#darktale

Yeah it risked being abandoned forever💔

⊹ ࣪ ˖ (Oh boyy...here we go.)

In DarkTale, Chara falls into the underground, and like in the original, they tries to free the monsters with Asriel. But as a result, Chara and Asriel dies. But in this Au, Toriel stayed with Asgore instead of leaving, and she herself started to hate humans, albeit unwillingly. She didn't hate Chara. But she still didn't trust humans. As a result, after these things happend, the king and queen started to implement a plan to kill every human who fell into the underground and try to break the barrier, which was their last hope, by taking their souls. For this, they assigned Undyne to train some monsters that could fight and were strong enough. Some boss monsters such as Muffet, Soul, Papyrus also received training and become parts of the royal guard. But in this Au, Frisk doesn't fall into the underground. Zoe, who plays the role of Frisk, falls instead. Zoe has been after her brother, who fell into the underground for a long time. But the problem was that her brother has already been killed by monsters and his soul were taken. It didn't take long for Zoe to learn this. And after learning, she started to hold a grudge against the monsters who tried to kill her from the moment she arrived, and now that she has learned that they killed her brother, she decides to make a genocide to take revenge for every human who has fallen into the underground until now. When Zoe, who has killed many monsters despite the difficulties, doesn't gives up and comes face to face with Soul, Soul of course fights with Zoe without hesitation. But during the battle, Chara suddenly appears. Of course, if they could be called "Chara" anymore... Somehow something has brought Chara's glitchy and broken form back to life, and made them to attack Zoe and Soul. With the appearance of Chara, the last corridor they are in begins to glitch. While Zoe hides behind a pillar, Soul, although confused, fights Chara by staying as far away from them as possible. But Chara continues to attack Soul without stopping. Realizing that things are going wrong, Zoe decides to reset. But at the exact moment Zoe used the reset button, Chara made a critical move on Soul, dropping her HP to zero, as one of Soul's bone attacks pierced Chara's head. With lots of things happening at the same time, and the fact that the Au's system was already on the verge of collapse, the entire Au collapses, turning into a completely corrupted Void.

(Basically Chara and Asriel dies, Toriel and Asgore decides to take the souls of any human who falls to underground. Undyne trains lots of monsters. Instead of Frisk, Zoe falls to underground. Zoe looks for her brother but then notices monsters has already killed him. She gets mad and goes to "hell na im beating yo guys' asses." mode and starts a genocide. She lastly goes to last corridors to fight with Soul there. Somehow something revives Chara, or lets call a f*cked up and corrupted version of them, and they attack to Zoe and Soul. Zoe hides and Soul fights with Chara. Zoe then decides to reset. But as she's about to do it, Chara kills Soul and Soul kills Chara. Au's codes were already getting too damaged and glitched. So with that reset, it just completely brokes down and turns to a damn void.)

[EDIT]

I think i kinda forgot to add this part, but anyways. I don't wanna deal with editing the things i write. So i'll write it here instead. Normally Zoe shouldn't have been falled to underground. Normally Frisk needed the be the one who's falling. How did this happend? Well, a strange virus, or parasite, somehow got into the code void and started to corrupt the whole codes and etc. in DarkTale. Which caused the main storyline to change, and made Zoe the one who falled to underground. During the whole genocide thing happening, that THING messed up most of the codes. That's why the last corridoor started to glitch and Chara somehow appeared. Everything was already starting to get messy. And with Zoe using that reset button, it caused the whole Au to collapse since it was already weakened. The reset and erase button got broken and the whole Au turned to a dead soul magnet. Now, it's just getting all the dead people's souls around the whole multiverse in itself and keeping them there. Does all the souls goes there? Yes. They do. But doesn't the soul's of dead people dissappear or something? How do they go there? Well, somehow something copies that soul's and brings them there. So the souls in Forgotten Graveyard isn't actually the orjinal souls of the dead people? No. It's not. It's just a copy version of it. But for what? To feed something. So basically lets say there's a dead person, before that person dies and their soul dissappears or whatever, something copies their soul. After the original soul dissappears, the copy one gots sended to Forgotten Graveyard. (I hope i explained it well-) That damn place isn't avaliable to enter anymore since it's dangerous. But some spesific people can still enter there and might leave someone in there to let the dead corrupted souls torture them or just make that person go crazy there.

