When we showed it to the class they gave us some good feedback. They said we had some good close-ups of the coke bottle and a very nice composition. People said the shot with the faded clock over the top could have had a sped uptime to show how long she had been studying. They said the editing allowed for a good flow. Although, people said the last shot was unnecessary and held us back from a distinction grade.
Finally, the feedback concluded that the music should fade at the end, although in the middle of the advert it was a good effect to make the music get louder as the bottle opened.
Overall, it was the final shot and the lack of music fade that let the advert down despite that the advert was a success with people commenting on how good the composition was, also how using a variety of camera angles was a positive..