Hi! Love your fics, wondering how you feel about podfics of your work? Are you open to that? I'd love to record some of your Dragon Age fics.
Ahhhh, yes, absolutely! This is so incredibly kind even to ask. Yes, I'm totally okay with podfic and the like; I'd love to see it when you're finished as well, if you don't mind dropping a link. Thank you so much for even thinking of me! â€ïž
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How do you find the writing in veilguard? I won't be able to play it for a while but I'm curious how it holds up because I've heard it reads like a YA novel or that it tells instead of showing. (I'm definitely taking online reviews with a grain of salt.) Is it enjoyable writing, especially the dialogue?
Frankly, the dialogue is fine. It is nothing more "YA novel" than anything done in Inquisition that I can think of--though I do generally take umbrage with any criticism phrased like that simply for being entirely too unspecific to mean anything at all. It implies the dialogue is unsophisticated by invoking a genre that, in actuality, represents a wide variety of writing quality (just like any genre of anything ever). I've read YA novels darker and more sophisticated than some piles of adult books, just as much as vice-versa. It's a lazy critique that tells you nothing. Is all the dialogue utterly fantastic? I mean, probably not but I'm having too much honest fun to waste my time worrying about if something is kind of cliched. My biggest pros for the writing are that a) Rook has an actual personality, and b) I don't have to wade into an empty field for an hour just to hear my companions say one line of dialogue to each other (Inquisition, the game that you were, you gave me such low standards). Your mileage may vary on what you think is good writing or not personally but I think the dialogue is just fine--and, yeah. A grain of salt is good to have with critiques like that. If they can't give clear examples and break down what they mean by that in more depth, I tend to ignore critiques of that variety in favor of my own opinions, which I recommend you do for yourself as well.
I'm rereading your All Souls trilogy (with great delight as always I might add) and I forget if you had a faceclaim for Gabriel? My main connotation with the name is John Hamm in Good Omens, which I feel like is not the vibe, haha, but it is throwing me off as I read and I could use a different mental image if you have a different person he looks like? Thank you :)
Aha. Yes, yes I do. It's David Gandy and you may find many, uh, important pictures in this ask and this ask, when several years ago my inbox was briefly a Gabriel de Clermont fan blog. You may also enjoy my Gabriel de Clermont tag. Ahem.
I have been horribly remiss about commenting so far, but I had to come back just to say - DEMISEXUAL MICHAELIS??? thank you so much for that!
Yeah, that was oddly organic -- I didnât set out to do it, but it came about pretty naturally and Iâm pleased with the result. Iâm not even sure heâd identify that way consciously; he just thinks of himself as lacking data, because he married so young and was with her for so long, and after she died he was grieving. So his data set is like, three girls when he was at boarding school and then his wife and then profound depression.Â
That said, he has better data than he thinks. He would have known all the girls at boarding school for a long time (fun fact, the school Institut Alpin is based on starts kids in boarding at age 8, though Michaelis probably didnât start that early and Gregory definitely didnât). He knew Miranda since childhood but they didnât fall in love until they were eighteen, and he took his time getting to know Jes -- he was interested immediately but just kind of defaulted to âthatâs not going to happenâ for most of their association, for no real reason. And he does have that âday and hourâ moment with Jes, he just doesnât want to admit to it at first because lifeâs a lot more complicated at sixty-one than at eighteen and thereâs also Noah to consider.Â
Anyway he already wears a lot of black and grey so probably Lachlan at some point gives him a subtle Demi pride flag shirt that he is clueless about, he just likes it and wears it out all the time because itâs got a nice purple stripe on it. :DÂ
How do you think a mage-supporting Inquisitor could go about making sure the Inquisition mages felt safe with templars around? Fighting Cassandra on her harsh response of âyouâre in an army now, suck it upâ seems like a good start, maybe housing mages & templars separately. But also you canât have two factions in an army whoâre afraid of each other & canât work together. BUT asking mages to work with their oppressors seems like a shitty thing to do, so idk how to resolve this well. Any thoughts?
Some things, perhaps:
Make sure the Inquisition has public âworkplace valuesâ that includes tolerance and respect of others, and see they are actually followed.