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–> After the collapsing

After the Au collapsed, the only person who managed to survive in the void was Soul. The codes of the other monsters have either been deleted or corrupted, and their souls were trapped in the void, which has now become the Forgotten Graveyard. The souls of the humans were already been consumed. The souls of the monsters were continuing to be consumed. The upper parts of the void, which can be called the ceiling, are full of black glitches. The void is completely white. And no matter which way you go, you always end up back where you started. In the void, there is souls of the monsters who is suffering. Every newly dead soul gets sended to there and gets caught in its trap, and becomes its source of food. Soul has been in the void for exactly 5 years. Or rather, Soul thinks that's all. It is very possible to lose track of time in that void. The Forgotten Graveyard has become a place that is impossible to exit once entered. Only some spesific people can open a portal there. Otherwise, portals and teleportation abilities will not work at all. Spending more than a few days there is dangerous in terms of mentally, emotionally and physical aspects. If more than 1 year is spent in that void, disorders in the soul will begin to become apparent. Symptoms such as the soul beating like a heart and sometimes feeling severe pain will begin to become apparent. Please stay away from this place.

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-> Soul's condition

Soul is completely broken. Being in that void affected her in every way. Corruption was the one who brought her out of that cursed place. In return, Soul was forced to join Corruption's team. She doesn't remembers her old self. An corrupted entity that's made from Papyrus's codes keeps haunting her mind. She still can't erase the suffering souls from her mind. She still sees them around. She can still hear their voices of agony. She can still see the faces watching her and pitying her. She knows too much. Way too much.

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In case(💼) if you wanna check the more detailed versions ⬇️

-> Soul(Sans)

-> Papyrus Entity

-> Zoe

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> Idk if i have to make a "If you're wondering" part in this one too. The only thing i wanna add is that; No, Soul can't see that "Papyrus" entity. It just haunts her mind with it's whispers. Other than this, i don't think i have anything else to add. If i remember, then i'll just add here ig-

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About ships –

Soul x Memory – No comment. 🦖🥬🍏🌳🌱🌴📗🔫🧩

Soul x Zoe – Zoe isn't Frisk, and she's an adult. But Zoe hates monsters. She would never date one. And, Soul also would never want to be someone like her. So, no.

Zoe x [Anyone from DarkTale] – She already hates monsters. Soooo, no.

Soul x [Anyone from DarkTale] – Eaguhhhhhh- Idk. Probably no.

[Any other ships that includes other monsters] – THEY'RE DEAD.

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Let’s start with Susie/Suzy!

Susie in this AU is a bit nicer meeting her for the first time, she just threatens you and walks away and during the water fall sequence you will stumble across Susie now and then. During the mad dummy fight she just waits until the dark fountain opens up and runs the opposite direction form it, in the dark world she will follow you around.

Susie’s hair was based on her beta design. Her outfit is inspired by Susie in UT bits and pieces design, but I still used the colours on her original design. (Under her rain jacket she has a striped shirt)

Her dark world form is just like the original one but with some minor changes. I gave Susie sleeves and a hood, gave her a bit bigger pants and only gave her one set of bracelets!

This is Laresi, the Ralsei replacement! Laresi is a parallel of Flowey but still different. First time meeting him would be similar to Flowey but instead it’s genuine kindness, he would make sure Susie and Frisk wouldn’t get into too much trouble but wouldn’t mind fight now and then. Laresi in canon is about tall as Asgore.

The design to this character is based on Flowey (obviously) and the flowers in the dump. The big arms is based on a old Flowey monster design I made that I really liked and reused to Laresi! I was originally going to give him a hood, that’s why he has the cape but I really liked it so I keep it in.

Thanks for reading! Here is the COOL GANG