OK, so I teased questions and then I didn't ask them. Really, once I come out of my lazy "winter break" coma I'll be better. But I wanna start with the big general one, in part because it may end up answering others. Why Winter of Discontent? Why Nick? Why from Weselton? Why internal strife plus Hans .... OK, Hans had to go ... but why internal strife? (I'll pop my popcorn while i wait.)
I really hope this thing doesn’t have a character limit, because this is going to one long answer. But I’ll give you the TL;DR version up front:
It seemed like a good idea at the time.
Ok, now for the real answers.
Why Winter of Discontent?
I was fascinated with Elsa’s character when I first saw Frozen. Fascinated. Here’s a Disney princess with powerful magic! Not a one-trick pony like Rapunzel who gets de-powered at the end of the movie! And she’s a queen, not a princess.
So what happens when you mix intense magical power with a lot of political power, and you give all of that to a person whose #1 desire is not to hurt anyone?
That was the seed of the idea. What is Elsa going to do when she has to face opposition, to face her own people not being happy with her? How is she going to react when people are trying to hurt her? We’ve seen how lethal she can be, but we also know how lethal she doesn’t want to be. How is she going to fulfill her responsibilities as a monarch and still be able to sleep at night?
If you’re asking about the title, well, that came last. I swear half the reason I didn’t start posting until I was 12 chapters in is because I couldn’t figure out what to call the dang thing. I don’t remember when or how the idea came to me, but when it did, it just seemed … well … perfect. (And I always like Richard III.)
Why internal strife plus Hans …. OK, Hans had to go … but why internal strife?
I’m answering this one first because the main conflict — internal strife + Hans — came before Nick did in my planning process.
In fact I think it was Hans who came first of all. I like courtroom dramas (show me Law & Order and I will stop flipping through channels), and I wanted to have some fun playing with that genre. I’ve done it before but I can always do it again. So there is the catalyst to the main plot: Hans is sent back from the Southern Isles, and Elsa has to deal with him in a way that is fair and just, while making sure he doesn’t hurt Anna (or anybody else) again.
So that got me to thinking about Hans. He’s a charismatic fellow, and while Elsa was off letting it go and Anna was haring after Elsa, he was the one making sure everyone had enough blankets and hot glogg. Seems to me that the man might have a few fans, especially if everything that happened out on the ice was a bit unclear or ambiguous to the man on the street. Hell, everyone in the Frozen fandom knows what happened out on the ice (and in that locked library), and Hans still has a ton of fans. So some people might be upset with Elsa putting him on trial.
Plus, to be quite blunt, internal strife hurts more. It hits Elsa right in the self-esteem. Also, the way I saw Hans … none of what he did was really all that personal. He attacked Arendelle, Anna, and Elsa because they were convenient. When it comes to Roahl, Knut, and the rest of the rebels, everything they did to Elsa was quite, quite personal.
However, I wanted to give the rebels another impetus, plus give the opportunity to show fault lines and divisions among them. That led to Weselton. As much as we (ok, I) cheered when that nasty Duke got kicked right in the wallet, realistically, cutting off trade with your biggest trading partner is going to have repercussions on your economy. In my story I had Elsa call on her closest allies (Corona & Andalasia) to try to make up the deficit, but there’s only so much she can do in 6 months. People are going to get hurt, and those people might be angry — especially since they can lay virtually all of the blame for their situation at Elsa’s feet.
Mix those things together, and you get one hell of a winter of discontent.
Why Nick? Why from Weselton?
I gave Elsa a love interest because I’m a hopeless romantic. As much as I like the fact that she remains unattached (and perhaps not interested in romance at the moment) in the movie, this was my fanfiction and I like love interests so I gave her a love interest. Plus, I think having Nick around gave Elsa a much-needed confidence boost. By virtue of his position, he was able to get Elsa to believe things that she wouldn’t have necessarily believed coming from someone else.
As for “why from Weselton,” well, first I decided that Elsa should have a love interest. When the plot was more Hans-centric, I thought maybe the love interest should be one of his brothers. He’s only got 12 of them. But I was reading fanfiction as I was developing Winter, and I realized that quite a few other writers had done the Elsa + Hans’s brother thing. I wanted to do something a bit different, so I went in the other direction.
Nick was basically designed from the ground up to be a good love interest for Elsa. Elsa has had to deal with a lot of people fearing her powers, so I decided to make Nick fascinated by and curious about them. Giving him scientific interests went hand-in-hand with that. I also created his background in a way that would somewhat mirror Elsa’s, though Nick’s background ended up shaping and affecting him in a way that is very, very different than how Elsa’s background worked out for her.
But of course, once I got the idea of him, Nick did begin to take on a life of his own. :)