Hi! I was reading about your Stygian Summer event (atill love the idea, still would make it canon if I could), and I was wondering, what inspired you to make Edward Teach a Pretender?
First of all, aw thank you! It really means a lot to know those lostbelt/event concepts and fanservant ideas stuck with people!
Secondly, a fun thing about Blackbeard is that we actually have only a vague idea of what his real name was. We know his first name was Edward, but his last name is up in the air. Potential spellings include "Thatch, Thach, Thache, Thack, Tack, Thatche, and Theach."
The two largely agreed upon potential names though are Edward Teach, and Edward Thatch.
Edward Teach the 2 star rider is explained as being less the actual legendary pirate blackbeard and more a representation of the eccentric tales people would tell about Blackbeard and the general greed and selfishness of piracy itself as the archetypal idea of a pirate (or at least this is the paper thin excuse given to explain why he's a sleazy NEET pervert gag character)
So if all that is Edward Teach, then there's two other identities to work with, Edward Thatch and Blackbeard.
I personally agree with what, last i checked, is a general consensus of the true Blackbeard being a Berserker or Berserker-adjacent rider, but he could also very well be Pretender class as a reflection of how he's more an identity than an individual person. So Edward Thatch would be Blackbeard the Pretender, the tyrannical lord of the seas who would light fuses in his hair just to scare someone and was as cunning as he was brutal.
....Buuuuut since this was all for a summer event idea, there is also a less serious meta reason for it! The same way Edward Teach is a sort of amalgam of piracy itself, Edward Thatch's reason for leaning towards Pretender instead of Berserker is manifesting as a representation for all the servants who got dumbed down into punchlines and/or cast by the wayside over getting a serious portrayal. This is reflected in the roster for the event, including characters like Paris, Meph, Benkei, Fergus, and of course the other 5 star of the event, Caesar.
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I’m fine with Cortez having a role in your Lostbelt (more begrudgingly, I’ll admit, as it feels more than a little uncomfortable to add a conquistador to the Lostbelt that, besides the whitewashing, was meant to be fully indigenous—emphasizing indigenous, not hispanic), but I have to say, I’m just not enthused for Grand Berserker Cortez. Like at all. Not just because Fate has positioned him to be a Pretender based on what we know of him, but also because it just feels intensely uncomfortable for one of the servants meant to fight the Beasts to be a colonizer. Especially since it’s an AU Cortez rather than PHH Cortez? Like, what?
oh he's a piece of shit. Thats the point. In my version, anyways. Idk and idc what official fgo intends for Berserker, @agnerd-bot's idea was so insanely good I had to find a way to use it for my Lb7 rewrite.
Like i said, he's an objectively terrible person. Not even in the Columbus sense where there's like, a sort of deluded idealism to it, no Cortez is just a selfish bastard and the whole point of him being a grand is that it makes you realize that grands arent the "best" of humanity, they're the peak of humanity. That means the bad as well as the good, and even with Daybit actively helping it's everything some of Chaldea's servants (namely Nitocris-Ammit) can do to not try and kill the bastard before their mutual enemies even get a chance. I also want him to be berserker rather than pretender because i don't want to lean into so much as the same post code as the pseudoscience of "white gods" and all that if I can help it. The idea of someone flagrantly and falsely claiming godhood is more interesting to me than someone convincingly imitating it anyhow.
TLDR Cortez's role specifically plays on his connection to the indigenous peoples of the lostbelt. It's not a good connection and its not meant to be, its meant to be vile and infuriating and it's never portrayed as anything different or more glorious than that. Just as a Beast of Humanity isn't necessarily evil, a Grand Servant isn't necessarily righteous.
He also, without going into detail, gets his comeuppance. Enough for it to even be somewhat pitiable, in fact, if still entirely deserved.
Saw that you’re removing the Deinos from your rewrite of Lostbelt 7. I feel like you’re missing out on keeping them. Part of why they are written the way that they are is that they’re meant to be juxtaposed against the fae of Britain, as well as offering an answer to Wodime’s plan about an evolved humanity. I guess that the relationship to the other Lostbelts isn’t required because it’s a fan work meant to stand alone, but I can’t help that you’re losing something by not having them in the story at all.
I'm gonna give an actual answer instead of slagging off on Nasu again because this is like the only good faith ask I've gotten about this. There's two components, the problematic aspect and the "frankly i agree with your idea of paralleling the other lostbelt populations through the idea of evolution, but I dont think they even did that idea well with lb7."
Even removing the "black people = apes with guns" thing, it's still an issue when this is the only lostbelt to have a distinctly non-human population. Even the fae and yaga are still humanoids, but for South America they literally said "animals with guns" its just a matter of whether its as on the nose as making them primates.
