#my re-write

squirrelwhisker and eaglestorm are kits born just before the creation of stormclan, they grew up and became warriors together in stormclan and traveled with stormclan, but when they came back to the forest they separated to live in their birth clans, thunderclan and windclan respectively

squirrelwhisker and eaglestorm couldn't bear being apart from each other, so eaglestorm moved to thunderclan so they could be together and it didn't hold the same amount of stigma as it usually would since everyone understood they literally did used to be clanmates and grew up together

gorseclaw and fawnpelt become mates after tumbletail left with stormclan and they later have oakstar

spottedpelt and grassfoot become mates after grassfoot re-joins thunderclan and have silverhawk and foxtail (my own oc)

silverhawk and emberdawn have beetail

foxtail and her mate have mapleshade and deerdapple

well let's start with his ref sheet. This is a bit old but i'll do, it's still his design, some is subject to change but not much, maybe just some colors.

and this is the actual one that has been posted

So how we got Christofern, was he was a baby(maybe like 1 or 2) that during the March of the oni, got lost and as a defense mechanism of the Oni species, he became a plant, aka the first thing he saw when he stared panicking. So after a while he (as a plant) was sold to vinny(this sounds so wrong please bear with me), and ended up with Garmadon. Now Chris can hear all that's happening around even though he's a plant, so this does me that well, he heard Lloyd yell at him/Garmadon in crystalized, this makes him somewhat scared of Lloyd when they first meet.

but he forgives Lloyd really quickly because he's well he's like 2-3 so since Lloyd's being nice to him now, obviously it's ok. Anyway, so they figure out Chris is an Oni when, after Crystalized, and the Ninja not being statues anymore (my re-write, which well that's a different post), Lloyd goes up to see the plant, cause he's feeling a bit better about it and his relationship with his dad, and well he's able to sense that Christ is not a plant... so after getting Garmadon and wu they are able to help Christ take a human-esk form, it's not a full oni form, cause Chris wanted to look like Garmadon's son, who is lloyd so he based it after lloyd to some extent.

They "find" Chris when the Other Ninja are off getting their powers back, so when they get home, lloyd has another siblings, they are all shocked.

The flower Chris wears is a Astragalus, which means "your presents softens my pain" Lloyd gave it to him as a kind of apology for yelling at him in crystallized.

I think that's all I have on him for the time being, so hope you enjoyed my info dump.

Awww thank you! I tried my best with what we got, and I agree with you: the show’s legacy could and should have been epic. It’s a shame the potential was wasted!

I need to remind everyone that the re-write of 15x20 I made was in no way my ideal finale. I only wanted to prove that even that disaster could have been better if the writing hadn’t been so bad. (It looks like purposely bad, sometimes). 

If I could write the show’s finale, at the very least, I would not dare to kill Dean and I would resolve his emotional arc. 

Here’s my re-write for those who haven’t read it yet: 

so he's actually kind of swiftpaw, but with shrewpaw's fate meshed together since shrewpaw doesn't die as an apprentice in my re-write, the only reason why it's a quail instead of a pheasant is because it feels weird using the exact same prey as what happened with shrewpaw when that's the ONLY time the cats ever mention hunting pheasants (i think) so that would feel too... copying

also runningwind was his mentor and runningwind blames himself for swiftpaw's death because he's the one that told swiftpaw they had to catch this prey no matter what and he hadn't realized how close to the thunderpath they were, he tried to call him back, but it was too late

-patchpelt and rosetail aren't elders yet because if bluestar isn't old yet why the hell would they be elder age yet

-that being said, the only reason dappletail is an elder already is because one-eye decided to retire because her sight and hearing wasn't as good as it used to be and those two are closer to each other than they are/were with their biological siblings. dappletail stayed back as an apprentice to stay with one-eye when she had to be an apprentice for longer, she's retiring to the elder's den with her too. you CANNOT separate them!!

-patchpelt and rosetail are redtail and spottedleaf's parents, but they're no longer mates, they are best friends though! they love each other platonically, they just both realized that they don't actually like each other like that because they're both gay lol

-willowpelt was adderfang and swiftbreeze's kit (second litter)

-redtail and runningwind are sandpaw's parents

-willowpelt and whitestorm are graystripe's parents 😉

-bluestar and rosetail are mates

which i'm GOING to, i'm going to start it all over again, i have way more ideas that are way better and planned out for the first arc and i want to actually like... WRITE it and not just mostly posts with bullet points of events

the question is...

i AM actually working on it!! but i have decided to not actually continue the writing part until i have made an outline of the entire first arc as to make sure i have all the details right and the timeline makes sense