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Deltarune Month Day 18: Vs Jevil [Prolouge & Act 1] (CollabWing: Revtrosity)

Kris, Ralsei, Susie Voice(s): @lonelyblackwing-kt (me)

Jevil Voice: @revtrosity

(via https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Bw2pma5wC0)

Short CollabWing Comic Dub, so WORTH IT! Comment #FriskyKT if you wanna see the both of us do more short CollabWing comic dubs together.

Art: @itsnojida

Voice Dub:

Chara- @lonelyblackwing-kt (Me) (https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCDbpf3uuFGBvrx7zK0jvnEg)

Asriel- Frisky Beats (https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCx3jzW2FBEXa6JqIlJuapkw)

This was originally was suppose to be a fighting animation, that my sibling wanted to do. They lost motivation to do the animation, but I thought it was a good story. So I decided to just post the story like this. And a little heads up, I’m not writing here on how the fighting sequences go...

So lets start!

It was after the meeting with the other CollabWing Crew members, and since Shiro was unable to attend, Kuro decided to walk around alone outside for a bit before she headed home. She was feeling a bit dizzy anyway, so she needed a change of scenery, unaware Mr. Amazing VA was following behind her and shouting her name.

“You’ve been acting weird today, you okay? I have been calling your name 3 times already. Is something on your mind?”

Still not listening, Amazing decides to take a peak at her face, and she finally turns around. Her eyes looked tired, and looked like she was about to pass out.

“I’m fine Mr. Amazing,” she said finally responding back.

“Are you sure,” Amazing said in concern, “you look like you haven’t slept in days.”

“No need to worry, I just needed a change in pace! You can go home now.”

“Wait-!”

Before he could say anything, she already left. He can tell she was lying, not only by her hesitant tone, but also her desperate rush to leave. This got Amazing even more concerned and decided to go find her. He types a message to his brother SwapDancePapyrus, before looking for her.

“Kuro has been acting strange all day lately, so I’m gonna go look for her. Don’t wait for me.”

Kuro didn’t walk that far, due to the fact she was still dizzy and tired. She looked around and hid in an alleyway. By the time she gets there, her dizziness got a lot worse, causing her to lose consciousness.

She then looked around in the dark grey void of her mind, to meet a shadowy figure, rather familiar to her.

“Why hello again, ‘Kuro’. It’s so nice to see you again, “ the shadow said with a devious grin, “You been trying to stay awake for days, just so you could avoid me.”

“Leave me alone, “ Kuro said looking away.

“At this rate, you’re health won’t last, and you’ll eventually die.”

“I’d rather die, than you taking control of me again, like last time. Because of you, I destroyed Shiro’s voice.”

“How cute, but you’ve weakened yourself to a point where you can’t restrain me anymore. But that’s okay, now you can sleep, and I’ll take over for you. We are one in the same, after all. YOU NEVER HAD A CHOICE!”

Meanwhile, after a whole hour, Amazing was still looking for her. Her creations had no clue where she was, she wasn’t answering her cell, and it was already dark outside.

“Where are you..?”

“Right here.”

Amazing turns his head to the familiar voice, but noticed a knife at near his neck, and hesitates to move. He then tries to look next to him and saw Kuro with an evil grin. He also noticed that her eye color changed from red to amber and green, with her left eye black and dripping with black ooze. She looked and acted differently, making him more confused about what’s going on, than he normally thought he would be.

“K-Kuro? What’s going on,” he finally asked.

“Aw, what’s the matter, “ she said looking at him, “Afraid?”

“If this is one of your crazy pranks, because if it is, it’s not funny!”

“Oh this is not a prank, and I’m gonna enjoy playing with you before going after everyone else.”

Immediately, he realized how serious she was about this. He needed to stop her somehow, or else everyone, even his brother, would be in danger. He had to fight.

“Not happening, “ Amazing said as he managed to get away from her, “I won’t let you.”

[Fighting Sequence 1]

Kuro glares at Amazing, smiles, then laughs, while pointing at him.

“I’m aware that character you’re using isn’t yours, it’s original name is Cotton Candy Sans, am I wrong?”