Then there's the obvious issue of tone. Even discounting the problematic stuff, this is obviously presented as a joke. It's literally a punchline in itself of being a childish fantasy of "dinosaurs with guns". Not even dino people, just straight up literal dinosaurs with guns. It's at BEST lazy in how its not anything unique, compared to something like the Yaga which are distinctly their own thing as opposed to just "werewolves with guns".
So even if we swallow our morals about the racism, I think we can do better than this. It's shameful that the racist "monkeys with guns to represent POCs" designs are actually much better and more interesting than the dinos. Hence why I'm specifically reusing a couple of those designs (without the guns and racist context of course) but throwing out the dinos entirely.
Which brings us to my rewrite and how it actually does the idea you mentioned of focusing on an "evolution" of humanity.
Without going into too much detail before I ever do a proper write up of things, the equivant to the dinofolk in my rewrite is instead the Zonbi. As in the original meaning of the term from Hatian Vodou (and using the Creole spelling to match) of a being that has died but has yet to be granted release from life - a being whose proper time has come and gone but it has not been allowed to leave the mortal coil. The world of this Lostbelt 7 has been reset countless times in a way certainly inspired by Lostbelt 4 but with some crucial differences that result in humanity being reset along with everything else. Up above in the surface of Xibalba humanity is constantly evolving at extreme pace and being reset just as often for "deviating". These deviations are wiped away and whatever remnants are left get cast into Mictlan below, creating a colony of "imperfect" humanities.
In other words its a microcosm of the pruning phenomenon and an explicit showcase of how it correlates to Darwinian evolution.
anyways Lostbelt 7 Rewrite Soundtrack for the -2 who care
can i just say as an aside i dont mean these in terms of general vibes I mean i can go over them note by note/line by line explaining how and why I picked that for who :)
Main themes:
Prologue: Rekindled
7.1: Pandora Palace (Khamydrian Lyrics)
7.2: Red Sun (Go Light Up!! Cover)
“Final Act”: Eater of Worlds
Battle themes:
Hell’s Rejection (7.1)
Temperance and Vengeance (7.2)
Za Hando (Requiem) (7.2 Alternative)
Time For Your Medicine (7.1 Alternative)
Operation Pyrite (Lyrical)
Grand Battle themes [Depending on current arc]:
Invasion
[BIG SHOT] (Hobo Habo Remix)
Warlord -> Courage (Requiem)
Broly’s Rage and Sorrow
Various chapter/ambiance BGMs:
Meeting Mictlantecuhtli (Awestruck): Resurrection
Kukulkan’s Past (Flashback): Observatory
So much grief, never enough time (Contemplation): Tooth Paste
A shepherd’s gaze never wanders far (Foreboding): Shipwreck
Even in death, life persists (Community 7.1): Moongrains (Seiiccubus remix)
The Land of Death is ALIVE (Community 7.2): Fractured Shrines
“The Swarm” / Endurance Battle cue: Megalo Strike Back (Rednas Remix)
The End: Is Nigh
Chaldea/NPC themes:
Ritsuka: Dreaming of Me -> Your World Will Fail
Mash:
Need Somebody ->Sweet Dreams are Made of Seven Nation Army
Daybit: Come With Me Now
Bacab: Chirality
Huitzilopochtli: Fading Light
Tzitzimitl: Hailstorm / Sacralize or Strike
Servant themes:
The Harpies: Sirens
Kukulkan: Rekindled
Nagao Kagetora: Can’t Do Enough
Georgios Rider / Saber / Ogun:
Short Change Hero / My Church / Never Alone
Geronimo Caster / Rider: Born for This / Pride
Hassan / Alter: Masks / Stains of Time (Go Light Up!!)
Nitocris Caster / Ruler / Avenger:
Remains / Angel of the Dark / Hunt You Down
Hernan Cortez: Stolen Valor -> Where Is Your God
Baron Samedi: Heathens
Maman Brigitte: Dark Necessities
“Mama Coca” / Mata Hari Alter:
Another Day in Paradise -> Ancient Dreams in a Modern Land
Illapa-Quilla: Another Day in Paradise -> Candy Shop
Cipactli: Save Me Too
Cabrakan: The One Who Knocks
Xbalanque ("Taiga Alter"): Devil In My Soul
Mictlantecuhtli: Sick of Myself/Mourn No More/Ṕ̵̛̼͜u̵̜͔͆̈́l̴͙̥͊̽l̵̡̲̻̊͛ ̶̩̃̀̇Y̸͂̌ͅö̴̢͉̓̕u̵̧̗͠ ̵̰͒D̸̯̹͗o̴̭̟͑͜w̶͖͇̦͒̎͝n̸͗͜
Camazotz: The Poison -> Dark Matter
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hey uh, unrelated question to any of my writings, what's our stance on servants canonically being in love with Guda?
(Hopefully with me this goes without saying, but not in the waifuism way, in the irrevocably shaped by their experiences with the master of chaldea regardless of whether that feeling is reciprocated way)