Iām answering all of these forĀ āActs of Repetitionā!
2: Post a line from your WIP with no context.
āYour New Year sounds like a Beshmaās Day back on Kahje. Endless plates of food, bowls of snacks everywhere.ā
9: How would you describe your writing style?
Slice of life of a working detective on a space station, funnelled through the lens of a sardonic alien.
Whenever I put excerpts into that āWhat Author Are You?ā game, I get Agatha Christie, which Iām very pleased with as a (mostly) crime writer. Ā I donāt think I am anywhere at her level- I think I do okay with dialogue and characters, but descriptions need a bit of work.
16: What would your characters be for Halloween?
HANDILY Iāve done this:
Theyāre meant to beĀ āPopular Gothic Human Couple,ā but who knows if The Addams Family is rebooted in the 2190s?Ā This party was just casual talking and boardgames- definitely happened after Sirens & Selkies, Kolyat wouldnāt invite anyone from work to his home around Repetitions. The other guests:
Bats would be something half-assed, like turns up in a bed sheet and says itās Athameās handmaiden, whereās the booze. Heās also secretly pleased about the Bats decorations Ori made and steals them after
Hoorik forgets and/or runs out of time, but she would turn up late with good whisky she hides from Bats.
Fish got to the highest point of the apartment to watch it all, and hissed at anyone who dared to approach her. Kolyat was very nervous about her being upset, and thought about shutting her in his bedroom- but she was quite content to people watch in safety and put the peasants in their place.
Patel goes all out, to an embarrassing level. Full on handmade Dracula with plastic cape and theatrical yelling, even refusing to take out his fangs to talk.
Vitacus joins in on the fun and is the kind of costume he always has to explain as no one gets it, an obscure background character from a turian movie. He also turned up with fun boardgames (ones you can play drunk and in groups, not stuffy chess and patix like Kolyat plays) which saves the evening. Ori even calls him her hero!
Phalia does something amazingly perfect, like a professional recreation of a Fleet & Flotilla costume, and probably recycles it after for her sonās many after school activities.
My HC for 2190 Halloween is that it just isnāt celebrated much anymore, Ori certainly doesnāt,Ā but because itās a fun theme most races understand (candy? Costumes? Fun!) humans throw the occasional party in interspecies gatherings.
Turians arenāt so keen on the parading of the dead- so zombies/spirits are a very strict no at Halloween functions. But dressing up as the equivalent of 2190s Batman? A-OK, thatās fun.
17: Does your WIP have any themes or motifs?
Yes, and some of them just happened:
Immigration guilt filtered through being a minority in C-Space
Construction and rebuilding
Moving on from trauma
Iām not in love, so donāt forget
Loneliness in a busy WardĀ city, and making connections in it
Background hum of politics: drell, Council, C-Sec
The usual homicide and violent crime, this time a curious case of a mould that kills
19: Post a picture or gif that describes your WIP
I tried to mash a gif with all the covers but it didnāt work, so have the last chapter covers:
20: Post a brief excerpt:
The holotape of a crime scene perimeter glimmered over the apartment door. Behind it, Phoy Calisi had crammed the walls and surfaces with dusty knickknacks and hand-made mementos, hardly keeping to the fanatical Siarist beliefs about limited possessions.
A mass of plain frames in the living room took up most of the space, though the holos were switched off. Even the furniture bent to face them, a mute congregation set around an altar.
āHappier times,ā Patel said, tapping the glass to wake up the screens. Images of Phoy and her children scrolled by in holo, a pre-war life of colony vacations and outdoor hiking. āHer daughters were on Thessia. Didnāt make it.ā
āSo itās a shrine,ā I replied. Other species were strange about the remembrance of their dead; even Ori thought of her parents in odd ways.
-the cursor blinked. I had to send out invitations to people Father knew for his memorial service, a weird fucking custom. What was I meant to say? Ā Who would know- Shepard, she would. Did he even have other friends but her, what-
If you could forget the face of your family, would drell think the same?
Patel looked me over before he spoke, curious at something. āJust an ordinary home, lad,ā he said. āWeāve been to worse.ā
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8. Ā Favorite indulgence and feelings surrounding indulging. Ā
Hoorik: weed, legal strains thereof. Hoorik likes her plants; calms her down and makes her ruminate on the metaphysical.Ā
Bats: hard liquor, fucking and fighting. The issues surrounding all three is a lot to unpack, possibly an entire carousel of rotating suitcases worth, so letās just uhhhh leave that alone for now.
