#goldendusk

FIRST DEMO RELEASE DROP

Hi!

This is it, the drop for the first demo! As per you guys voted in the poll I am posting whatever I have FINISHED, so any scenes that are halfway done or have some paths available will NOT be included. I am both excited and nervous for this, I do hope you guys enjoy the content and it isn't too short. Mostly worried about my writing sinc eit is actually not great but, I'm glad to be posting the story nonetheless and that you guys can finally experience and get a taste for the story.

THIS UPDATE INCLUDES:

Character Count: 104345

Word Count: 17574

Features:

-Meeting the Mentor and Homie(By having a flashback) and setting their gender

-Customizing Mc including hair color, length, skin tone, name, nickname, petname, gender, mother 'nickname'

-Finding out about your Father and seeing a new side to your mother

-Age from 16 to 18

-Choosing a personality type from Diplomat, Charmer, Fighter, Scholar, Spiritual, and Deceiver

-Choosing to be a early bird or night owl

-Choosing to be a early bird or night owl

-Go on an errand and have your Mentor kidnap you casually

-Profiles in-game are done technically but are minimal

-Choosing to be a emotional or stoic

-Find out the Mc’s eyecolors

-Learn some Benglish(Bengali-English)

-Find out more about the world you live in

-Either be as rude as possible to a old man or attempt to be less rude to a older lady(Mentor)

-Choosing to be more decisive or indecisive

-Choosing to be negative or positive

-Meet your rather clingy and not-too-bright Best Friend, H

And my asks are open for any suggestions, questions, advice, feedback, constructive criticisms and anything about the characters or story!

They are born!

Jackdawfoot and Ferndoe’s litter, from left to right: Ratkit, Goldenkit, Kestralkit!

All are girls!

like her papa, one of Ratkit’s eyes never develop, and so it remains shut

names and designs by @starfalcon555

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Good eye if you recognize this! I retraced old artwork of mine for this. It was too perfect to just completely redo.

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EDIT:

since it’s kind of hard to see, Goldenkit’s spots:

Inspired by the rp group I joined, I’ve designed another of my characters (Fawnspots), along with finalized Cherrybloom’s design, AND drawn their whole family! Because clearly I just want to draw cats. <3

Appleflower and Goldendusk are their parents, Thistlefur and Fawnspots are both Cherrybloom’s brothers. Unfortunately, Appleflower and Goldendusk died of a green cough epidemic, and Thistlefur was killed in a battle. The three kits were always incredibly close, and now that Fawn and Cherry are the only one’s left of their family they are still very close and supportive of each other. 

Hello!

I’m here with half good and maybe bad news(?) So the last Character & Word count were in fact very inaccurate by a LOT. I didn’t realize I have a bunch of extra stuff and drafts of the story beforehand in it so twine included that…Um, so the updated and more accurate one will be included.

And I’ve decided to also do Female Mc’s and the story text will be different because of gender at scenes as well. So, Male Versions of the Ro’s will be made and depending on the Ro so will be the backstory/personality by a little bit. And to be quite honest, I’m not sure how I’m going to write crushes especially same-gender ones mostly because I don’t want to be cancelled and I personally have no experience so, it will be difficult.

Sorry, this is long but, I have a feeling I won’t be posting a lot unless it’s profiles or asks.

I’m a very much newbie and rookie to writing, it’s really not great but, I do have ideas and I want to share them, that’s why these are here. So, I would very much appreciate tips, and help whether that be story plot, rewording, or just spelling and grammar. And I’m an avid want a dash of romance not the main focus because I cringe A lot type of reader, the same type of writer as well. So advice on writing romance and dialogue is a must, that’s why I’m planning on the romance to be a more minor part.

