#rewrite eclipse

(Tw for blood)

While it isn’t July, and far from the 16th, we’re getting close to when it would be brought up in the rewrite so may was well cover what happened right now, right?

Bloodmoon is still the main cause of it, but for different reasons. When Eclipse made Bloodmoon through bits of leftover kill code, some of Sun’s more darker thoughts, and some of Sun’s code to take the blunt of the pain from attempting to take control he had also noticed that Bloodmoon may have another use.

The idea that Bloodmoon could be used to torment Moon with the guilt for all the kids killed. I mean, sure he would have to implant Bloodmoon into Moon’s mind, but it’s better that after he served his purpose than being trapped with a psycho.

And so, on the fateful day of July 16th, just after Sun put all the kids to sleep, Bloodmoon took control.

6 died in total. Evelyn, Jammie, James, Huey, Howie, and Jacky. In the rewrite all of them will be more relevant, not just Evelyn.

Anyways, after the July 16th victims well, die, Sun wakes up, and is almost immediately consumed by guilt and panic for something he didn’t even do.

Sun cleaned up, hid the evidence, and buried the bodies. It left something in him shattered forever, and he didn’t dare tell Moon.

Sun’s cats actually can tell that there’s a difference between Sun and Eclipse, most likely because they give off different atmospheres, and Eclipse’s indifference to the cats compared to Sun spoiling them rotten whenever.

They do treat Eclipse differently, Cleo avoids him and refuses any pets from Eclipse, and Muffin just puffs up and hisses at him. (The first time this happened it scared Eclipse, since he didn’t know cats could do that)

(The only reason this took so long was the doodle :’) )

Moon goes to visit the Daycare after a few days without Sun reaching out to him. They need to get some gaming videos made, so better to get it done sooner than later.

But Sun seems to be acting a bit… off. The Daycare wasn’t clean for one, but maybe the kids just left. But if that was the case, why was he just standing there? Studying a plushie of Moon with a look of… distain?

Moon called out to him, and Sun(?) turned towards his brother and beckoned him forward, immediately putting on a act. He was still suspicious, but maybe Sun was playing a prank, or maybe it wasn’t Sun at all. Only one way to tell.

“Your not Sun, are you?”

In response, whoever was pretending to be Sun just cackled. And Eclipse revealed himself, explaining to Moon that he plans to be his downfall. He will be the end of Moon.

Moon, however, greatly underestimates this new foe. I mean, if Sun could seemingly keep Eclipse under control then surely he’s just bluffing.

Now when it comes to how Eclipse first sort of revealed himself, I hit a roadblock. Mainly because I couldn’t write romance to save my life and when Eclipse was first majorly hinted at it involved Sun going on a date with Roxanne…

Anyways, what happens instead is still pretty similar. Sun and Moon play some Uno with a few of the others, namely Monty, Glamrock Freddy, and Roxanne.

Sun still gets his crush on Roxanne, it’s just a minor plot point. He gets a bit flustered during the start of the game, especially when Moon somehow manages (with the help of Monty) to get Sun on a date. Great for him.

But near the end, Sun starts to act a bit… off. He’s more aggressive, his eyes take on a more orange color, his voice seems a bit deeper too.

Moon points this out, and it just gets a violent reaction out of “Sun”, who ends up slamming Monty into a wall before leaving the game of Uno.

Sun afterwards had no recollection of what happened.

Almost immediately after Sun leaves Moon’s lab and heads back to the DayCare, and he looks through some of Moon’s files on the computers.

One of them should give a clear enough instruction for him to figure out how to enter his own mind. Simple enough, and something Moon did when they shared a body to….

Nevermind. Getting off topic.

Sun manages to, temporarily, get himself stuck in his mindscape with Eclipse. He doesn’t entirely know what to expect, but… maybe Eclipse is just scared?

He’s immediately proven wrong when Eclipse just laughs in his face. I mean why would Sun get himself trapped in here? Just to have a chat? Really? Eclipse cannot believe that he’s just that stupid.

But… there is a prime opportunity here…

Apologizing for just laughing in Sun’s face, Eclipse introduces himself with a very fake smile plastered on his face. And he offers him a partnership of sorts.

“Moon has done horrible things to both of us, so why don’t you help me. It’s really simple. You let me take your place, and then when I get the star and my own body you can have yours back.”

Eclipse is an opportunist, and Sun is one of the closest to Moon. But sadly for him, and luckily for Sun, the connection gave out before he could give a answer.

But that only puts it off for so long.

So i have a question, please. How did Eclipse react when he woke up in Sun's head after he was just abandoned?? Was he scared? Was he angry?

By the way i love how you draw them!!

“…” - Eclipse

Both. Betrayed, angry…

scared…

Also thanks for liking how I draw em!!

Barely a week passes before Sun comes to Moon’s lab. He was acting off. He seemed stiffer, colder, and just not like Sun at all.

Moon immediately guesses that it’s Actually Eclipse, and he immediately drops the facade. Moon simply asks what he’s even thinking, going directly towards him, somewhere where he has his tools, especially after Moon had threatened him.

And Eclipse explains why. He comes with a deal. A deal that’s best for the both of them.

“You can give me the Star, and I’ll leave you and Sun alone, mostly, and out of harms way… or… You don’t, and I kill Sun. Make sure that there is nothing left of him to bring back.”

He lies about the Star not even being finished, and while extremely suspicious, Eclipse accepts his answer. He says that he will be back in two weeks, and by then Moon better have an answer. And then Eclipse allows Sun to take back control.

Overhearing Moon muttering about the Star, and what to do if Eclipse’s threat is serious, Sun asks what’s going on.

Moon refuses to give an answer, saying that all it’d do would be put him in harms way. That he’s better off not knowing, as if he didn’t promise to include him barely even a week ago.

Moon, still extremely pissed off after his “chat” with Eclipse, storms out as soon as Sun isn’t as disoriented, storms out and into the woods. Sun follows behind to act as damage control.

After about a half hour of trailing behind, Sun asks what happened, and Moon, who still hasn’t calmed down, explains that he essentially threatened to kill Eclipse. When Sun pushes the issue more out of concern, he blows up at him, hitting Sun in the process, and lets it slip.

Moon yells that none of this would’ve happened if Sun didn’t let the killcode he left behind develop into Eclipse. Sun, feeling betrayed and scared, rightfully so, runs off to the Daycare.

Moon ends up following Sun to the Daycare, with the hopes of having a conversation with him. Sun reluctantly agrees, and he explains that he didn’t mean to hit Sun, and that it isn’t entirely his fault that Eclipse came to be.

And Sun, shockingly enough, actually accepts that apology. Moon then promises to start including Sun in the plans to stop Eclipse, even if he silently decides to use Sun more as bait than anything…