Was so excited reading your latest chapter! You're very skilled at setting the tone of your scenes and I love how you capture each character's personality. It is a skill I am trying to improve in my own writings. I look forward to all the next chapters to come, no matter how long they may take getting out. You can't rush good storytelling. I understand well that it can take some time.
I have a few questions, but I understand if you don't want to answer them due to possibility of spoilers for your story.
Will y/n ever get to the point where she no longer holds any fear and concern over her safety when it comes to the boys? Judging by your art of them (which is amazing by the way) it seems that she does come to start trusting them. Having a kid with them would definitely require a level of trust. And a knowledge that they are fully culpable beings. Does y/n make it to fully trusting them despite being apex predators or will there always be a part of her that is on guard? Especially around Moon because of his past actions and attitude towards her?
When he starts to catch feelings for y/n will Moon be putting any work and effort himself into gaining her trust and showing that he won't hurt her? Cause as is, that adorable artwork you drew of them cuddling together is definitely not happening soon with how rightfully scared and wary y/n is of him.
What would happen in a situation down the line where their positions are reversed? What if y/n was hurt and in need of being cared for? How would Sun and Moon, and y/n themselves react? How would they feel? What would they do?
Sorry for the long ass post. Got a little carried away and its longer than I expected. Again, I understand if you don't end up answering all or any of the questions. And again, I really enjoy your work and look forward to more!
Hi hon! I’m so glad you like the story so far!
Luckily, all of your questions are actually pretty related and I can say that they all pretty much get addressed in the story at the same time, in a scene I’ve actually already illustrated.
Will she fully trust them and grow past her fear of them as apex predators? Will Moon intentionally work on earning her trust and improving their relationship? What happens if she get’s badly hurt, in such a way that the boys need to be aware and careful of at least? One incident will address all three of these questions, and it’ll be a doozy.
If you look back through the WtTK art tag I’m sure you’ll find the scene, if you want. It’s a big turning point for these three. But basically yes, yes, and you’ll see. In that order ;>