Patel: food! Fried, sweet things. Always happy to indulge too, and to show his love with cooking; always makes jalebi for his girls.
Vitacus: dancing and awful action vids. heās okay indulging in both, but has some baggage surrounding hookups.Ā
11. Intellectual pursuits?
Hoorik: reads heavily, a wide mix of subjects; anything and everything. Gardens too.
Bats: arguing on the extranet about Thessian anime. Iām mostly kidding, Bats knows an awful lot about biotics.
Patel: reads too, does puzzles. Is in charge of the precinctās quiz nights at the local bar.Ā
Vitacus: getting his ass handed to him by his sister in the weird turian math-based game they play.
28. Ā Who do they see as their best friend? Their worst enemy?
Hoorik: old friend back home, survived the war. Still keep in touch.
Bats: Thatāll be Kolyat, for his sins.
Patel: his wife.
Vitacus: old friend back in his unit, not seen her in awhile though.
eta: their enemies are numerous, theyāre cops. Personal enemies, not so much. unless Patel cursing at the man who ALWAYS TAKES THE POWDERED MILK AT THE RATION DEPOT ALWAYS HIM counts?
6 for Kol, 12 for Bats, 18 for Patel, 24 for OC of choice
KOLYAT: Who will they take advice from, no matter what it is? Who wonāt they take advice from, no matter what it is?
Theyāll listen to: Oriana, Hoorik, Bailey. Kolyat also had a brilliant teacher at C-Sec academy who specialised in Crime Scene Analysis, and he understood his own empathy a little better:
One of my favourite mentors at C-Sec Academy was a gentle, softly spoken salarian who took his CSI work very seriously. He taught me that murder victims should be treated with respect; their bodies are not āvicsā or ācorpsesā or āstiffs.ā They were people, and we should treat them as such. āWe are at the end of their journey, Krios,ā he had said. āIt is our privilege to be.ā
Disconnect, Chapter 1.
Patel, Bats and some of the other officers get side-eyed, but he will listen to both of them on matters of slavery, Trarverse and Terminus issues.
BATS: Do they like romance in the books they read (or in the book theyāre in)?
Bats has a different girl each month at the moment, and will for a while. He had one that got away, part of his old Huntress unit. He doesn't talk much about her.
He has very clear opinions on the ships from his shitty asari animes, and used to troll their official messageboards on the extranet about it until he was banned.Ā
Patel and kissing: tongue or no tongue?
(Vivi why. Why, vivi.)
Heās full on still, him and his wife. Proper duelling tongues, too. Their poor daughter takes one look at it in the kitchen and just:
āI just want to refill my water.ā
Hoorik: Honesty or charity?
Both, even if she knows her donation will be spent on cheap Lower Ward moonshine.Ā
Itās a learned trait. Her mother visited the Citadel and almost emptied her account to anyone with a sob story.Ā āThey need it more than me, elskling. That man needs to get home to Surkesh to see his clutch...ā
Taken from:Ā https://autodiscothings.tumblr.com/post/178833607988/yvesdot-oc-asks-that-reveal-more-than-you
sakura blossom: If you had one week left to live, what would you do?
āOh, this again.ā Hoorik was groundside for the final assault on Earth. If she knew her days were numbered sheād go out fighting, and be thankful she was alive after. She would also call her mother, and make sure her team is safe too.
Jasmine: What do you enjoy doing on your spare time?
Sheās got green fingers! Her apartment is filled with plants, and Hoorik has an allotment on the Ward, and helps the hydroponics/Zakera garden association grow food. She also reads a fair bit. Sheās debating getting a pet, but worries she wonāt look after it properly.
Taken from:Ā https://autodiscothings.tumblr.com/post/182664847248/cute-flower-themed-asks
14. vs Hoorik for the "Questions About Creating Your OCs"? :3 Enjoy your coffee!
If you had to narrow it down to 2 things that you MUST keep in mind while working with your OC, what would those things be?Ā
Oooh a Hoorik question!Ā DI Hoorik is my petty streak showing towards Bioware. Sheās a butch woman, and very much a lesbian.
Two things I keep in mind while writing her:
Sheās professional, but warm with it
Very much in charge of the squad. She should have the upper hand, and can silence the room with a quiet: āthatās enough.ā
Sheās always just outsideĀ āthe teamā in terms of shenanigans and banter; sheāll take part, but thereās always a sense of keeping herself a little island away from them, as sheāsĀ their boss.
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