#liquidchocolatecake

@kichi-kins​ @parasitic-boyfriend​ @liquidchocolatecake​

you three. please acknowledge that i owuld fuckign kill for you 

Or Else

I don’t know if my suggestions will be any more helpful thananyone else’s but here you go!

If you think the problem is because nothing is happeningbesides the characters talking then try making them have the conversation in a lessideal (or dangerous) situation.  Insteadof sitting in a room, have them stuck outside in the rain or taking the stairsto the tenth floor.  Or try putting themin a public place, like the middle of the store/classroom/office or on abus/train so there is a (potential) audience to their conversation.  Or have at least one of them doing anactivity that involves physical actions for the entire conversation (washingdishes, building a birdhouse, playing with their cat).

Rewriting is also a great idea.  Even if you keep the ideas the same, the actof writing it out again can jostle up new aspects of the scene.

You could also try summarizing the chapter.  Write out a three sentence summary of whathappens.  Then start again and write asix sentence summary.  Then write a ninesentence summary, etc.  This will helpyou to find the important details.  Andhopefully, as you keep expanding, you will find the chapter taking shape andyou will just be able to start writing.

i have delivered the soup as you requested

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oh hewwo!!!!!!!

2: Which character did the game handle the best? Why?

I’d argue either Momota or Ouma. I really enjoyed their characters on their own and I feel like both of them ended up being super competent, (even if I guess I found them grating at times like chapter 4 lmao)

4. Did free time events change your opinion about a certain character? What did you learn about the character through these events?

Oh, I haven’t watched all of the FTEs yet but I guess… while there weren’t any free time events that /significantly/ changed my perspective on a character.. I know that Korekiyo isn’t everyone’s favorite lmao (he isn’t mine!) but his events were pretty interesting, and after watching them I forgot he was Like That for 30 seconds. (sdr2 gave us Akane and Souda whose free time events made me like them a LOT more! I don’t really know if there’s someone like that in V3.)

12. Who is the most underrated character? What makes them stand out to you?

Ryoma. He’s very surprisingly unpopular and I don’t see a lot of content about him. He has a solid backstory, he likes cats, it’s like, even I don’t know what to say about him because there isn’t a lot of fanfare for him. I feel like we missed a lot of potential with him. I remember reading one time that Ryoma’s struggling while Kirumi drowned him was proof that he still somehow wanted to live, and I found that pretty sad…

20. Does Shuichi make a good protagonist? Why or why not?

Yeah! I think he does. He’s my favorite male protag among the 3 games, I feel like he’s very competent at what he does and the fact that everyone was relying on him gave him a lot of pressure. He’s probably the most relatable protagonist for me. I’m not sure if Kaede would’ve been more competent (she could be! I don’t know!) but I’m okay with Saihara being the protag instead of her?

i think ive lost enough sanity as is, 

YOU BUFFOON 

at least youre okay but