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For those who have been following my blog, you know that I am documenting my journey to publish my YA novel, Midas and the Golden Child. I am currently querying agents for representation. I have submitted my query letter to my critique buddies on critiquecircle.com as well as receiving advice from family. I thought I would share some of the advice I have received from these groups as well as online articles related to the topic. 

From Family: Looks good. I’d read it. (Level of helpfulness: 0)

From Writing Resources: Looks OK. Unfortunately, you need it to be remarkable (whatever that means).  It’s too long It’s too short There’s not enough plot mentioned Try to get to the point of the plot quicker.  Reword it like this:  No, no, that’s not good, reword it like this instead.  Don’t put hanging questions. State the goal of your characters instead. Example online: full of hanging questions.  Be quirky and witty Be straightforward and to the point

A couple replies from agents:  Looks interesting, unfortunately, it’s not quite what I’m looking for on my list. Strong project, unfortunately, I don’t have any contacts for a project quite like this.

Warning: Potential seizure trigger like whoa, sexual imagery, spoilers

Title: HAPPY NEW YEAR 2019 / DECADE OF POP 2008 - 2018 MEP

Editors: Brenda Hikaru, SconesNWaffles, griffigroff, Chaiberry, nmojan99, xBitterSweetful, SweetJiJiSama, Kamideres, Domi., RandomlySimple, SoshiChan185, Nagihikoxfan77, SconesNWaffles, HiikaryLi, iMeganeSara, MelanieMurderous, LuvParkJungMin, DinAniC, Ye Mi, Orbitchx, RawLust, dottedtaylor, lllmariale1026lll , xTanikoYumi, AsamVenko, bishani

Studio: MadDesiresStudio

Song:  DECADE OF POP: The Megamix (2008-2018)

Artist: Adamusic

Anime: “Kiss Him, Not Me!”, Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun, Free!, Yuri!!! on Ice, Bloom Into You, Chuunibyou demo koi ga Shitai!, Hibike! Euphonium, Kyoukai no Kanata, Noragami, Yamada-kun to 7-nin no Majo, Kamisama Hajimemashita, Osomatsu-san, Darling in the FranXX, Kill la Kill, ME!ME!ME! (music video), One Punch Man, Monogatari series, Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon?, Miss Kobayashi’s Dragon Maid, Love Live! Sunshine!!, Boku no Hero Academia, B-Project, Little Witch Academia, Sora no Otoshimono, Koe no Katachi (film), Mekakucity Actors, K-On!, Inu X Boku SS, Shigatsu wa Kimi no uso, Mahoutsukai no Yome, Gatchaman Crowds, Fate/Stay Night, Denpa Onna to Seishun Otoko, The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya, Violet Evergarden, Ef - A Tale of ???, Tamako Market, Steins;Gate 0, Kimi no na wa (film), Shingeki no Kyojin, Junjou Romantica, DRAMAtical Murder, Love Live! School Idol Project, Ouran High School Host Club, Ore Monogatari, Haikyuu!!, Diamond no Ace, and quite a few unknown anime

What blizzard should have done

I know they just gave us another list of buffs for sombra but it just isn’t good enough since you’re still slow in stealth mode, stealth is still infinite and people can still destroy your translocator which btw has only 5 health and turrets of ANY kind will destroy it, JUNKRATS trap has more hp than that... a getaway object that doesn’t harm the enemy team has LESS HP than a stupid bear trap that does damage to enemies, sighhhh

Anyways here’s some stuff I didn’t mention in the post that they should also add or change, keep the ability to destroy your own translocator, enemies shouldn’t be able to destroy it, using emp will automatically reload your weapon, or maybe even a successful hack too. Emp reveals HACKED enemies through walls