I also realized I should probably focus on finishing writing the first part of the demo I’m planning to release in one of the upcoming months or weeks. And also, post something about the personalities the Mc can have. ❤️

Thank you for reading my rambling and being interested in my if.💗

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Character Count: 51553 (just the story not including profiles, glossary or world lore)

Word Count: 8567

Features(first part is same bottom is new):

-Meeting the Mentor and Homie(By having a flashback) and setting their gender

-Customizing Mc including hair color, length, skin tone, name, nickname, petname, gender

-Finding out about your Father and seeing a new side to your mother

-Age from 16 to 20(idk if that's significant-)

-Choosing a personality type from Diplomat, Charmer, Fighter, Scholar, Spiritual, and Deceiver

-Choosing to be a early bird or night owl

-Go on an errand and have your Mentor kidnap you casually

-Profiles in-game are done technically though I have to add actual descriptions of their personalities and skills but, the ones here are currently way more detailed

-Are you more expressive or expressionless?(will be applied differently depending on personality)

-Will receive something from your Mentor

-Start your Journey To Nadripur and stuff

-Find out the Mc’s eyecolors

-Learn some Banglish(Bengali-English)

-Find out more about the world you live in

-Either be as rude as possible to a old man or attempt to be less rude to a older lady(Mentor)

❧GAME☙❧Pinterest☙

𝔗𝔥𝔢𝔯𝔢 𝔬𝔫𝔠𝔢 𝔴𝔞𝔰 𝔞 𝔤𝔦𝔯𝔩, 𝔫𝔬𝔴 𝔞 𝔩𝔞𝔡𝔶 𝔴𝔥𝔬 𝔣𝔢𝔩𝔩 𝔦𝔫 𝔩𝔬𝔳𝔢 𝔴𝔦𝔱𝔥 𝔰𝔬𝔪𝔢𝔬𝔫𝔢 𝔰𝔥𝔢 𝔰𝔥𝔬𝔲𝔩𝔡𝔫'𝔱 𝔥𝔞𝔳𝔢.

𝔗𝔥𝔢𝔯𝔢 𝔬𝔫𝔠𝔢 𝔴𝔞𝔰 𝔞 𝔟𝔬𝔶, 𝔫𝔬𝔴 𝔞 𝔪𝔞𝔫 𝔴𝔥𝔬 𝔣𝔢𝔩𝔩 𝔦𝔫 𝔩𝔬𝔳𝔢 𝔴𝔦𝔱𝔥 𝔰𝔬𝔪𝔢𝔬𝔫𝔢 𝔥𝔢 𝔰𝔥𝔬𝔲𝔩𝔡𝔫'𝔱 𝔥𝔞𝔳𝔢.

24 𝔶𝔢𝔞𝔯𝔰 𝔩𝔞𝔱𝔢𝔯, 𝔖𝔥𝔢'𝔰 𝔦𝔫 𝔬𝔫𝔢 𝔠𝔬𝔲𝔫𝔱𝔯𝔶 𝔱𝔞𝔨𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔯𝔞𝔦𝔰𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔞 𝔰𝔬𝔫. 𝔖𝔥𝔢 𝔪𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔨𝔢𝔢𝔭 𝔰𝔢𝔠𝔯𝔢𝔱𝔰 𝔥𝔦𝔡𝔡𝔢𝔫 𝔬𝔣 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔭𝔞𝔰𝔱 𝔱𝔬 𝔭𝔯𝔬𝔱𝔢𝔠𝔱 𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔦𝔯 𝔠𝔥𝔦𝔩𝔡.

ℌ𝔢'𝔰 𝔦𝔫 𝔞𝔫𝔬𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔯 𝔠𝔬𝔲𝔫𝔱𝔯𝔶 𝔢𝔳𝔢𝔯𝔶𝔡𝔞𝔶 𝔬𝔫 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔟𝔞𝔱𝔱𝔩𝔢𝔣𝔦𝔢𝔩𝔡. ℌ𝔢 𝔪𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔨𝔢𝔢𝔭 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔰𝔢𝔠𝔯𝔢𝔱𝔰 𝔬𝔣 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔭𝔞𝔰𝔱 𝔥𝔦𝔡𝔡𝔢𝔫.

𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔠𝔬𝔲𝔫𝔱𝔯𝔦𝔢𝔰 𝔞𝔯𝔢 𝔞𝔱 𝔴𝔞𝔯 𝔫𝔬𝔴 22 𝔶𝔢𝔞𝔯𝔰 𝔩𝔬𝔫𝔤. 𝔗𝔥𝔢𝔦𝔯 𝔰𝔬𝔫/𝔡𝔞𝔲𝔤𝔥𝔱𝔢𝔯 𝔥𝔞𝔡 𝔧𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔱𝔲𝔯𝔫𝔢𝔡 20 𝔞𝔫𝔡 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔴𝔬𝔯𝔩𝔡 𝔣𝔩𝔦𝔭𝔰 𝔬𝔳𝔢𝔯.