Make frequent reminders / encouraging remarks about what good everyone in the Inquisition is working towards, and how everyone is equally a part of it. I.e. Cullenâs âwe are all part of the Inquisitionâ line, but more positive.
Rather than expect people to work together overnight, take a progressive approach with incremental cooperation. I.e. start by assigning a mage and templar both to the same small task group also including neutral parties.Â
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hi! i love your podfic and i had a question about your process if you're cool with talking about it a bit? how do you do your dialogue and get the voices consistent? you do a different voice/tone for shiro and keith, for instance - do you record their lines separately, or at the same time as the narration? i'm new to podficcing and trying to figure out what works best for me, so i'd love to hear how you approach it! thank you for all your lovely work.
Hi!
My process is recording the voices at the same time as the narration. I record directly in to Audacity so that allows me to edit as I go, especially if I don't like the delivery. So I'll deliver a line and if I don't like it, I'll record a few different versions. But if I feel I've lost the tone of a character, I do go back to previous lines and listen to them to try and match it up moving forward.
For Keith and Shiro specifically, I use how they say each other's names as the basis of their tones. So if I don't feel like Keith sounds right, I say Shiro's name as I remember it from the show and same with Shiro, and then deliver the line. LOL
I have considered doing the narration separately from the speaking voices but I'm lazy and don't feel up to going back to do them separately. đ
Ultimately, I still haven't really found an absolute set in stone way of recording, but try something different if it doesn't seem to be working at the moment. I hope that helps you out and I am so glad you decided to do podficcing! And thank you for listening to mine!
For the WIP ask game: I would love to hear more about this accidental marriage au!
itâs absolute chaos. so like, itâd be a few years in the future when theyâre adults obviously and julie wakes one morning after a show in vegas to find she has lukeâs favourite ring on her finger and they realise with dawning horror that they got married!! while very sleep deprived and a little bit drunk!!
anyway, hereâs a snippet of the ensuing phone conversation with flynn after the discovery:
"Oh man, your dad is gonna be so pissed that you didn't invite him."
"Invite him? Invite him?!â Julie hissed. âFlynn, we didn't invite anyone! This was not a planned event, this was a drunk mistake!"
"Look, clearly a part of you wanted to do it. Drunk you mustâve thought marrying Luke was a great idea! Drunk you is great. Drunk you is smart."
"I did not marry Luke on purpose!"
"Uh huh, sure honey. So what are you gonna do?"
I've been listening to THATW on your recommendation & loving it. Battle Cries keeps getting stuck in my head and I was curious about your take on the lyrics. To me, especially coming at the end of the album, it seems like maybe it's about growing apart & realising that's for the best rather than being sad ("this isn't a breakup dear heart, it's a season finale") or maybe the singers are at the end of their lives & facing that end to their relationship? I'd love to hear your thoughts/analysis.
Please keep in mind as I go down this rabbit hole conduct this analysis that art is what you interpret it to be. So whatever it means to you is a valid interpretation, and this is just my own take on it. Here is my ranting analysis of Farewell Wanderlust, for those of you who are wondering why this lovely person is trusting me, a certified feral bastard, with literary discussion.
That dealt with, thatâs tackle the three layers of analysis here. Yes, I said three. Buckle up buttercups.
(Listen if a joke is funny the first time itâs funny every time.)
Okay, so level one: analysis separate from any other piece of work. This is where you look at the art (in this case song lyrics) and examine it purely on its own merit, not by looking at background or connection to other texts. If we just look at the lyrics, what do they say and what do they mean?
PART THE FIRST
Unlike Marbles, which tells us a very easy-to-follow story of a relationship, even giving us a handy-dandy year of meeting (Iâve held your hand since 1979), Battle Cries doesnât give us solid details to fix on. We have to fill in the blanks a lot, which is obviously deliberate given that Marbles and Little Miss Why So (from their previous album Love Run) have shown us that the band knows how to be specific and grounding in telling us a story. If theyâve left things abstract, itâs on purpose.
