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Clean, properly dressed, and equipped with a new credit card, Soleil was ready for anything. Anything except what Araven had proposed.

“You’re being hunted,” the angel had explained. “All-out war is coming and you are the key to defeating the Heavens. Satan knows you’ve fallen, he knows you’re here. You’ve got to leave.”

“Leave and go where?” Soleil had asked.  

“To your mortal.”

The angel and the fallen had stared at each other. “I can’t,” Soleil said.

“You have to. There isn’t anyone else to take care of you.”

Soleil was incredulous. “I don’t need anyone to take care of me!” They both knew that was a lie. Soleil couldn’t fight demons in vis human form, ve needed somewhere safe to figure out how to be a human.

Araven chose not to point that out. Ve knew ve couldn’t force Soleil to do anything ve didn’t want. So instead, Araven took ver to the bus station, hugged vis friend goodbye, and put the fallen angel on a bus heading North. Away from the next big battle, towards the wreckage of the last one.

“Keep moving, and be careful,” Araven pleaded.

Soleil smiled. “I will be.”

Araven nodded and turned to go.

Soleil almost called ver back. Almost asked if God was still watching, almost asked if Araven could find out what ve had to do to be welcomed back into Heaven. Almost. A painful lump lodged itself in Soleil’s throat, and ve said nothing at all as Araven disappeared into the crowd. Soleil was, once again, alone.

Hey,

It’s nice to see you and with this welcome here. Before we get into it, I want to mention a few things:

 1.       I don’t earn money with this story, I just write it for fun and I really hope you have fun while reading too. If I mention an character from a movie/book/series or whatever, I don’t own them and the credit goes to the rightful owner.

 2.       I’m sorry if a story like this already exists. I didn’t copy it from another author. The idea just came in my mind and I wrote it down. (It’s important for me to mention that, because I come from a fandom were already a lot of FF’s exists.)

 3.       CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is always welcome, HATE NOT. I’m an active member auf multiple FF pages und have seen a lot when it comes to reviews. And in some cases, I was speechless, but in a really bad way. The words hurt a lot. So let’s make a deal together. We give a review as a “Feedback Burger.” That means: We start with something positive, go on with the constructive criticism and end with something positive again. I made some great experiences with this method and would recommend it. Respecting the author is an important point for me.

 If someone still thinks, it would be a great idea to spread some hate, I can tell you, I can be a real nightmare too. But I think we will have an awesome time together.

 4.       Important rule: DON’T LIKE IT; DON’T READ AND HATE IT

 5.       Also, humour is important. Please don’t take it all to serious.

 6.       I deeply apologise for any grammar- or spelling mistakes. Or if it sounds sometimes a bit weird. English isn’t my native language, so mistakes can happen. If someone wants to help me with that, I would be really grateful.