that stupid.

But… there is a prime opportunity here…

Apologizing for just laughing in Sun’s face, Eclipse introduces himself with a very fake smile plastered on his face. And he offers him a partnership of sorts.

“Moon has done horrible things to both of us, so why don’t you help me. It’s really simple. You let me take your place, and then when I get the star and my own body you can have yours back.”

Eclipse is an opportunist, and Sun is one of the closest to Moon. But sadly for him, and luckily for Sun, the connection gave out before he could give a answer.

But that only puts it off for so long.

Is this canon? Hmm…

We’ll just have to see.

Honestly if anyone familiar with the audio I bet you’ll be able to guess what happens next