From the very first lyric, weâre shown two people at odds, as they sing wildly different words:
âIâm at the brink, donât laugh,
at the winks Iâve masked.â
vs.
âThe wrinkles and bricks that weâre left with at last,â
Theyâre even singing at a different pace from one another. The man is more upbeat, faster, and his notes go up and down. The woman is slower, more deliberate, and her notes are closer together. This pattern continues through the song - the man is all over the scale and moves faster, the woman is slower and her voice stays even.
The central conflict here seems to be over the singers differing on what they feel is important, culminating in, âwe were godsâ vs âwe were kids.â We have references to specific events where the signers acknowledge that they understand one another, even if they donât agree:
âYouâve a knack
For applause from the back of the stalls but you lack
The conviction to look at me straight and say yesâ
vs
âSome fictions we took to mean fate believe me I knowâ
and
âTell the truth to me love, does my hair look as nice
As it did when you once tied it up in your eyes?
Look at me as you say this, donât look at your phone.â
There are continued references to things that theyâve done, such as âbut we sunk into water...â and âour devils broke ranks, and out of the depths came an army.â Theyâve been through a lot together, these two people, and most of it is metaphorical, you assume... but thereâs also the theme of playing pretend, making believe, with repeated references to devils, kings, monsters, pirates, and all the rest. The line between fiction and reality is blurred strongly here, as weâve seen in their other songs like That Unwanted Animal.
The woman appears to be a performer, since the man sings that she âdragged us along to watch all of your shows.â The man could be a performer, but he refused: âand by God, love, believe me, I wanted to play, too, I did.â
The lyrics the woman sings imply that she throws herself into things wholeheartedly while the man holds himself back - which has become a problem, given the lyrics theyâre singing at each other. This is ironic because the womanâs lyrics might imply that, but her voice is the more deliberate and grounded one, while the man, the one singing the lyrics that imply holding himself back, is the one with his voice jumping all over the place.
The woman embraces her power and lack of restraint and proclaims we were gods. The man acknowledges that they were young and lost and didnât know what they were doing, reminding her we were kids.
And both of them are right.
Theyâre also both constantly trying to counsel each other. A good moment that highlights their differing views is here:
Done with your dreams, they wonât last
Thirty winters will pass, youâll look back
at the woman fifty year old you will be proud to have known.
vs
Cos that sun that beams down as my hands touch the grass
After summers of fasting I feel hunger at last
For the person fifteen year old me would be proud to have known.
One of them is putting aside dreams, and looking towards the future and saying, I want to be someone that future me is proud of.
The other, however, is focusing on how they feel in the present moment, on how they feel alive (this lyric of feeling hunger at last is also possibly a callback to Wild Blue Yonderâs âtried my best to get thinnerâ and Farewell Wanderlustâs âwhen your mom says âyou look healthyâ but you know she means you got fatâ) and saying, I want to be someone my teenage self would admire.
This also highlights how the woman seems detached from reality. Sheâs all about make-believe, dreams, the future. The man is more focused on the here and now, the past, what was and what is. And again, neither person is wrong here. But their differences are bringing them into conflict as seen from different lyrics and rhythms.
But there is, however, a lack of goodbye. The lyrics show an understanding of one another, and there are moments where they share the same lyrics. The line, âthis isnât a break up, dear heart, itâs a season finaleâ is very telling because itâs a season finale.
Season vs. series, real quick - series means the entire end of a show. Not coming back. Itâs the final ending. But season? That just means itâs time for a break. Weâll be back. Itâs a conclusion of an arc but not the conclusion of a story.
So the couple isnât saying goodbye forever. Theyâre just saying this is the end of one arc. One part of the story. And now weâre taking a pause, and then weâre going to tell the rest, be the rest, presumably together. Especially because just previous to this the woman said sheâs not leaving without a fight, and the man said heâs not going to let her turn their last night into this. Theyâre not going to be gone from each other forever.
In fact, one could (if one was so inclined) call this one of the fights that the couple from Marbles had. Both songs have a very similar feel to them. So you could very well view it that way. This isnât a look at the story of an entire relationship, this is a look at one specific part of it. And again, this isnât a painful breakup song. We see that in the chorus:
But that breathing you hear don't mistake it for sighs,
Donât you realize - Theyâre just battle cries, dear.
