My HTTYD3 script notes (Drago)
Warning, mild SPOILERS ahead.
-Almost the same beginning. Enter the map.
-I really like the idea of Eret and Valka going on missions together. Plus, theyāre both new characters from the second film and donāt add anything to the group.
-I suppose that, in earlier scripts, Drago was going to have Deathgrippers, since the venom and the Bewilderbeast controlling techniques are quite similar.
-Since this is theĀ āmovieā version and the series are not canon and Heather doesnāt exist, Ruffnut should end with Fishlegs. Not just because of Tuffās line in HTTYD2Ā āNo, she still hates you.ā, but because... itās my script and I say so.Ā
-That leaves Snotlout. Ruffnut knows she wants to be with Fishlegs, but Snotlout is not that sure of what he wants. And until he realizes, thereās going to be a lot of awkward conversations and lots of blushing.
-General Hoff, General Hoff. I mean, the comics are canon, right?
-Had to talk about the Book of Dragons. I found quite annoying that there was only five species or so written there and then, in the second movie, Valka is talking with Hiccup mentioning lots of new species and heās likeĀ āYep, I know the names and appearance of all of them.ā How? Is there a pamphlet?Ā
-Dragoās arc was tricky. We only have vengeance as his main characteristic and he wasnāt a deep character to begin with.Ā
-Ruffnut and Astrid talking. Yes, this was in the other version too, but Iām quite happy having a scene with this two being friends.
-āA funny Valisbot Dayā. I had so much fun creating headcanons about Hiccstridās relationship.Ā
-Itās interesting how theĀ āHidden Worldā itself is just lazy writing (an excuse for the dragons to leave) unless you make it an island full of Night Furies.
-And thereās a map. A physical object that shows you where to go. Seriously, thatĀ āHidden Worldā stuff was too much.
-Nicknames. :)
-I get that the nightmare doesnāt have much impact in this version but Iām too proud of this scene to put it out.
-Things started getting darker. With Drago as a villain, you canāt have it any other way.
-I wanted more Hiccstrid moments too, but come on, they both canāt leave their island in the middle of a war. So go Team Hicclegs.
-Putting her here was too good a chance to not take advantage of it. Hope HTTYD book fans would like it.
-āYou had to stand on a table and recreate what your father would say using their (the Hoffersons) rug as a cape.ā Sorry, I had to.
-Having another nightmare is the equivalent of all the flashbacks in the original movie, but it also makes sense that Hiccupās mind goes through several scenarios of what heās going to find and whatās going to happen.
-Since several characters have travelled long and across the archipelago, making up a new island didnāt make sense, so I started toying with the idea of a disappearing island (just like the Night Furies disappear in the night sky).
-While the encounter with Toothless and Evenfall is similar (and remites yet again to what happened in the original movie), Toothless doesnāt lose her that fast and lots of stuff happen before that.
-The Hidden World design actually makes sense for a Night Furies habitat. Thereās glowing stuff everywhere and you just have to add some lakes full of fish.
-Some Tufflout fluff. It was my first time writing a character realizing heās bi and while I didnāt have much time for developing it (maybe the next time) I hope I did an okay job at least.
-Toothless drawing (in his unique, abstract way) a map of Berk for the Night Furies.
-The final battle didnāt make much sense. I mean, they would win easily with the support of other tribes (series version) and, in this one, they think they can win thanks to their dragons. But then, Hiccup not being there wouldnāt have made an impact, so I had to put higher stakes.
-She meeting Hiccup and Fishlegs.
-The whole tribe in cells inside a cave is a hopefully-not-so-blatant nod to the books. Also, I needed an epic place for Drago and Hiccupās final battle.
-My first idea was to have the Night Furies arrive for the first battle, but I really wanted to have a fight between Drago and Hiccup and, once again, the first battle had to have higher stakes.
-I donāt know a thing about Viking betrothal ceremonies, so I put a classic modern one with a couple of twists.Ā
-Had to tone down Valkaās wariness of people in this one due to the lack of time and script issues (she speaks to a lot of people in this one). Sadly, that meant having to take out the Hoffersonās scene too.
-I know the ending doesnāt have the same impact as the one in the series version, but this one is quite cool too.
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