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𝕐𝕠𝕦 𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕚𝕣 𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕. 𝕋𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕚𝕤 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕪 𝕠𝕗 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕡𝕒𝕣𝕖𝕟𝕥𝕤. 𝔸𝕥 𝕝𝕖𝕒𝕤𝕥, 𝕨𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕗𝕚𝕘𝕦𝕣𝕖𝕕 𝕗𝕣𝕠𝕞 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕝𝕚𝕞𝕚𝕥𝕖𝕕 𝕒𝕞𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕥 𝕠𝕗 𝕚𝕟𝕗𝕠𝕣𝕞𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕘𝕠𝕥 𝕗𝕣𝕠𝕞 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕞𝕠𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕣 𝟚 𝕪𝕖𝕒𝕣𝕤 𝕒𝕘𝕠, 𝕨𝕙𝕖𝕟 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕨𝕖𝕣𝕖 𝟙𝟠 𝕪𝕖𝕒𝕣𝕤 𝕠𝕝𝕕.

ℕ𝕠𝕨 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝟚𝟘, 𝕚𝕥 𝕘𝕖𝕥𝕤 𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕟 𝕞𝕠𝕣𝕖 𝕕𝕚𝕗𝕗𝕚𝕔𝕦𝕝𝕥 𝕥𝕠 𝕗𝕚𝕥 𝕚𝕟 𝕒𝕤 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕗𝕖𝕒𝕥𝕦𝕣𝕖𝕤 𝕘𝕣𝕠𝕨 𝕚𝕟. 𝔸𝕝𝕝 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥'𝕤 𝕠𝕟 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕞𝕚𝕟𝕕 𝕚𝕤 𝕙𝕠𝕨 𝕥𝕠 𝕡𝕣𝕠𝕧𝕚𝕕𝕖 𝕗𝕠𝕣 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕞𝕠𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕣.

𝕆𝕙, 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕟𝕠𝕥 𝕕𝕪𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕗 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕘𝕖𝕥 𝕔𝕒𝕦𝕘𝕙𝕥 𝕓𝕖𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕒 𝕞𝕚𝕩𝕖𝕕-𝕓𝕝𝕠𝕠𝕕. 𝔼𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕔𝕚𝕒𝕝𝕝𝕪 𝕤𝕚𝕟𝕔𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕨𝕒𝕣 𝕙𝕒𝕤 𝕓𝕖𝕖𝕟 𝕘𝕠𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕠𝕟 𝕗𝕠𝕣 𝕒 𝕤𝕥𝕣𝕠𝕟𝕘 𝟚𝟚 𝕪𝕖𝕒𝕣𝕤.

𝕋𝕙𝕒𝕥'𝕤 𝕦𝕟𝕥𝕚𝕝 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕚𝕟𝕔𝕚𝕕𝕖𝕟𝕥 𝕙𝕒𝕡𝕡𝕖𝕟𝕤. 𝔸𝕟𝕕 𝕟𝕠𝕨 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕠 𝕘𝕠 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕛𝕠𝕦𝕣𝕟𝕖𝕪 𝕥𝕠 𝕤𝕥𝕠𝕡 𝕒 𝕨𝕒𝕣, 𝕗𝕦𝕝𝕗𝕚𝕝𝕝 𝕒 𝕡𝕣𝕠𝕡𝕙𝕖𝕔𝕪, 𝕤𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕞𝕠𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕣, 𝕞𝕖𝕖𝕥 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕗𝕒𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕣, 𝕞𝕒𝕪𝕓𝕖 𝕘𝕖𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕞 𝕣𝕖𝕦𝕟𝕚𝕥𝕖𝕕 𝕚𝕗 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕔𝕒𝕟, 𝕡𝕖𝕣𝕙𝕒𝕡𝕤 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕤𝕠𝕞𝕖 𝕝𝕚𝕗𝕖𝕝𝕠𝕟𝕘 𝕔𝕠𝕞𝕡𝕒𝕟𝕚𝕠𝕟𝕤 𝕒𝕟𝕕… 𝕘𝕖𝕥 𝕞𝕒𝕣𝕣𝕚𝕖𝕕 𝕠𝕣 𝕖𝕟𝕘𝕒𝕘𝕖𝕕 𝕒𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕪 𝕝𝕖𝕒𝕤𝕥 𝕔𝕠𝕟𝕤𝕚𝕕𝕖𝕣𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕠𝕗 𝕒𝕘𝕖.