And these lines arenât wrinkles, dear heart.
(Hardly knew the words)
Theyâre just dollops of paint on a new work of art!
(Iâm dolled up love donât I deserve to just)
And as I walk away I know, Iâve been through the wars,
But that creaking you hear in my bones is not pain, itâs applause.
Thereâs no pain. Thereâs no sighing. No screams. Not wrinkles for age. Thereâs an embracing of it all, a joy found in things that might otherwise cause sadness. Itâs saying donât worry, this is all good. But thereâs nothing about goodbye, itâs more âlook at what Iâve been through and Iâm glad of it, Iâm okay with it.â
I also think itâs telling that the song ends with just one singer performing.
All it took to unearth in the dust and the dirt
Some release or respite from the heat and the hurt
Was taking the time now and then to ask how I am
And now at the end, at the end of all things,
Iâm not going to scream, beat my chest at the wind,
Iâm doing fine.
Thatâs a callback to The Rockrose and the Thistle, both lyrically and in how the singerâs performing it (his voice is almost exactly the same, quick, someone compare the musical notes for me).
Basically, yes, there is a sense of something ending, but itâs not The End. The end of university was not the end of your life. The end of childhood was not an end to your life. And so on. It feels more like the end of a phase - both in this coupleâs relationship (but again, season finale, I donât think itâs the end of their relationship completely) - and in their lives. Theyâre phasing out of a certain stage. But the lyrics say explicitly âthis isnât a breakupâ and we need to trust that.
I think, looking at these lyrics, that Battle Cries is about facing the end of a certain period of your life, whatever that period is, and embracing both the frustrating and the wonderful about it, and looking at both your own flaws and the flaws of your partner, and maybe needing to take a break - but knowing that itâs not the end, and that youâre going to be okay. Itâs about self-reflection as well as reflecting on a relationship. Itâs taking a small step back and observing yourself from a slight distance. Getting philosophical with a bottle of wine.
Basically this feels like the end of act two, not the end of the entire play. Does that make sense? Am I making sense to anyone?
However, that is just the FIRST LAYER of analysis. There are two more. Because just one layer of meaning would be too simple, apparently, for a certain British bastard. Not naming names here, mostly because I donât need to, we all know what life-ruining motherfucker Iâm referring to.
So, the second level here is not Battle Cries as a song on its own, but Battle Cries as the final song on an album.
PART THE SECOND
The Amazing Devil did this with their previous album, Love Run, as well. Theyâre fond of using the first song as an introduction that lulls you into a false sense of security and using the final song as not just a culmination of all the other songs on the album but as a callback. Not Yet/Love Run on the same-titled album contains direct lyrics from the previous songs embedded into the background, and also serves as an emotional crescendo of all that the previous songs in the album were touching on (mainly depression, romantic relationships, and âwhat the fuck am I supposed to do nowâ).
With Battle Cries, we get the same thing.
First and easiest is double lyrics that sometimes conflict. We saw this in Wild Blue Yonder most predominantly, where the man was being the more dramatic of the two and the woman was kind of talking him down and being more pragmatic. Even though thereâs not as much conflict in their lyrics as in Pruning Shears from Love Run, that conflict is still there - and is done, again, in Battle Cries.
There are also smaller, more specific lyrical callbacks:
âAnd these plates they smash like wavesâ = That Unwanted Animal (and these plates they smash like waves/throw the plate at the wall)
âAnd the wine stains hide the tearsâ = Farewell Wanderlust (but like rubbing wine stains into rugs itâs my curse, to try and make it right, but by trying make it worse)
âThe wrinkles and bricks weâre left with at lastâ - Marbles (your eyes arenât rivers there to weep but a place for crows to rest their feet) and Wild Blue Yonder (every brick you hurled Iâll use to build)
âBut that creaking you hear in my bones is not pain, itâs applauseâ = That Unwanted Animal (and if we join our hands in prayer enough to God I imagine it all starts to sound like applause)
Aside from these direct lyrical callbacks, thereâs the emotional tone.
