Hi, I'm a rising senior in college hoping to attend grad school for computer science. Do you have any tips for writing a strong personal statement? How important do you think publications are?
Hi! Iām glad youāre looking into this so early and Iāll try to offer you advice pertaining to your question.Ā
My top 6 advice points:
Think of what makes you stand apart from others. I know this is cliche, but itās true. Then, try to back it up with a relevant example. Iāll give an example that my med school applicant friends have: the generic gist that most people give for the reason they want to become a doctor is because they want to help others, right? But the BEST med school essays Iāve read are when they not only talk about how they first got interested in medicine but how they made ACTUAL steps towards their interest/ actively contributed towards their interest. Itās one thing to just be likeĀ āoh yeah I like helping people and science and medicine so I want to be a doctorā but another thing to be likeĀ āI created an organization, I volunteered xx hours, I wrote this paper, etcā and I think thatās where lots of essays sort of fail.Ā So basically, what Iām trying to say is: make sure you back up your interest with ACTION that youāve done in your personal statement.
QUANTIFY YOUR ACCOMPLISHMENTS IN YOUR STATEMENTS!!! Instead of sayingĀ āI built 8 robotsā, saying something likeĀ āI integrated 8 robots during my three months at the company, saving the company over $500,000 in costsā sounds much better. If your resume isnāt up to date with everything (specifically, try to quantify everything you can), definitely work on this. This helps in personal statements!
Let a handful of people of varying closeness review your essay. For me, tbh I am prideful, but I have to learn to let this GO. Because these people genuinely want to help you! If your essay sucks, itās better you know from these people vs the admissions staff! The reason I say handful of people of varying closeness is because sometimes your close friends arenāt really great in writing, so you want more than one source. Better yet, ask a professor or a manager - basically someone who isnāt your friend. All of the people who reviewed my personal statements definitely helped me (even if I didnāt take in all of their suggestions!)
Try to tailor each personal statement to the college, if you can. For me personally, I tailored each personal statement slightly to the college I applied to. For UC Berkeley, Iād say something likeĀ āI would be honored to be admitted to UC Berkeley and can truly imagine myself walking through Sproul Plaza. The world-class staff is amazing for the field and blah blah and Iām confident I will become a better xxx from the programā (well, word it better; Iām free-balling here). Basically, explain *briefly* why you want this particular school and how you can see yourself FITTING in. Donāt overdo it though, obviously - it would look tacky.
Really pay attention to the specific prompt that each college states. Some mention to explain your interest, while others ask to explain why you want to attend this school, etc. Pay attention to the prompt and make sure you answer each component! Donāt just send out the same personal statement to each school!!!!!
Give yourself TIME to write. Iām not sure your process but for me, I give myself plenty of time. And Iāll just literallyĀ āugly-writeā (sorta free-balling writing, a very draft form of my essay). Then Iāll continually fine-tune it. Honestly, sometimes Iāll write and look back two weeks later and Iām likeĀ āew that sounds weirdā and reword it. Time helps give you some distance and able to see things in a different light.Ā
Also, Iām not sure about publications for computer science but Iām thinking they definitely wouldnāt hurt! I think it falls under #1 & #2 above of standing apart & quantifying your accomplishments (I wrote xx publications that discussed xx and xx). You didnāt specify PhD or if this is a masterās program but from my understanding of phD programs (Iām in a masterās program), itās research-heavy and a publication would definitely show you are interested in research so itās like a necessity. For master programs, I think it wouldnāt hurt to have but my personal experience is that master programs arenāt as competitive so publications arenāt **necessary** but obviously they give you a super edge against other applicants!
Hope this helps!!