𝕐'𝕜𝕟𝕠𝕨…𝕣𝕖𝕘𝕦𝕝𝕒𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕤 𝕗𝕠𝕣 𝕒 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕘 𝕞𝕒𝕟/𝕝𝕒𝕕𝕪 𝕚𝕟 𝕙𝕚𝕤/𝕙𝕖𝕣 𝕖𝕒𝕣𝕝𝕪 𝟚𝟘'𝕤.

GoldenDusk is an adventure, friendship and minor romance story inspired by the author's imagination and whatever else she reads(and because she's SO creative also based on Bangladesh). This is a fun side-project the author works on in her meantime which can vary. The plot isn't fully thought out yet so changes to the story can occur and can be influenced by the readers as the writing process goes on.

Features:

◈ Customize your male or female MC:

➳Choose 1 out of 6 personalities-

➳Diplomat, Charmer, Fighter, Scholar, Spiritual & Deciever

➳Choose between Habit(s), Approach to Romance, and Decision-Making Skills

➳Choose Hair Color, Length and Skin Tone

➳Choose a pet name your Mother calls you and What you call your Mother

◈ Meet a variety of characters that'll join you on your journey.

➳All characters here are Gender-Selectable!(There may be options to have crushes on them...)

◈ Meet the 3 Love Interests & Marriage Candidates

➳Which of these lovely ladies/gentlemen will capture your heart and have you pursue them?

◈ Find out the story behind your parents.

➳Speaking of, meet your Father!(And his side of the Family....Maybe you'll meet your Mother's side too...)

◈ Fulfill a Prophecy unknowingly and somehow manage to stop War!

Side Characters/Besties:

Your Mentor

Ravei/Reiya Obehn

"Well...looks like as your Master, I'll have to guide you apprentice. Especially since I took a sentimental liking to rascals like you."

Your Homie

Hamoza/Humaera Belal

"Like I said, we're going through everything, thick and thin together, whether you like it or not. You can't expect me NOT to have your back! It's been far too long to get rid of me, now."

Your Rival

Ajaye/Ananeiya Kepaan

"As much as I hate to admit it...you are on of the only people that I can even consider a worthy and decent competitor. I would hate to have to find another one if you perish."

Your Friend

Koamal/Koamala Auah

"I have no idea what's going on or why but, I 'ain't leaving anytime ever. 'Gotta 'preciate everything we have and I'll help 'ya protect it, we're in this together."

Your Relative

Fahayd/Fahiya Mohumdar

"I'd hate to admit it but...No matter what in the end, we're still blood, we're still family. Our paths have already been determined since birth, no use in denying it."

Love Interests/Marriage Candidates:

Childhood Acquaintance

Amalea/Aleam Akerti

"You have always caught my eye holding a special place...but, I never thought it would be like this."

Saint/ess

Miyshti/Muyhid Begumei

"I never even thought we'd ever be an option but, I'll be willing to try...if we can that is."

Secret --------

Shazia/Shajibd Sheika/n

"Despite everything, we both know this was never meant to happen...for we were written in the stars."

'Main Characters'/The Family:

Your Mother

Meeina Unan

"I will never back down for you my child, I am your mother, I am forever your guardian. I have and will never regret you or...him."

Your Father

Nuhas Raiman

It's my 1 year anniversary on Tumblr 🥳

Wow! A little late but I'm so grateful for everyone who's taken an interest and read what I actually got out for GoldenDusk!

Sorry for being on hiatus for so long, life's been busy and honestly I need to get inspiration for this story again. I love it but, I just don't have the motivation. I will try to get something out in a few months hopefully. Considering my laziness....

Amalea/Aleam Akerti

A likes being a big spoon feeling like they're doing something and wants to be ready to get up and leave if A is ever called to a meeting or something urgently.

Miyshti/Muyhid Begumei

M would rather be little spoon and the one given more cuddles and feel protected but if MC wanted to switch M would be fine with it.

Shazia/Shajibd Sheika/n

S could really go either ways just as long MC is there with them, but Shazia would prefer being Little Spoon while Shajibd would prefer being Big Spoon.