Amazing looks at Kuro in suspicion, “And what of it?”

“Your not fighting me at full strength, and I want to feel fulfillment when I kill you. So, fight me in your real form, Amazing. Or should I say “Agent Raven”.

He didn’t have much of a choice, since he was already predictable to her already because of his previous fights she witnessed before. It was the only way to even the scores, and he had to weaken her a bit, to even reach that line.

“Fine, but you asked for it.”

[Fighting Sequence 2]

Kuro got Amazing cornered, plus he was almost out of juice, there was no other way out, and Kuro was gonna end the fight. However, Kuro looked at him in curiosity, and realized something was wrong. She felt as if she hasn’t taken a single hit, but instead was more refreshed than in pain.

“I remember getting hit by a few of your attacks, back when you were still that Cotton Candy character. So what’s going on?”

“Heh...looks like I was right, “ he said as he looked at Kuro.

“What are you talking about?”

“I attacked you with my fire multiple times, but they only harm those that I think as my enemy, and heals the people I think are my friends and allies. I knew that deep down, I still thought of you as a friend and knew that the flames would heal you instead, yet decided to use it...”

“If you knew this would happen...WHY WOULD YOU DO IT ANYWAY?!”

Amazing looks down calmly accepting his fate, “Because I don’t wanna hurt any of my friends...even you.”

She suddenly stopped her attack and hesitated, and finally said in a shaky voice.

“I’m...sorry. I’m so sorry...”

Her eye color started to come back as she started crying and returned her weapon.

“Are you okay? You’ve gotten hurt! I-I didn’t mean to! I couldn’t stop! I-I...!

Kuro started to panic, devastated and upset from what she’s done. Amazing looked at her in confusion from the personality switch again, but also relieved that she’s back to her old self.

“H-Hey, I’m okay, “ he said trying to comfort her, “You weren’t yourself, it’s not your fault.”

“If I didn’t come back to my senses, you would have been dead already, you big idiot! If anything were to happen to you or anyone else...I wouldn’t be able to forgive myself!”

“Kuro-.”

“I’m sorry, Mr. Amazing! I’m sorry! I’m-!”

He then walks up to her and embraces her, before giving her a chance to respond.

“Stop apologizing, I’ve already forgiven you okay, “ he said, “And I’m not letting go, until you stop crying.”

Kuro eventually embraces back, as she continuously screams out crying. This lasts for a straight 2 minutes, until she suddenly stops and lets go of him.

“Feeling better now, “ he asked, but gets no response back.

“Kuro? Kuro!”

He then realized she just fell asleep, and calmed himself down. He noticed it was already late, and that everyone is probably worried now.

“Your quite the handful, than you think, but it doesn’t mean I dislike you, Kuro. You are still you, and that’s all that matters...But what was that weird murderous personality change?”

He had more questions than just that, but decides to ask her later about it, right after he takes Kuro to her home first.

He then proceeds to carry her in his arms, as he walks to her place. He then realizes she was still crying, but in her sleep while mumbling to herself.

“...Shiro..”

“Huh, “ looking at her as she mentioned her sibling’s name.

“...I’m scared...She’ll come back...She will...try to kill you...”

Shocked by this fact he starts piece things together, “When Kuro means ‘She’ is she talking about-?

“Promise me...you’ll find a way...to kill the other ‘me’.”

[To be continued, when the next CollabWing Crew Battle happens]

{We might make animatics for the fighting sequences, idk}

Characters Mentioned In The Story

Kuro Tsubasa [Me] ( @lonelyblackwing-kt ) -> [Also the Artist Here]

Mr. Amazing VA/Agent Raven ( @mramazingva )

Shiro Tsubasa ( @collabwing-artist ) -> [Also The Writer Here]

SwapDancePapyrus ( @swapdancepapyrus )

Group: @ask-the-collabwing-crew

(via https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l_WBpmvrVtI)

This is a CollabWIng short comic dub. I don’t own the music, art, Undertale or Frisk & Alphys voice, they all go to there respected owners. I only did Sans’ voice.

Art: @literalnobody

Voices:

Frisk & Alphys- @potato-arts