In the very first song on the album, The Rockrose and the Thistle, we have the theme of helping someone - someone who might not necessarily be good at accepting your help. The lyrics, however brief, give the impression of night (when you call to me asleep) and a foreboding seaside (up the ragged cliffs I scramble).
In Battle Cries, we once again get lyrics that give us the impression of the seaside, through allusions to pirates (more on that in the third section). But instead of nighttime, and danger, the lyrics give us the impression of light and warmth:
âNow the wind is so warm on the back of my neck
As I walk with the sun hand in hand from the wreckâ
Wreck, again, suggests a shipwreck (most other acts of destruction we call crashes i.e. car crash, âwreckâ is almost exclusively used for ships) which suggests the ocean. But in TR&TT all is dark and uncertain, and itâs told from the point of view of the helper, who is trying to assist someone whoâs struggling. In Battle Cries, we go from darkness to light, and itâs the point of view of the person being helped, saying that all they needed to feel better was having someone take âthe time now and then to ask how I am.â Weâve gone full circle.
That final bit could also be a callback to Welly Boots, where the singer talks of someone âscreaming far too loud to hear me swearâ and running out into an impending thunderstorm. In Battle Cries, the line is,
âIâm not gonna scream, beat my chest at the wind. Iâm doing fine.â
Again, a POV shift from a previous song to no longer be the person sung about, but the person doing the singing, and no longer in a position of distress, but a position of acceptance and moving forward.
Also if someone who like actually can talk about music as opposed to just lyrics could help me the fuck out here I know there are musical similarities between The Horror and the Wild and Battle Cries, and Iâm pretty sure between Marbles and Battle Cries too, but I still canât fucking read music and once described a note in a song to a friend as, âit sounds too Idina Menzel and you need to make it sound more Florence Welchâ and so I am not the person to be discussing this but I FUCKINâ KNOW THE SIMILARITIES ARE THERE I CAN FEEL IT I JUST DONâT HAVE THE ABILITY TO ARTICULATE IT.
Anyway.
So, Battle Cries is not only a standalone work but a culmination of the emotional journey that the album has taken you on. Youâve moved through songs about needing help and being unable to receive it/seeing someone you love needing help and being unable to give it (TR&TT, Welly Boots), songs about hiding from your demons and having a fun time being in a sexual relationship with someone you have to say goodbye to and move on from and while weâre at it letâs say âfuck itâ (Wild Blue Yonder), to screaming about our failures and how people have failed us (Farewell Wanderlust, Welly Boots), to more sex and oh letâs throw spirituality and God in there (That Unwanted Animal), going full-on feral and taking on all comers (THATW) and then finding joy and the profound in the little moments with those we love without censorship or rose-colored glasses (Fair, Marbles).
Battle Cries is bittersweet not only because of its standalone lyrics but because it is embracing the bitter, wild fury of certain songs in the album and the sweet, soft love of the other songs. Itâs combining them. And then, in its final moments, itâs taking a deep breath and releasing it all: âIâm doing fine.â
The band clearly chooses, with extreme care, the order in which their songs are to be played. While certain songs like Wild Blue Yonder and Pruning Shears could very well be the kind of songs you hear on the radio, and all the songs are good as standalones, there is an extra layer of emotional depth when you listen to them in the order the band intended. The number one thing people tell me when they listen to TAD for the first time is, âI get a musical feel. It reminds me of a particular kind of musical.â Iâve gotten a lot of comparisons to Hadestown, which, fun fact, started not as a musical but as a concept album in 2010. And I think thatâs because people are picking up on the fact that the entire album is a journey that the listener is carefully being led on, and the final song draws it all together in a bittersweet, triumphant end note.
Not Yet/Love Run at the end of their last album did the same thing, which brings me to my final level of analysis: Battle Cries as the spiritual successor of Not Yet/Love Run.
