Fanart of one of my favorite webcomics I am reading right now! My first fictional crush was an elf and they still get me even now!

Made by @christascribbles

Link to comic:

Creator of The Way Beyond! Go read it:

http://thewaybeyond.thecomicseries.com/comics/first/#content-start

If it’s the 1st person view making u suck you can switch to 3rd person. I don’t like 1st view myself. It makes me sick

Yeah- I tried that, but the opening was forced 1st person cause you don’t get to decide what your character looks like till the character gets asked their name after a horrific cart ride of vertigo. By the time I had character creation and COULD go 3rd person, I was way past my limit, and the camera was still shakey AF anyways, and every time the dragon attacked, it made your vision blurry. OMFG what a nightmare to play. I get that it was meant to be scarey, but it was sickening, and I was meant to follow and fight along side a guy that kept changing his damn armour. Holy shit. 

The problem according to the net is that the angle of view is so small or something like that. There’s a patch that makes the angle a wider one so the camera doesn’t move around so much or something. IDK. The mouse is too sensitive too which I think doesn’t help. That may be a Windows 10 thing though. I have no idea. 

you can always make it kind of a mystery “Oh these two are both princesses but he is supposed to be with one of them. Which will it beeee??” that kind of thing.

I had considered that but was worried it’s seem very harem to have two women that he chased but really, he can love two women at once. I guess I’m use to reading stories where there is a love triangle, and the story ends up with one girl winning the guy at the end, but it doesn’t need to be like that. Their story doesn’t need to be a competition to win him over. 

Also consider their personalities. Like personalities wont always get along sometimes completely opposite ones get along best. Same with idealologies and lifestyles. Even time spent together doesn’t always mean romance it could mean a close friendship

Yeah. Pandora and Alex have similar goals with re-writing their family’s legacy, but Pandora attacks with diplomacy and politics, while Alex is with a two handed sword of judgement called Equity XD Pandora has local morals that need help reshaping cause she knows they’re wrong but doesn’t know how to fix them, while Alex has the morals, but a lack of diplomacy to negotiate them. They’re pretty opposite XD

The problem is, that if Athena isn’t the romantic interest, there’s not a huge amount of point in making her a princess born as a peace treaty between two continents. Her position is complicated, and I’m not sure if it adds to the story in a way that’s not just adding content for the sake of it. I guess I can see how it goes making her position work as a friendship only one, and have the two half sisters doing the sister love thing. 

I always felt that If you write something and it feels right even though you wrote it another way originally, It’s best to go with what your gut tells you. It’s the characters telling you where they want to go.

Yeah- that’s what my logic is telling me. I’m wondering if it is the better option though. Admittedly though, as it is right now, Pandora makes a more interesting love interest, but nothing is stopping Athena for becoming one too. Pandora currently works in the background mostly, while Alex is in the field with Athena more. None of this stops a relationship between either of them though I guess. 

Me as a werewolf. I went through a couple of different canines but finally settled on the African Wild Dog because they’re really cool and have giant sticky-out ears like me!