PART THE THIRD
The first and most obvious comparison is the lyrics. In Not Yet, we have a theme of fighting an enemy and playing make-believe, being pirates:
âSing me awake with a song about pirates,â âyou point Iâll steer and weâll rip up the map by the seems,â âitâs time to fight donât be yellow bellied, hold the bar at Hurley's hurly burly's give âem hell give âem hell.â
In Battle Cries we have much the same thing:
ââCome at me you blaggardsâ, youâd yell from the banks
Wielding words against make-believe wizards and tanksâ
There is a lyrical theme of pirate-speak and make believe, playing games. (In fact the next line in Battle Cries is âand by God, love, believe me, I wanted to play, too, I did,â referencing both playing make-believe and playing music.)
Not Yet and Battle Cries both blur the line between what is real and what is pretend, with the woman singer being much more willing to throw herself into imagination and the man being more cautious, more realistic. Both feature the woman in a fighting mood (âwhere is God, ma?â/âI wonât leave without a fightâ) and the man more grounded and accepting (âI held your hand as you shook in the middle of the nightâ/âIâm not gonna scream, beat my chest at the windâ).
And both times, in both songs, both singers have a point. Neither one is fully right or wrong. That fighting spirit in the woman in good, but so is the acceptance and grounded attitude of the man.
Both Not Yet and Battle Cries also have the lyrical dance, where the man and woman sing different lyrics that overlap, and then occasionally come together and sing the same thing. Itâs moments of understanding in between moments of disparity, which, really, isnât that what every relationship is like? Youâre never going to be in sync with your lover, friend, family member, all the time. But when you do come together, itâs fantastic.
Not Yet/Love Run is basically two songs in one, and so the Love Run portion is separate from the Not Yet portion in my analysis. Love Run is about fighting, but not fighting to get away from something, not fighting out of anger, but running towards something and fighting for love. There is, in Love Run, an acceptance that things can be shit, but weâre gonna keep running anyway:
âItâs not from what we run that drums, but whatâs to come,â ârun to show that loveâs worth running to,â âthough some would harm you, none, not one, no none, would raise to you, a hand nor thumb, not while by you I stand and hum.â
In Battle Cries, we get a similar acceptance and a reaffirmation that love, care, and compassion are what keeps us going:
âAnd as I walk away I know Iâve been through the wars,
But that creaking you hear in my bones is not pain, itâs applause,â
âAll it took to unearth in the dust and the dirt,
Some release or respite from the heat and the hurt,
Was taking the time now and then to ask how I am.â
Both Love Run and Battle Cries take the lyrics of their previous songs in the album and rework them, echo them, and then stand tall and say, âbut itâs going to be okay, dear heart.â And Battle Cries emotionally and lyrically deliberately echoes Not Yet earlier on in its lyrics, and then emotionally (though not quite as lyrically) deliberately echoes Love Run at its end.
I could keep going on the details of this but this is fuckinâ long enough already and you all are smart people with an insane amount of time on your hands thanks to quarantine so Iâm sure you guys can extrapolate further from here. Battle Cries plays the same role in THATW that Not Yet/Love Run plays in LR, therefore, there is a thematic and emotional similarity between both songs, therefore, lyrical comparisons and callbacks to Not Yet/Love Run were placed in Battle Cries.
IN CONCLUSION
This song is operating on three levels. Itâs operating as a standalone piece of work, itâs operating as the culmination of a collection of work, and itâs operating as a successor/callback to the final piece in a previous collection of work by the same artists.
Youâre going to find themes in the work of every artist, conscious and unconscious. I can tell you right now that my original novels have a strong theme of dreaming - dreams as power, dreams as prophecy, dreams as manifestation of our fears and our subconscious, dreams as escapism. Itâs a theme I at first did subconsciously and now, as a writer with a better sense of self-awareness, one that I utilize consciously.
Good artists recognize their personal themes and turn them into leitmotifs. They harness what theyâre already subconsciously expressing and wield it as a tool. It takes a very skilled artist to take those themes and use them the way TAD does with all of their work but especially with Battle Cries. There is a deliberate awareness of what theyâre doing and the words theyâre wielding. Battle Cries is an ending that knows itâs an ending in the best kind of way, one that says not all endings are bad, here, let us show you.